刘洪波写作15句

刘洪波写作15句 篇一:5. 刘洪波范文 JOHNSON 品牌课程系列 (Based on Harvey) 1)Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 写作提纲: 观点:每个人都能起作用。 原因1:环境问题是长期人类活动导致的。 原因2:个人能影响政府和公司的决定。E.g:如果人人 不用一次性纸杯，就不会有公司生产。 MODEL ANSWER However, whether only governments and big firms have preserve our difference. single government or big company can this alone. So, whoever created the in. Moreover, the public’’s policies and company’“no” to 1 plastic shopping bags and paper cups, That is not say and large companies can not positively contribute. Indeed ’s low carbon awareness; green products to change the public’s consuming habits. But they also ’s appreciation and support to bring good results. no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment! Meanwhile, local the macro level. Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation, and the next generation after! (259 word word文档格式规范word作业纸小票打印word模板word简历模板免费word简历 s) JOHNSON 品牌课程系列 (Based on Harvey) 2)Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 写作提纲 观点:人类合理利用动物是正当的。 原因1:自然法则natural law / the law of the jungle 原因2:动物对人类文明贡献大。KFC, McDonald’s, even pets 转折:当然，滥用是不对的。打猎取乐，穿毛皮衣服。 MODEL ANSWER 2 Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned and animal rights. However, whether we should utilize animals for the has caused heated debate recently. In my view, it is acceptable to for the benefit of fishes eat small ones, mankind uses its which is consistent with the ’s and McDonald’ That is that it is always right for people to use animals for whatever purpose. Some people just for fun; others kill rare animals for their expensive furs. Indeed, are not only cruel and unnecessary, but actually against long-term interests of Humans should shoulder their responsibilities of maintaining the diversity of wild In sum, using animals rationally for the benefit of humans is justified; meanwhile, some behaviors that are harmful for both animals and humans have to be prohibited. By doing so, we can ensure that our next generation could also exploit the animal resource. (307 words) JOHNSON 品牌课程系列 (Based on Harvey) 3)The range of technology is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree? 3 写作提纲 观点:不是科技而是社会财富分配不均导致的。 原因1:政府的责任。 原因2:科技缩小贫富差距。举例:利用网站创业。 MODEL ANSWER the rich people’the scapegoat of the issue. For example, Internet has people to become wealthy by setting their own commercial websites. traditional industries, which require a large initial investment and higher Internet is a much better and cheaper platform to make only for individuals, but for nations as well. In the era of the knowledge-based economy, the one who is diligent, smart enough and can capitalize on knowledge and create knowledge will eventually prevail. (305 words) JOHNSON 品牌课程系列 (Based on Harvey) 4)Some people think rich countries should help the poor countries by giving money directly. Others believe that there are other more effective forms of international aids. What’s your opinion? 写作提纲: 观点:穷国最需要技术和人才。 4 原因1:科技是第一生产力 原因2:富国可以帮助穷国培养人才。举例:提供奖学金。 MODEL ANSWER some key areas. Hi-tech products, innovations, and good improve the productivity of we’ can provide scholarship or the students from the poor regions, which some In are some other types of aids rich countries may choose to provide more JOHNSON 品牌课程系列 (Based on Harvey) 5)Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be beneficial to children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 写作提纲 观点:时间过长有害 原因1:身体上。 原因2:心理上。举例:CS MODEL ANSWER Watching TV and playing computer games are two of the most ’s leisure 5 It is obvious that with the rapid development of TV shows and video games are designed so vivid and attractive that it is for kids but even for isolated from the real world. They don’time to socialize, to engage in outdoor activities which are crucial for their Also, their eyesight will be weakened by staring at the screen for too long. on children’ In sum, spending too much time on watching TV and playing video or computer games is definitely harmful for children. And parents should and must take time, regardless of how busy their schedule is, to guide and supervise these important activities. (342 words) 篇二:zlypbo雅_思教父刘洪波:服装类雅思作文高分范文 及点评 、| !_ 一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然 后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记 的事情真的就这么忘记了.. 雅思教父刘洪波:服装类雅思作文高分范文及点评 雅思教父刘洪波2010权威作品 6 《最简化雅思写作》 8月光芒上市 从零开始，单词、词组、句式、思想 完全应对官方四大评分 标准 excel标准偏差excel标准偏差函数exl标准差函数国标检验抽样标准表免费下载红头文件格式标准下载 最新研发最简化15句写作框架模板 涵盖雅思题库各类型高分范文 幽默通俗的语言手把手教出写作高分 中国区前任雅思考官强力推荐 1.流行时尚 In modern society, fashion is becoming more highly valued in people's choice of clothes. