提纲是只给了两点,需要我们写出三段这样段落安排就有一定的自我选择了: 我们可以:第一段:背景和危害第二段:解决第三段:展望 这样第二段就是重点 还可以: 第一段:背景第二段:危害第三段:解决和展望 这样第三段就是重点了。 这样的写法都可以以前我们习惯了第一种写法我给同学们写一个第二种写法。 来吧第一段: 第一句引入论题: Recentlytheissueofhowshouldparentshelpchildrentobeindependenthasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic. 第二第三句背景介绍。 Theonlychildpolicyhasbroughtalotofpressureforbothparentsandchildrenduringthepastdecades.Quitealotofparentshavedonealmosteverythingfortheirchildrenforthesakeoflove. 第一段结束: Recentlytheissueofhowshouldparentshelpchildrentobeindependenthasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.Theonlychildpolicyhasbroughtalotofpressureforbothparentsandchildrenduringthepastdecades.Quitealotofparentshavedonealmosteverythingfortheirchildrenforthesakeoflove. 第二段说后果: Itisdifficultforthesekidstodevelopandcultivatetheircharacterandtobeindependentwiththeirparent’sso-calledlove. 再加一句: Theycannotsurvivethefuturefiercecompetitionowingtothelackofindependence. 第二段结束: Itisdifficultforthesekidstodevelopandcultivatetheircharacterandtobeindependentwiththeirparent’sso-calledlove.Theycannotsurvivethefuturefiercecompetitionowingtothelackofindependence. 第三段说如何做: Anumberofsolutionscanbefoundforparentstohelpchildrentobeindependent,withthefollowingonesbeingforemost.Firstly,parentsshouldoffertheirchildrenmoreopportunitiestocomeintofrequentcontactwiththesocietyandformtheirownpictureaboutthisworld.Secondly,playingandcommunicatingwiththeirpeersshouldbefavoredbytheirparentsbecausetheseactivitiescandevelopchildren’sinterpersonalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets.What’smore,financialburden,psychologicalburdenandevenmoderateanxietycanmakechildrenmorefortitudeandmaturewhenconfrontingthedifficulties. 完整的文章可以是这样的: Recentlytheissueofhowshouldparentshelpchildrentobeindependenthasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.Theonlychildpolicyhasbroughtalotofpressureforbothparentsandchildrenduringthepastdecades.Quitealotofparentshavedonealmosteverythingfortheirchildrenforthesakeoflove. Itisdifficultforthesekidstodevelopandcultivatetheircharacterandtobeindependentwiththeirparent’sso-calledlove.Theycannotsurvivethefuturefiercecompetitionowingtothelackofindependence. Anumberofsolutionscanbefoundforparentstohelpchildrentobeindependent,withthefollowingonesbeingforemost.Firstly,parentsshouldoffertheirchildrenmoreopportunitiestocomeintofrequentcontactwiththesocietyandformtheirownpictureaboutthisworld.Secondly,playingandcommunicatingwiththeirpeersshouldbefavoredbytheirparentsbecausetheseactivitiescandevelopchildren’sinterpersonalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets.What’smore,financialburden,psychologicalburdenandevenmoderateanxietycanmakechildrenmorefortitudeandmaturewhenconfrontingthedifficulties.Onlyinthiswaycanourfuturegenerationshouldertheirresponsibility.
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