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null考研英语 写作教程杭州新东方学校 罗琼考研英语 写作教程目录目录考研英语写作介绍 议论文反面信息图 议论文正面信息图 应用文 议论文图 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 数据题 考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误 考研英语写作遣词用句升级 练习 飞向蓝天的恐龙练习非连续性文本练习把字句和被字句的转换练习呼风唤雨的世纪练习呼风唤雨的世纪课后练习 考研英语写作介绍考研英语写作介绍小作文 形式: 应用文 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 : 信件为主 分值: 10分 字数要求: 100词左右大作文 形式: 议论文 内容: 看图说话 分值: 20分 字数要求: 160-200词应试写作的三个层次应试写作的三个层次写得出 写得对 写得好 考研英语写作难点考研英语写作难点写作本身难度大, 是驾驭一门语言的最高境界, 属于信息的输出,是逻辑、语法 、词汇 、文化等的综合统一 Controlled Writing 中心难以把握 表达漏洞百出 可读性相当差 中式英语泛滥 考官哭笑不得 表达捉襟见肘 词句鲜有亮点考研英语写作要求考研英语写作要求谋篇： 观点正确 中心突出 结构合理 三段论： 描述图画 加以评论 得出结论 谋句： 正确 多变 关联 谋词： 准确 多变 课程安排 课程安排 总体介绍考研英语写作 讲解议论文反面信息图写作 讲解议论文正面信息图写作 讲解应用文写作 讲解议论文图表数据题写作 考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误 考研英语写作遣词用句升级练习 例文讲解 议论文题目分类 议论文题目分类 反面信息图: 1998 2000 2003 2005 2006 2007 正面信息图: 2001 2002 2004 2008 图表数据题: 1997 1999 nullnullnull考研写作的步骤考研写作的步骤审题 正面？ 反面？图表？ 构思 头脑风暴 行文 三思而落笔 检查 The first draft of anything is SHIT. ---- By Hemmingway 反面信息图的写法反面信息图的写法描述图画 加以评论(探求原因 后果) 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策) 段落结构功能句段落结构功能句描述图画: the picture shows that… Alternatives of ‘show’ 同义替换 demonstrate / display / depict / reveal / present / illustrate / indicate Alternatives of ‘picture’ 同义替换 photo / cartoon / drawing 修饰副词: vividly / clearly 描述图画描述图画The picture illustrates that … As we can see from the photo clearly … As is displayed in the drawing … The cartoon vividly depicts that … 段落结构功能句段落结构功能句加以评论(探求原因 后果): What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China / in our daily life / in the younger generation. 具体讲述 Many factors contribute to / lead to / bring about this problem. The effects could be adverse / serious / negative. 首先 其次 再次首先 其次 再次To begin with / Firstly / First and foremost Secondly / In addition / What is more In the third place / Furthermore / Last but not least段落结构功能句段落结构功能句得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策): As for me / as far as I am concerned / from my view …, I am strongly against … / we should not … A few solutions should be provided to solve the problem. / Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. 2006 2006描述图画描述图画As we can see from the two photos clearly / Beckham / great popularity / crazy fans / enthusiastic / write the name on the face / do the hair style of Beckham in the barber’s / hairdresser’s / hair studio at the cost of RMB300加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in the younger generation. Teenagers pay too much attention on the so-called stars. Many factors contribute to this problem. Individual: curious, naïve and immature / no decent judgment Family and school: focus on academic performance / ignore moral and value education Media: mislead / always cover some star affairs 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. Attention distracted from study, their sole task / go astray 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, we should not worship the stars in such a blind and crazy way. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Individual: learn the virtues from star, such as hardworking Family, school and the media: guide properly / inform that study deserves more time and energy instead of stars 2005 2005描述图画描述图画As is displayed in the drawing / a family football match / difference: no strikers, only 4 goalkeepers guarding 4 goals respectively / no real ball / the old father acting as a ball 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China. The younger generation take the parents as a burden and refuse to take care of them . Many factors contribute to this problem. The elderly: poor and sick / cannot make their own living / rely on the children The children: busy with career or making a fortune / lose the basic moral and conscience加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. Individual: the old men may end their life in a pain and sorrow Society: the traditional virtues may be lost 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, such a behavior should be criticized and condemned. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem of old men. Individual: shoulder the responsibility to take care the elderly Government: set up a sound elderly-care system / cover more pension and medical care expenses 2000 2000描述图画描述图画The drawing vividly depicts the shocking difference in fishing between 1900 and 1995 / in 1900, a single fishing boat in the ocean / numerous fish / in 1995, totally opposite / the crowded fishing boats in the ocean while only one fish in it加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon worldwide. Human activity has a disastrous impact on the nature and lead to species extinction. Many factors contribute to this problem. Individual: for the sake of economic profit / businessmen pursue their sole aim at any cost Government: loose supervision on the environment and ecosystem加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. Resources are on the decline / ecosystem imbalance / even breakdown / human cannot survive on this planet 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, environment protection should be in top priority. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem of old men. Individual: environmentally-friendly behavior / pay much more attention to environment protection / popularize and upgrade the awareness Government: enact more rigid laws and regulations / for example / ban on the fishing during some periods of the yearnull描述图画描述图画The drawing vividly depicts the puzzle of the earth / in a white plastic bag carried by a woman / struggling to have a breath 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China. Pollution has a disastrous impact on the nature. Many factors contribute to this problem. Individual: for the sake convenience / the disposable and non-degradable plastic bags are widely used / businessmen pursue profit, their sole aim, at any cost Government: loose supervision on the environment and pollution加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. With increasing pollution / clean water and fresh air are no longer available / ecosystem imbalance / even breakdown / human cannot survive on this planet 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, environment protection should be in top priority. