2020-2021某大学《英语写作》2期末课程考试试卷A(含答案)

seemstobewithoursociety.2020-2021《英语写作》2期末课程考试试卷APartII.EssayAppreciation(35%)Directions:Readthefollowingessayandanswerthequestions.EverydayCruelty：适用专业：考试时间：Lastweek,Ifoundmyselfworryinglessaboutproblemsofworld号考试时间：120分钟闭卷试卷总分：线politicsandnationalcrimeandmoreaboutsmallerevils.Icamehomeone学100分daywithabadtasteinmymouth,thekindIgetwheneverIwitnessthe(答案请写在答题纸上)littlecrueltiesthatpeopleinflictoneachother.Onthisparticularday,IhadPartI.SummaryWriting(20%):seentoomuchofthecrueltyoftheworld.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Writeasummaryofabout80EverydayIwalkfromthebusstoptotheofficewhereIwork.Thiswords.walkismyfirststepawayfromthecomfortsofhomeandintothetensionsThefirstthingthatstrikesthecriticalminorityasitlooksatthewholeofthecity.Forme,alandmarkontherouteisatinypatchofgroundthatculturalpicture,isthatoursisanationofnew-richpeople,wellwashed,wasoncestrewnwithrubbishandbrokenglass.Thecityistryingtomakea：welldressedupratherpatheticallyunsurejustwhatitisdressedupand"pocketpark"outofitbyplantingtreesandflowers.Everydaythisspring,名washedfor;anationconvincedthatamultitudeofmaterialgoods,Iwatchedtheskinnysaplingsputouttinyleaves.WhenIwalkedpast,I姓standardized,furiouslyandexpensivelyadvertisedbyappealstogreedandalwaysnotedhowbigthetulipsweregettingandmadebetswithmyselfonvanityWillinthemselvesmakelifeworththeliving.Becausewearenew-订whentheywouldbloom.TopasstimeasIwalk,Ioftenrich,weovervaluepossessions.Almostanyindividualwhomakesagreatmakesillylittlebetswithmyself,suchaspredictingthatthenextmanIseedealofmoneyveryrapidlysupposesthatmerepossessionofwealthiswillbewearingabluetie.ButlastWednesday,asIreachedthepark,Ifeltevidenceofworth.Healsoisapttoimaginethatwithhismeanshecanbuysick.Someonehadknockedthetreestothegroundandtrampledthehappiness.Thesemistakesusuallyseemfollytotheold-rich,toonewhobuddingtulipsintothedirt.Someonehaddestroyedabitofbeautyfornowasborntopoverty,whosefatherandmotherwerebredwithit.Suchaonereason.knowsthatmerelybecauseheorhisfriendshaveit,itisnosignthattheyAtlunchtimeonWednesday,Iwitnessedmoremeanness.Alongwith：areworthit,butquitecommonlythecontrary.Hehaslearnedthroughdozensofotherhungry,hurriedpeople,IwaswaitinginlineatMcDonald's.级experiencethatmoneyisnotinitselfveryvaluablestuff.Happiness,whichAlsoinlinewasayoungmotherwithtwotired,impatientchildrenclinging班iswhatallmendesire,cannotbepurchased;itisanillusivesomethingnot业toherlegs.Themotherwastryingtocalmthechildren,butitwasobviousforsale.Theold-richknowthesethingswellenough,butthenew-rich专装thattheirwhiningwasabouttogivewaytofull-fledgedtantrums.Thelinesrarelydiscoverthemuntiltheyhavegrownaccustomedtopossessions.Soitbarelymoved,andthelunchtimetensionwasbuilding.Then,oneofthechildrenbegantocryandscream.Aspeoplestaredangrilyatthehelpless3.Inparagraph3,whichfourtimesignalsdoestheauthorbeginmother,thelittleboy'sbloodcurdlingyellssentenceswith?(Writethefoursignalshere)(5')resoundedthroughtherestaurant.Finally,onemanturnedtoherandsaid,4.Whichsentenceisthethesis?(Writetheopeningwords)(5')"Lady,youshouldn'tbringyourkidstoapublicplaceifyoucan'tcontrol5.Whichmethodoforganizationdoesthewriteruseinthisessay?(5')them."Ayoungwomanchimedinwithanotherpieceofcruelcriticism.TheA.TimeB.Emphaticmotherwasexhaustedandhungry.Someoneinlinecouldhavehelpedher6.The____supportingparagraphofthisessaylacksatopsentence.bykneelingdowntointeractoneyelevelwithoneofthekids.Instead,evenWritethetopicsentenceinyourownwords.(10')thoughmanyofthecustomersintherestaurantwereparentsthemselves,theytreatedherlikeacriminal.PartIII.Writing(45%)Theworstincidentofmean-spiritednessthatIsawthatdayhappenedDirections:Writeanexampleessayofabout250wordsonthefollowingafterIleftwork.AsIwalkedtothebusstop,Iapproachedanoldwomantopic.huddledinadoorway.Shewaswrappedinadirtyblanketandclutchedacheapvinylbagpackedwithherbelongings.Shewasoneofthe"streetBetterEducationforHigherSalary?people"oursocietyleavestofendforthemselves.ApproachingthewomanfromtheoppositedirectionwerethreeteenagerswhowerelaughingandYouaretowriteinthreeparts.talkinginloudvoices.Whentheysawtheoldwoman,theybegantoshoutInthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyourthesisis.cruderemarksather.Then,theydidevenmorecruelthingstotormenther.Inthesecondpart,supportyourthesiswiththreepoints.Thewomanstaredhelplesslyatthem,likeawoundedanimalInthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasurroundedbyhunters.Then,havinghadtheirfun,theteenagerswentonsummary.theirway.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandIhadseenenoughoftheworld'scoldnessthatdayandwantedtoleaveappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofitallbehind.Athome,Ihuddledinthewarmthofmyfamily.Iwonderedmarks.whyweallcontributetothesupplyofpettycruelty.There'senoughofitalready.1.Whichsentenceinparagraph2shouldbeomittedintheinterestofparagraphunity?(Writetheopeningwords)(5')2.Whichsentenceinparagraph4needstobefollowedbymoresupportingdetails?(Writetheopeningwords)(5')写作技巧（Skills）；（Writingskills）2020-2021《英语写作》2期末课程考试试卷A答案1.扣分显示也主要表现在以下四个方面：语言（L）：35%PartI写作技巧（S）：40%Oursisanationofnew-richpeople.Thepeople内容（C）：25%thinkthatalotofmaterialgoodswillmakethe2.批阅统一标识：lifeworthliving.Onlythenew-richpeople错误一律用线标出，较严重的语言错误用波浪线标出，每条波浪线believethatrichescanbuyhappiness.Theold-表示扣1分；一般性的语言错误用直线标出，每条直线表示扣0.5richbytheirexperienceknowbetter.Borninrichestheydonotbelievethatrichesmakethem分。worthy.Sothenew-richmakethemistakeofbelievingpossessionsmaketheworthoftheownerandtheyrarelydiscoverthemuntiltheyhavegrownaccustomedtopossessions.PartＩＩ１．Topasstime２．Thentheydideven３．Atlunchtimethenasfinally４．Onthisparticularday５．A６．First,ThefirstsmallcrueltyIsawoccurredonmywaytowork.”PartIII(略）英文写作成绩的判定主要从以下三个方面：内容（Content）；（focusonideas）语言（Language）；（focusonverbtenses,diction,spelling）