六年级修改病句练习

六年级修改病句练习 一、前后矛盾 1、 《给颜黎民的信》的作者是鲁迅先生写的。 改: 2、 言行不一的人是一种极坏的作风。 改: 3、 我的家乡是昆明市人。 改: 4、 他的家乡是北京市人。 改: 5、 赖宁的家乡是四川省石棉县人。 改: 6、 刘老师光荣地被评为“模范 班主任 高三班主任计划七年级班主任计划初中七年级班主任计划初二班主任计划高一班主任计划 ”的称号。 改: 7、 张明被评上“三好学生”的光荣称号。 改: 二、次序颠倒 1、 夏天的青岛是一年中游人最多的季节。 改: 2、 兴安岭的春天简直是座美丽的大花园。 改: 3、 昆明的夏天是人们避暑的好地方。 改: 4、 北京的秋天是非常美丽的地方。 改: 5、 春天的江南是最美丽的季节。 改: 6、 他把劳动场面热气腾腾地写了下来。 改: 7、 我班的三好学生是李敏。 provisions of paragraph 6.5 submission of complete information. Monitoring inspection and safety assessment of the implementation of the outcome of the owners of the relevant regulations. 10.11 the completion at the end of the contract period, we will transfer to the owners of all monitoring facilities, engineering data, documents, reports and other project-related content. For monitoring facilities, replaceable equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 100%, not replacing equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 95% or more. Curtain Grouting in the 11th Chapter 11.1 project overview the on curtain Grouting works primarily for River yongxing secondary hydropower station dam Foundation curtain grouting, quantities of 200m. Dam Foundation curtain Grouting in dam concrete pouring is complete, reaches a certain intensity, agreed by the supervising engineer and began construction. 11.2 11.2.1 General requirements we are responsible for the procurement of materials, transport, storage, keeping drilling and apart from the employer's manpower required to grout materials for all materials. Admixture, admixture of each procurement shall meet the relevant quality 三、重复罗嗦 1、 我不禁忍不住笑了出来。 改: 2、 课外活动开始了，我立即马上去参加数学兴趣小组活动。 改: 3、 千千万万的无数青少年参加了植树活动。 改: 4、 上课时，全班同学都积极地、认真地、聚精会神地思考问题。 改: 5、 我们班上功课最好，成绩最优秀的学生是张小东。 改: 6、 星期天，爸爸带我到动物园逛游玩。 改: 7、 下课铃一响，安静的校园立即顿时沸腾起来。 改: 四、不合逻辑 1、 他的作业很整洁，只是涂得脏了一点儿。 改: 2、 全校同学都来到操场上，只有大队委们还在队部室开会。 改: 他的一双明亮的眼睛炯炯有神，看上去有点疲劳，像没有睡3、 醒似的眯缝着眼。 改: 4、 我断定小明这次数学考试的成绩可能是100分。 改: 5、 刘老师没来上课，我估计他一定是生病了。 改: 6、 这本 书 关于书的成语关于读书的排比句社区图书漂流公约怎么写关于读书的小报汉书pdf 大概肯定是他借的。 改: 7、 今天的作业，我基本上全做完了。 provisions of paragraph 6.5 submission of complete information. Monitoring inspection and safety assessment of the implementation of the outcome of the owners of the relevant regulations. 10.11 the completion at the end of the contract period, we will transfer to the owners of all monitoring facilities, engineering data, documents, reports and other project-related content. For monitoring facilities, replaceable equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 100%, not replacing equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 95% or more. Curtain Grouting in the 11th Chapter 11.1 project overview the on curtain Grouting works primarily for River yongxing secondary hydropower station dam Foundation curtain grouting, quantities of 200m. Dam Foundation curtain Grouting in dam concrete pouring is complete, reaches a certain intensity, agreed by the supervising engineer and began construction. 11.2 11.2.1 General requirements we are responsible for the procurement of materials, transport, storage, keeping drilling and apart from the employer's manpower required to grout materials for all materials. Admixture, admixture of each procurement shall meet the relevant quality 五、归类不当 下课的时候，同学们有的进行体育活动，有的打篮球，有的 1、 跳高，有的唱歌。 改: 万里长城、故宫博物院和南京长江大桥是中外游客向往的古2、 迹。 改: 3、 参加这次运动会的有工人、农民、战士、青年和学生。 改: 4、 全校老师和班主任都和我们一起参加了文娱晚会。 改: 5、 全校师生员工和校长都一起参加了植树活动。 改: 6、 元宵夜，我们全家人和我一起观看了灯展。 改: 7、 我家伺养了鸡、鸭、鹅和猪等家禽。 改: 六、不合事实 1、 造纸是我国古代的四大发明。 改: 2、 海南战役是解放战争时期的三大战役。 改: 3、 一辆英国朋友乘坐的汽车去桂林旅游。 改: 4、 武汉杂技团到达的城市，都受到观众的热烈欢迎。 改: 5、 老班长拿的钓鱼竿去河边钓鱼。 改: 七、前后搭配不当 1、 小刚特别喜欢踢足球和乒乓球。 改: provisions of paragraph 6.5 submission of complete information. Monitoring inspection and safety assessment of the implementation of the outcome of the owners of the relevant regulations. 