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Individual: environmentally-friendly behavior / pay much more attention to environment protection / popularize and upgrade the awareness Government: enact more rigid laws and regulations / for example / ban on free supply of plastic bags in department stores and supermarkets null描述图画描述图画As we can see from the cartoon / a man is focusing on the little bean, named ‘economic profit’, while ignoring the big watermelon, with its name ‘environment protection’加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China. We do not pay adequate attention on the environment. Many factors contribute to this problem. Individual: for the sake of economic profit / businessmen pursue their sole aim at any cost Government: loose supervision on the environment and ecosystem加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. With increasing negligence on the environment, pollution could be extremely serious / clean water and fresh air are no longer available / ecosystem imbalance / even breakdown / human cannot survive on this planet 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, environment protection should be in top priority. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Individual: environmentally-friendly behavior / pay much more attention to environment protection / popularize and upgrade the awareness Government: enact more rigid laws and regulations / for example / severe punishment on the factories which pollute the air by emitting waste gas, some of which is even poisonousnull描述图画描述图画The drawing vividly depicts the puzzle of the farmers who have lost their cropland / sitting there with mushrooms on the farming tools / wondering what can the later generations live on加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China. The amount of farmland keeps declining these years. Many factors contribute to this problem. Individual: for the sake of economic profit / businessmen pursue their sole aim at any cost / a great deal of farmland is occupied to build some advanced facilities, such as housing, museums, and theaters. Government: loose supervision on it / ignore land loss加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. With decreasing farmland, crop output would drop, and the food price may go up / it is possible that the whole world will fall in the crisis of food shortage / pose a potential threat to the world peace / trigger conflict or even war 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, cropland conservation should be in top priority. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem of land loss. Individual: popularize and upgrade the awareness / farmland is of vital importance to our survival on the planet Government: enact more rigid laws and regulations / for example / severe punishment on housing which occupies the original landnull描述图画描述图画The drawing vividly depicts that children are under great pressure / almost buried by the reference books / with only one hand could be seen 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China. Children always have too much work to do due to the pressure of competition. Many factors contribute to this problem. Family: focus on academic performance School: exam-oriented / improper education system / judge the student by one exam only / beyond textbooks / the students resort to the reference books 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. To children, it is both physically and mentally harmful / in depression / lack of interpersonal communication 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, children should have a happy and free childhood, without so much pressure from family and school. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Family & school: concentrate on the all-around development / instead of the grades of exam null描述图画描述图画The drawing vividly depicts that children are under great pressure / in order to win at the starting line / they are ready to run painfully / covered by heavy books null描述图画描述图画As we can see from the picture / a boy is leading a sedentary life / in the snail-like room with computer and mobile phone / pay RMB5 for the food delivery 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in the younger generation. Some young men trap themselves and do not want to step out the room. Many factors contribute to this problem. Individual: too lazy to get involved in activities outside the room / avoid the competition and pressure Family, school and society: impose too much pressure on the young adults加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. To the young men, it is both physically and mentally harmful / in depression / lack of interpersonal communication 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, I am strongly against such a behavior. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Individual: be open-minded / be active in campus and social activities / have more face-to-face communication Family & school: organize some interesting activities and encourage them to participate innull描述图画描述图画As we can see from the picture / in the ticket office / sold out / by contrast / in the black market nearby / the ticket dealer holding many for sale / the customers rushing to him / eager to buy one at a higher price 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China, especially during Spring Festival for a train ticket . The dealers can always get many tickets in an illegal way, while most customers cannot get one in the ticket office. Many factors contribute to this problem. Government: loose supervision on ticket distribution / even corruption加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. Individual: the consumers have to bear the extra expenses / a robbery on the migrant workers Society: social order and equality are ruined 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, I am strongly against such a behavior. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Government: enact more rigid laws and regulations / for example / severe punishment on black market dealing null描述图画描述图画As we can see from the picture / four people in a coach on a happy tour / the wheels are labeled ‘public funds’ 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China. Some government officials go traveling with public money in the name of ‘inspection, investigation or research’. Many factors contribute to this problem. Government: loose supervision / making the funds, mainly taxation, easily available加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. Individual: the taxpayers have to bear the costs Society: social order and equality are ruined 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As for me, I am strongly against such a behavior. