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新颖独特的题目新颖独特的题目 新颖独特的题目,高深的立意(丰富的思想感情),典型的写作素材,精巧的构思,是学生写好作文的前提,但要真正将所积累的写作素材,内心深处丰富的思想感情转化为一篇优美的作文,还必须借助文字这个载体。语言文字是人们重要的交通工具,一个人好的理念,借助文字更容易传播,一篇作文,尤其是应试作文,如果语言亮丽生辉,也就更能夺人眼球,获得高分。 那么,什么样的语言才算是亮丽生辉的,据近几年中考作文的评分标准来看,应该是:活泼的、灵动的、能给人美的享受的、能感人的、具有独特个性的、让人耳目一新的语言。 怎样才能...

新颖独特的题目
新颖独特的题目 新颖独特的题目,高深的立意(丰富的思想感情),典型的写作素材,精巧的构思,是学生写好作文的前提,但要真正将所积累的写作素材,内心深处丰富的思想感情转化为一篇优美的作文,还必须借助文字这个载体。语言文字是人们重要的交通工具,一个人好的理念,借助文字更容易传播,一篇作文,尤其是应试作文,如果语言亮丽生辉,也就更能夺人眼球,获得高分。 那么,什么样的语言才算是亮丽生辉的,据近几年中考作文的评分标准来看,应该是:活泼的、灵动的、能给人美的享受的、能感人的、具有独特个性的、让人耳目一新的语言。 怎样才能使作文语言亮丽生辉呢,这就要求我们必须下苦功学习语言技巧,但也并不是没有规律可循。学习一些语言运用上的技巧,对提高我们的作文质量来说相当有好处的,为你的作文获得高分会助一臂之力。下面介绍几种方法,让你的作文语言亮丽生辉。 一、正确地使用修辞。 排比的运用可以增强文章的气势、突出所要表达的内容;夸张的运用可以强调所要表达的内容;比喻、拟人的运用可使语言显得生动形象、亲切可感,给人一种如诗如画的意境感,等等。在作文中如果能有意识地运用这些修辞,可增强文章的文采,提高文章的魅力,使贫乏、呆板的文字变得生动形象,错落有致。如:我们学过的朱自清的《春》的最后三段,作者通过比喻、拟人、排比的运用,增强了文章的感染力,使文章显得有文采,有气息,有感情,像诗一样优美。 学生在期末检测时写的作文中的片段:“写到这儿,我不禁觉得我们班的每个人都是一朵紫藤萝花,四十六朵紫藤花组成了永远奔腾不息的紫藤萝瀑布,让人看不厌,看不烦,因为每一朵花都充满活力,充满了旺盛的生命力,都是独一无二的。”《一个新集体》 在这段文字中,小作者把每个同学比喻成一朵紫藤萝花。一朵一朵的美丽的紫藤萝花组成了一个美丽的紫藤萝瀑布,生动形象地说明了小作者所在的这个班级每个同学都严格要求自己,从而使这个新集体成了一个团结文明、奋发向上的集体。 二、灵活引用古诗文、名言警句、格言、谚语、俗语等。 名言警句是前人为我们积累下来的、经过验证了的经典中的精华,在作文中恰当地运用可以增强文章的说服力和感染力,从而提高文章的品味,吸引阅卷者的眼球,获得高分。如:“落红不是无情物,化作春泥更护花。这就是所有树叶的命,它们为了来年的生长、为了下一代,肝脑涂地。人生又何尝不是这样,一些人总是叹息着命运对自己如何不公,结果把时间白白地浪费在这徒劳的怨天尤人中,一生碌碌无为。树叶无法改变自己的命运,人总是可以改变自己的命运的吧,何不把有限的精力花在自己的身上,来奉献社会、创造更加美好的生活,一片树叶带给我如此大的启示,看来偶尔当一回另类,也并不是没有好处,但愿聪明的你能明白,这也是课堂~”《这也是课堂》 在这段话中作者通过引用名言说明人应该学会思考自己,学会奉献,给我们留下了深深的印象。 professional engineer 1, each equipped with the professional technician 1, 2 technicians, carry out their duties. By the Resident Engineer of the conservation section chiefs and marketing grasp work and coordination. Six and lawn maintenance, planting is completed, often with a 1-2 lawn maintenance can grow into the fullness of the week. After the lawn grow, but also to carry out regular maintenance and management, to ensure the lawn landscape continues for a long time. Lawn maintenance management including: irrigation, fertilization, pruning, weeding and other links. 1, irrigate irrigation lawn fertility environments can be improved, adding water plant the lawn, is a guarantee of normal lawn. In view of the lawn during the growth season, lawn and the environment is in a State of flux, coordination of water and soil and improving the microclimate of the Center, water cannot be implemented according to a fixed pattern, following a number of technical points for reference. (1) the irrigation time growing season, according to the different periods of precipitation is extremely important and timely irrigation of different grass species. Can generally be divided into three periods: ? turned green before the rainy season. High temperatures during this period, transpiration, water requirements, and is one of the most crucial irrigation under soil water retention properties of strength and rainy periods during which Bush 2-4. ? largely ceased during the rainy season irrigation. Air humidity during this period, grass transpiration decreased soil moisture content has increased to a level sufficient to meet the needs of lawn growth. ? to yellowing of the leaf after this period before the rainy season precipitation, evaporation is greater, 三、巧妙地借用词语。 