对比分析类作文
Writing Task 2: Please write a composition on the topic Living alone or Living with
Roommates,You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given
below in Chinese:
, 有人认为大学里应独自生活
, 另一些认为大学里应与别人同住
, 你的看法
对比分析类
第一段 观点或选择A
1)简述要讨论的主
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,引出对其的不同观点1 主题句:提出要讨论的主题,引出两种不或选择when it comes to 主题, there is no 同的观点或选择。
complete agreement among people. 2) Some 2 扩展句一:指出一种观点或选择 people think/ prefer to/ choose 观点A. 3) 观
点A的第一点理由 4) 观点A的第二点理由 3 扩展句二:阐述该观点的第一点理由
4 扩展句三:阐述该观点的第二点理由
第二段 观点或选择 B
5) However, there are many others who think 5 转折引出另一种观点或选择 观点B. 6) In their opinions/ They maintain/ 6 扩展句一:阐述第一点理由 They point out 观点B 的第一点理由. 7)
Besides, 观点B的第二点理由 7 扩展句二:阐述第二点理由
第三段 我的观点或选择
8) As for me, I agree with 我的观点/ Weighing 8 主题句:综合两种观点或选择,
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明我的up these two arguments/ choices, 我的观点. 9) 观点
我的第一点理由. 10) 我的第二点理由. 11) 9 扩展句一:阐述我的第一点理由 Therefore/ To conclude, 作出总结。
10 扩展句二:阐述我的第二点理由
11 结尾句:提出建议或作出展望
基本句式
引出不同观点:
People’s views on…vary from person to person.Some hold that…….However, others believe
that…
Attitudes towards…vary from person to person. There are different opinions among people as to…
对比阐述两种观点或做法:
1. People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more
happiness.
2. However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills
as roundly as possible.
对比阐述某一事物的利弊
1 There is no doubt that…has its drawbacks as well as merits.
2引出危害
These immoral behaviors have brought great bad/negative effects/influence on our society.
3 说明好处
1) Undoubtedly, college students can benefit a lot from….
2) No doubt, it will produce profound/far-reaching/remarkable effect/influence
on people’s life.
表达个人观点
From my point of view, …
As far as I’m concerned, …
As for me,…
Writing Sample
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有人做好事期望得到回报。
2. 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报。
3. 你的观点。
Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?
第一段 观点A 第一段 观点A
?Nowadays, different people hold different ?主题句: 引出对某事物的不同观views about whether or not one should expect a 点
reward when doing a good deed. ?Some people ? 扩展句: 指出一种观点
think that a good deed should be given a certain ? 扩展一:(be agreeable with: 与…reward. ?They say it is agreeable with the rule 吻合)
of fairness. ?Also, rewards can stimulate ? 扩展二“
(stimulate one’s enthusiasm:激发人的people’s enthusiasm to do good deeds.
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第二点 观点B 第二点 观点B
?However, there are many others who take ? 主题句: 转折引出另一种观点
Leifeng as a model and are always ready to help
others without expecting any reward.
?Everyone may be in trouble. Only if you help ? 扩展一
others unselfishly, you can get other’s help when
you need it. ?Besides, they maintain that one ? 扩展二
can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds, which is the best return.
第三段 我的观点或选择 第三段 我的观点或选择 ?Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the ?主题句: 结合两种观点,表明我的观second one. ?First, willing to help others is one 点 (weighing up:权衡) of Chinese people’s traditional virtues. ? ? 扩展一: (traditional virtues:传统Second, this virtue is of more significance for the 美德)
creation of a harmonious society. ?To conclude, ? 扩展二: (harmonious:和谐的) it is every citizen’s responsibility to do good ? 结尾句:提出建议,作出展望 deeds without expecting any reward. (it is…for sb.+ to do sth)