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? It seems that in recent years more and more people, especially in urban areas, are dressing more stylishly. Nowadays it is not uncommon to see people walking around in brand name clothes and sunglasses like celebrities. But why is this happening and is it a positive development? The cause of this fashion obsession surely is connected to movies and pop culture. In today’s society, we are constantly seeing images of attractive movies stars and MTV videos with pop icons wearing the most recent styles. To some extent, and perhaps even subconsciously, this affects 7 our own behaviour as we imitate what we see. One on level, being fashionable is quite healthy. It is natural for us to want to look good, because if wcSpeNgBo.COm :刘洪波写作15句)e look good we feel good about ourselves. Especially in today’s world of work and relationships, it’s important to have good self-esteem and be confident. Looking good can help us achieve that. But from another angle, being too fashion-conscious has its problems. Sometimes people end up obsessing about buying the most expensive things and look down upon others who can’t afford them. Such people become superficial and often don’t pay enough attention to the important things in life, like friendship and being a good person. So in the end, each person has to find the right balance regarding how fashionable to be. There is nothing wrong with looking good and feeling good; in fact it’s human. But we must also be sure not to dwell on it so much. (265 words) Harvey点评: 写作线索:首段，引出现象并表态;第二段，问答第一个 问题why;第三段，positive;第四段;negative。末段总结。 8 本文清新自然，没有大道理，很多小常识。比如第三段第二句:It is natural for us to want to look good, because if we look good we feel good about ourselves. 好作文不是高难词汇的堆砌。最简单的词汇也可以直指人心，赢得读者共鸣。 先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用 词汇 stylishly adv.时髦地 celebrity n.名人，名流 obsession n.迷住，迷恋 pop adj.流行的，通俗的 icon n. 偶像，图标 subconsciouslyadv.下意识地 imitate v.模仿 fashionable adj.流行的，时髦的 self-esteem n.自尊 superficialadj.肤浅的 短语 depend on取决于 be connected to 和…有联系 to some extent 某种程度上 from another angle从另一方面看 9 look down upon 瞧不起 pay attention to 关注 dwell on 仔细研究 三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子 ? Nowadays it is not uncommon to see people walking around in brand name clothes and sunglasses like celebrities. ? Personally I feel that whether it’s good or bad depends on the individual’s attitude. Especially in today’s world of work and relationships, it’s important to have good self-esteem and be confident. ? 篇三:雅思教父刘洪波:建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评 雅思教父刘洪波:建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评 雅思教父刘洪波2010权威作品 《最简化雅思写作》 8月光芒上市 从零开始，单词、词组、句式、思想 完全应对官方四大评分标准 最新研发最简化15句写作框架模板 涵盖雅思题库各类型高分范文 幽默通俗的语言手把手教出写作高分 10 中国区前任雅思考官强力推荐 1. 建筑风格 Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged. Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest, especially in terms of architecture. Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture. While traditional architecture should be protected, however, I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward. One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside, they are often not very user-friendly. Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient. Surely this will make those inside them happier. Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad. Consider Beijing during the Olympics, for example. Many foreigners were surprised to see all of the stunning new 11 building designs. In the long run, this will probably attract more business and tourists to the country. Of course, traditional architecture still has its value. Everyone loves visiting famous historical places and admiring architectural styles from throughout history. We should protect and appreciate such places for future generations, but at the same time, we don’t have to live in the past. Ultimately, each city needs to find its own balance between “old” and “new” when it comes to building styles, but modern buildings are for sure a positive thing. After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like. (264 words) Harvey点评: 写作线索:首段，现代建筑必要;第二段，因为现代建筑 的实用性和舒适性; 第三段，代表城市现代化;第四段;让步，传统建筑的价 值。末段总结。 文中第三段的观点不够有力。其实现代建筑的优点直接分 实用性和舒适性两个段落来重点阐述即可。比如实用性，现 12 代化都市人口密度比以前大，摩天大楼skyscraper提高了城市土地的使用效率。 本文末句很有趣味，再仔细读读:After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.(毕竟，如果我们不继续开发新建筑的风格，我们的下一代将不会知道我们这一代的历史是什么样)历史是相对的，对于我们的子孙来说，我们现在的现代化建筑将成为他们眼里的古代建筑。 先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用 词汇 emerge vi.显现出来 architecture n.建筑物 practical adj.实用的 user-friendly adj.用户友好的，方便用户使用的 stunning adj.足以使人晕倒的，极好的 admire v.赞美，钦佩，羡慕 ultimately adv.最后, 短语 in terms of在...方面 move forward前进 13 in the long run从长远看 for sure确实 after all 毕竟 let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事 三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子 ? In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged. ? One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. ? After all, if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like. 14