恰到好处地运用有趣味的、文雅的、具有特殊意义的别称、新词,可以使文章的语言充满趣味,让人耳目一新。如:“大学生”,这是我们给新来的地理老师所取的绰号。这位地理老师特别可爱,常常和我们在一起打闹,根本不像是个老师,倒像是个学生,他很尊重我们,我们也尊重他,我们在一起学习感受到了无穷的快乐。《一个新集体》 “严老师”,这是生物老师的响名儿。生物老师很严厉,一丝不苟,让人看见就退避三舍,胆战心惊,但后来我们就适应了她的教学方法,懂得了有时她批评我们也是恨铁不成钢的做法,她是为我们好。后来,师生间加强了沟通交流,我们也理解她了,师生间配合得很默契。《一个新集体》 “小老师”,这是我们班的得力班干部。她鼻梁上架着一副眼镜儿,是一个十足的学者派头。班上的每个同学都被她管得服服帖帖的,她像一个老师模样儿,就被我们冠之其名儿。《一个新集体》 在这三段文字中,小作者使用别称,写出了刚毕业参加工作的老师的性格特点,老教师的特点,班干部的严厉作风,但文章语言并不呆板,反而显得生动活泼,妙趣横生。 四、巧妙地添枝加叶。 正确地使用修饰语、限制词,可以使单调、枯燥的语言变得血肉丰满,增强活力。如:“又是一个肃杀的寒秋。„„我拖着疲倦的步伐在幽静的小道上行走着。„„凛冽的寒风咆哮着,似乎想把路旁的树连根拔起。电线杆在寒风中瑟瑟发抖,发出呜呜的声音,好恐怖。”《这也是课堂》 在这段话中小作者通过使用定语、状语等附加成分,把秋天的肃杀、寒冷、秋风的威猛情态展现出来了,让本来枯燥无味的语言增强了表现力。再如:我们学过的《从百草园到三味书屋》的第二自然段修饰语、限制词的使用相当典型。 五、灵活地使用四字词语。 四字词语读起来音韵和谐、抑扬顿挫、整齐优美。在作文中灵活地运用,能够增加文章的美感,吸引读者。在此不举例,同学们可以回顾我们学过的相关课文中的句子。 六、灵活地运用各种句式样。 在作文中灵活地运用长短句,可以文章句子显得错落有致,具有一种参差美;对偶句的运用有一种对称美;整句散句的恰当运用有一种整齐美、错落美等。在此不举例,同学们可以回顾我们学过的相关课文中的句子。 七、巧妙地运用各种描写。 在作文中巧妙地运用各种描写,尤其是细腻的心理描写和逼真的细节描写,更能增加文章的professional engineer 1, each equipped with the professional technician 1, 2 technicians, carry out their duties. By the Resident Engineer of the conservation section chiefs and marketing grasp work and coordination. Six and lawn maintenance, planting is completed, often with a 1-2 lawn maintenance can grow into the fullness of the week. After the lawn grow, but also to carry out regular maintenance and management, to ensure the lawn landscape continues for a long time. Lawn maintenance management including: irrigation, fertilization, pruning, weeding and other links. 1, irrigate irrigation lawn fertility environments can be improved, adding water plant the lawn, is a guarantee of normal lawn. In view of the lawn during the growth season, lawn and the environment is in a State of flux, coordination of water and soil and improving the microclimate of the Center, water cannot be implemented according to a fixed pattern, following a number of technical points for reference. (1) the irrigation time growing season, according to the different periods of precipitation is extremely important and timely irrigation of different grass species. Can generally be divided into three periods: ? turned green before the rainy season. High temperatures during this period, transpiration, water requirements, and is one of the most crucial irrigation under soil water retention properties of strength and rainy periods during which Bush 2-4. ? largely ceased during the rainy season irrigation. Air humidity during this period, grass transpiration decreased soil moisture content has increased to a level sufficient to meet the needs of lawn growth. ? to yellowing of the leaf after this period before the rainy season precipitation, evaporation is greater, 形象性和真实感,提高文章的品味,增强文章的吸引力。在此不举例,同学们可以回顾我们学过的相关课文中的句子。 八、锤炼词语,加强表现力。 如动词的锤炼要在词义相近的词语中选择最贴切的一个,善于运用形象鲜明的动词,把静态写成动态,把一般写得传神。请看下面几个句子不同之处理意见:我在春天寻找你美丽的踪影。(我点击整个春天,寻找你美丽的踪影。) 锅底下窜着蓝色的火苗。(蓝色的火苗舔着锅底。)老师一串串清晰的脚印留在弯弯的小路上。(老师一串串清晰的脚印,板书在弯弯的小路上。) 