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Government: enact more rigid laws and regulations / severe punishment on tour with public funds 2007 2007描述图画描述图画As we can see from the cartoon / kicker / ready to shoot / the keeper / guards the goal / the keeper supposes himself to be a dwarf or a tiny one / while the kicker considers him as a giant or Titan / covers the whole goal 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in our daily life. Some of us may lack confidence. Underestimate the own capability while overestimate the difficulty or challenge 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. The lack of confidence usually leads to failure. For example: In the long-distance running / some players may consider the destination unreachable / stop in the halfway In the preparation of graduate entrance exam / some students would take it as long and tough experience / quit in the midway 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As far as I am concerned, confidence is of vital importance. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to improve confidence. Setting up an achievable aim / the confidence would come back if the task is not so demanding, such as memorizing 50 words a day instead of 500 Cheering for tiny success / once 50 words are memorized each day, remind ourselves: ‘I can do it.’ 2003 2003描述图画描述图画As we can see from the cartoon / the flower blossoms well in a green house / resist the rain and storm / in comparison / once removed / could not withstand any more / wither soon 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in our daily life. The comfortable environment may easily lead to failure in the difficulty and plight 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse. For example: Individual: a child over-protected by parents cannot survive in the cut-throat competition Government: an industry surrounded by national preferential policy cannot compete with foreign rivals worldwide 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As far as I am concerned, in order to grow, almost everything has to be put in the tough environment. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Individual: children should be faced with difficulties and have some experience such as doing the cooking, housework and laundry all by themselves Government: encourage the enterprises to expand, go global and get involved in business worldwide 1998 1998描述图画描述图画As is displayed in the drawing / a hen is making her commitment / claiming round and complete eggs 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in our daily life. It is ridiculous to have promise in all walks of life. The businessmen impress the customer by exaggerating the responsibility they should take, such as refundable system. The banks emphasize smile service. The government authorities claim to examine and approve within several days. 加以评论(探求原因 后果)加以评论(探求原因 后果)The effects could be adverse / it is the responsibility of the stores, banks and government authorities to provide decent service / these commitments seem to exceed what they should offer / customers and citizens may be honored and flattered / in fact / their status declines 得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)得出结论(表明反对态度 提出对策)As far as I am concerned, we do not need these superficial words but the improvement in all aspects to meet the demand of us. Now I would like to present some countermeasures to deal with the problem. Individual: do not take these ridiculous commitments as the bonus from the businessmen and government Government: enact more rigid laws and regulations to prevent these promises and behaviors正面信息图的写法正面信息图的写法描述图画 加以评论(探求结果 从小到大 分别有那些好处 举例说明) 得出结论(表明支持态度 展望未来)段落结构功能句段落结构功能句加以评论(探求结果 举例说明): What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China / in our daily life / in the younger generation. 具体讲述 It brings many benefits / it leads to a sound situation段落结构功能句段落结构功能句得出结论(表明支持态度 展望未来): As for me / as far as I am concerned / from my view …, I strongly support … / I totally agree with … In the near / foreseeable future, more … should be expected.null 2008描述图画描述图画As we can see from the picture / 2 one-legged men / drop their walking sticks / rely on each other / go forward shoulder by shoulder 加以评论(探求结果 举例说明)加以评论(探求结果 举例说明)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in China. We always can see some kinds of cooperation. It leads to a win-win situation. For example Individual: facing a disaster, we have to help each other / the recent earthquake was a perfect case to demonstrate it Government: international issues like web crime, terrorism and global warming could only be solved by worldwide cooperation 得出结论(表明支持态度 展望未来)得出结论(表明支持态度 展望未来)As for me, I strongly support such a behavior. In the near future, more collaboration should be expected, both nationally and internationally. 2004 2004描述图画描述图画As we can see from the picture / a player is reaching the finishing line, sweating / meanwhile / it is a new starting line加以评论(探求结果 举例说明)加以评论(探求结果 举例说明)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in our daily life. Life is like a non-stop race, we have to keep moving forward. It brings many benefits. For example Individual: take us for example / soon we will finish our undergraduate course study / may be an end / we are pursuing the further degree / after that / a higher degree or start a career Government: Beijing’s successful bid for the Olympic Games in 2001 was not an end, but a brand new start / we still have a long way to go to hold a perfect game / to demonstrate the charm of China and the Olympics 得出结论(表明支持态度 展望未来)得出结论(表明支持态度 展望未来)As for me, we should not confine ourselves in the achievement In the near future / a further outlook / expect a new beginning 2002 2002描述图画描述图画As we can see from the picture / a pretty American girl is smiling in traditional Chinese costume with necklaces and earrings加以评论(探求结果 举例说明)加以评论(探求结果 举例说明)What the picture reflects may be a common phenomenon in our daily life. Cultural communication is enjoying its great popularity. It brings many benefits. For example Individual: bask