10.11 the completion at the end of the contract period, we will transfer to the owners of all monitoring facilities, engineering data, documents, reports and other project-related content. For monitoring facilities, replaceable equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 100%, not replacing equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 95% or more. Curtain Grouting in the 11th Chapter 11.1 project overview the on curtain Grouting works primarily for River yongxing secondary hydropower station dam Foundation curtain grouting, quantities of 200m. Dam Foundation curtain Grouting in dam concrete pouring is complete, reaches a certain intensity, agreed by the supervising engineer and began construction. 11.2 11.2.1 General requirements we are responsible for the procurement of materials, transport, storage, keeping drilling and apart from the employer's manpower required to grout materials for all materials. Admixture, admixture of each procurement shall meet the relevant quality 2、 他穿着一件灰色上衣，一顶蓝帽子。 改: 3、 他一口气喝了三碗粥和三个面包。 改: 4、 我们一定要端正学习目的，明确学习态度。 改: 5、 赵阳因为多次被评为“三好学生”，所以从来不骄傲。 改: 6、 如果我们班得到 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 扬，就不能骄傲。 改: 7、 陈小刚虽然刻苦学习，而且热爱劳动。 改: 九、成分残缺 1、 学习了《小学生守则》以后，受到了深刻的教育。 改: 2、 开展“五讲四美”活动以后，发生了巨大的变化。 改: 今天学校举行乒乓球决赛，由六(1)班和六(2)班的运动3、 员争夺。 改: 4、 我们必须艰苦朴素的习惯。 改: 5、 我们必须遵守纪律、讲卫生的习惯。 改: 6、 听了小明讲的故事，我不约而同地笑了起来。 改: 十、用词不当 1、 雷锋叔叔的动人故事，时时在我眼前出现。 改: 2、 玲玲的话很正确，我们都附和她。 改: 3、 江辉这学期努力学习，终于取得了很好的成就。 provisions of paragraph 6.5 submission of complete information. Monitoring inspection and safety assessment of the implementation of the outcome of the owners of the relevant regulations. 10.11 the completion at the end of the contract period, we will transfer to the owners of all monitoring facilities, engineering data, documents, reports and other project-related content. For monitoring facilities, replaceable equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 100%, not replacing equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 95% or more. Curtain Grouting in the 11th Chapter 11.1 project overview the on curtain Grouting works primarily for River yongxing secondary hydropower station dam Foundation curtain grouting, quantities of 200m. Dam Foundation curtain Grouting in dam concrete pouring is complete, reaches a certain intensity, agreed by the supervising engineer and began construction. 11.2 11.2.1 General requirements we are responsible for the procurement of materials, transport, storage, keeping drilling and apart from the employer's manpower required to grout materials for all materials. Admixture, admixture of each procurement shall meet the relevant quality 改: 4、 他在热情的掌声中第一次登上讲台。 改: 5、 经过努力学习，我的学习成绩大大增加了。 改: 6、 农村实行承包责任制，农民的生活水平有了改善。 改: provisions of paragraph 6.5 submission of complete information. Monitoring inspection and safety assessment of the implementation of the outcome of the owners of the relevant regulations. 10.11 the completion at the end of the contract period, we will transfer to the owners of all monitoring facilities, engineering data, documents, reports and other project-related content. For monitoring facilities, replaceable equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 100%, not replacing equipment availability monitoring instruments should be 95% or more. Curtain Grouting in the 11th Chapter 11.1 project overview the on curtain Grouting works primarily for River yongxing secondary hydropower station dam Foundation curtain grouting, quantities of 200m. Dam Foundation curtain Grouting in dam concrete pouring is complete, reaches a certain intensity, agreed by the supervising engineer and began construction. 11.2 11.2.1 General requirements we are responsible for the procurement of materials, transport, storage, keeping drilling and apart from the employer's manpower required to grout materials for all materials. Admixture, admixture of each procurement shall meet the relevant quality