九、借用流行歌曲词,让作文增添亮点。 “十六岁的秘密装满沉沉的书包,十六岁的日历写满长长的思考。” “生活像一团麻,每一根都是苦涩的纱;生活像一杯酒,满满一杯酸甜苦辣。”《说句心理话》 流行歌曲词,可以有以下的作用: (1)作标题 《我的未来不是梦》《常回家看看》 (2)作开头 家,不仅是吃饭睡觉的地方,也应是天伦之乐的作坊。可是我的家,父母闹得不可开交,争吵打骂把我的心搅得冰凉。每当此时,潘美辰的歌《我想有个家》就在我耳畔响起: 我想有个家, 一个不需要华丽的地方, 在我疲倦的时候, 我会想到它。 我想有个家, 一个不需要多大的地方, 在我受惊吓的时候, 我才不会害怕, „„ professional engineer 1, each equipped with the professional technician 1, 2 technicians, carry out their duties. By the Resident Engineer of the conservation section chiefs and marketing grasp work and coordination. Six and lawn maintenance, planting is completed, often with a 1-2 lawn maintenance can grow into the fullness of the week. After the lawn grow, but also to carry out regular maintenance and management, to ensure the lawn landscape continues for a long time. Lawn maintenance management including: irrigation, fertilization, pruning, weeding and other links. 1, irrigate irrigation lawn fertility environments can be improved, adding water plant the lawn, is a guarantee of normal lawn. In view of the lawn during the growth season, lawn and the environment is in a State of flux, coordination of water and soil and improving the microclimate of the Center, water cannot be implemented according to a fixed pattern, following a number of technical points for reference. (1) the irrigation time growing season, according to the different periods of precipitation is extremely important and timely irrigation of different grass species. Can generally be divided into three periods: ? turned green before the rainy season. High temperatures during this period, transpiration, water requirements, and is one of the most crucial irrigation under soil water retention properties of strength and rainy periods during which Bush 2-4. ? largely ceased during the rainy season irrigation. Air humidity during this period, grass transpiration decreased soil moisture content has increased to a level sufficient to meet the needs of lawn growth. ? to yellowing of the leaf after this period before the rainy season precipitation, evaporation is greater, (3)作结尾 “记得整个下午,我们三个人的心,都在蹦跳着,燃烧着,我不由得唱起了罗大佑的《家》: 每一首苍老的诗 写在雨后的玻璃窗前 每一首孤独的歌 为你唱着无心的诺言 给我个温暖的家庭 和一个燃烧的心灵 让我这出门的背影 有个回到了家的心情„„《我的家》 十、变冗繁为精美。 有些同学文章的语言拉拉杂杂,冗长累赘。如:我是男子汉,一定要说话算数~早晨,我也跟寝室里的同学一样,一听铃声就起床。铺床、刷牙、洗脸等等,像惊弓之鸟。晚自习,我也读呀写呀,可怎么也不对味。词汇、语法,还有修辞,我都感到生疏。政治中的一些什么“经济”我越背越乱,还有物理问题,还有很多数学课„„我想,还是打桌球有趣,还有游戏厅、录相厅才精彩~《这就是我》 这段文字基本通顺,但读起来总觉得繁杂乏味,感受不到语言美。请修改。 示例:男子汉说话算数~早自习铃声刚一响,我也成了“惊弓之鸟”;晚自习,我也学着享受“寂寞”。天啦,那些词汇语法修辞怎么那样生疏,那些国民经济 计划 项目进度计划表范例计划下载计划下载计划下载课程教学计划下载 市场经济怎么那么拗口,那些力学电学热学有完没完, 使文章语言亮丽生辉的方法还有很多,在此就不一一列举。需要同学们注意的是,语言技巧的灵活运用要建立在较深的思想基础上,不可生搬硬套,一味地去搬弄技巧。恰当地运用所掌握的语言技巧,可以使你的文章大放光彩,夺人眼球。 professional engineer 1, each equipped with the professional technician 1, 2 technicians, carry out their duties. By the Resident Engineer of the conservation section chiefs and marketing grasp work and coordination. Six and lawn maintenance, planting is completed, often with a 1-2 lawn maintenance can grow into the fullness of the week. After the lawn grow, but also to carry out regular maintenance and management, to ensure the lawn landscape continues for a long time. Lawn maintenance management including: irrigation, fertilization, pruning, weeding and other links. 