read-think-writeRead-structureHowisthepassageorganizd?flashback(倒叙)3、4、5--1、2--6、7Read-contentWho?How?Where?DevimotherAngelalittlekidslocalswimmingpoolUnderlineDevi'schangesinherfeelingsaboutswimmingconfidentltyinapanicparalyzedwithfearembarrassedupsetafuriousfrownRead-language1.variousadj./adv.2.vividv.confidentltyparalyzedwithfearembarrassedupsetfuriousslippedintoheldontothrewherarmgrab...Think1.WhydidDveithinkitisridiculous?age(littlekidsVS.15)2.Whatkindofnegativefeelingswouldshehave?fearembarrassmentproblem!3.Whatmightbethesolution?Angela'shelpWriteParagraph1ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.
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ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.Shedraggedherfeettothesideofthepoolandsatdown,indoubtwhetherlessonswouldbehelpful.Scanningaround,Devispottedherinstructoracrossthepool,togetherwiththelittlekidswhojumpedintothewaterlikefishleapingintotheocean.Shewatchedinamazement.EnviousasDeviwas,aflushofembarrassmentsooncrepttohercheekswhenalittlegirlpassedby,askinghernottobescared.Howembarrassing!Shehungherhead.(80words)
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SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.DeviwasastonishedtobemadeawarethatAngelahadneverlearnedswimminguntilshewas20.Greatlyinspired,Devinowregainedhope.SheenteredthepoolasecondtimeinthecompanyofAngela,severalcheerfulkidsfloatingneartocheerheron.Devibegantofeelmoreatease,herbreathmoreeven.Withagratefulheart,Devirealizedthatshemightnotbeafearlessswimmer,butshewouldsurehavefuntrying.(81words)
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ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.Sheshuffledtowardsthesideofthepoolandfeltquiteoutofplaceamongalllittlekids.Seizedbyembarrassment,sheevendidn’tdaretoraiseherhead.ButtheregularsplashoflittlekidsleapingintothewateraswellasAngela’ssoftinstructionaltoneattractedhergradually.However,hardlyhadsheliftedherlegswhenaflashoffearcameuponher.Sheunconsciouslysteppedbackandsatbesidethepoolindepression.(76wards)
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SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.ItseemedthatshesawDevithroughandcomfortedherwithherownlearningstory.HearingthatAngeladidn’tpracticeswimminguntil20,Deviblinkedinsurprisebutwasencouragedgreatly.Angelastretchedoutherhand,invitingDevitotryagainwithher.Thistime,followingAngela’sinstruction,Devijumpedintothewater,keptrelaxedandswamafewstrokes.Everythingwentsmoothly.It’snevertoolatetolearnandit’syourfearthatholdsyouback.(77words)
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