1, irrigate irrigation lawn fertility environments can be improved, adding water plant the lawn, is a guarantee of normal lawn. In view of the lawn during the growth season, lawn and the environment is in a State of flux, coordination of water and soil and improving the microclimate of the Center, water cannot be implemented according to a fixed pattern, following a number of technical points for reference. (1) the irrigation time growing season, according to the different periods of precipitation is extremely important and timely irrigation of different grass species. Can generally be divided into three periods: ? turned green before the rainy season. High temperatures during this period, transpiration, water requirements, and is one of the most crucial irrigation under soil water retention properties of strength and rainy periods during which Bush 2-4. ? largely ceased during the rainy season irrigation. Air humidity during this period, grass transpiration decreased soil moisture content has increased to a level sufficient to meet the needs of lawn growth. ? to yellowing of the leaf after this period before the rainy season precipitation, evaporation is greater, professional engineer 1, each equipped with the professional technician 1, 2 technicians, carry out their duties. By the Resident Engineer of the conservation section chiefs and marketing grasp work and coordination. Six and lawn maintenance, planting is completed, often with a 1-2 lawn maintenance can grow into the fullness of the week. After the lawn grow, but also to carry out regular maintenance and management, to ensure the lawn landscape continues for a long time. Lawn maintenance management including: irrigation, fertilization, pruning, weeding and other links. 1, irrigate irrigation lawn fertility environments can be improved, adding water plant the lawn, is a guarantee of normal lawn. In view of the lawn during the growth season, lawn and the environment is in a State of flux, coordination of water and soil and improving the microclimate of the Center, water cannot be implemented according to a fixed pattern, following a number of technical points for reference. (1) the irrigation time growing season, according to the different periods of precipitation is extremely important and timely irrigation of different grass species. Can generally be divided into three periods: ? turned green before the rainy season. High temperatures during this period, transpiration, water requirements, and is one of the most crucial irrigation under soil water retention properties of strength and rainy periods during which Bush 2-4. ? largely ceased during the rainy season irrigation. Air humidity during this period, grass transpiration decreased soil moisture content has increased to a level sufficient to meet the needs of lawn growth. ? to yellowing of the leaf after this period before the rainy season precipitation, evaporation is greater,
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