2022届高三深圳一模读后续写构思学案（含答案）

深圳一模读后续写原文阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。LastMarch,Margaritodrovetovisithismotherwholivedinthecountryside.Whenhesetoffforhome,Margarito'smotherlookedatthedarkskyandnoticedthesignofacomingstorm.Worriedaboutherson'ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhomeandhepromisedtogiveheracalluponhisarrival.Withhismother'swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.Soon,itstartedtorainheavily.Eagertogethome,Margaritobegantodrivefaster.Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek（小溪）.Margarito,drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,figuredthathewouldbeOK.Atthatmoment,hedidn'trealizethatsuchathoughtwouldbeabigmistake.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace:Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.Thetruckfinallystoppedsome80feetaway.Margarito'sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver'ssidedoor.Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike,whowereonthewaytodeliverfurnituretocustomersinthecountryside.Theywitnessedthehorribleincident,andwhenMargarito'struckcametorestinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedaropefromthebackofhisvehicleandusedittoensurehecouldsafelyapproachthetruck.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________原文好词好句分析lookedatthedarksky看着昏暗的天空thesignofacomingstorm暴风雨即将来临的迹象abumpymountainroad一条崎岖不平的山路befloodedbyacreek被溪水淹没positionedthetruckintothecreekbank将卡车卡在河岸上positionv.安置，使处于；定位openthedriver'ssidedoor打开驾驶室的门witnessedthehorribleincident目睹了这可怕的事情（交通事故）restinthemiddleoftheoverflowingcreek（卡车）停在泛滥的河水中grabbedarope抓起一根绳子safelyapproachthetruck安全地靠近卡车1.Worriedaboutherson'ssafety,shetoldhimtodriveascarefullyaspossibleonhiswayhome...（过去分词做状语）担心儿子的安全，她告诉他在回家的路上要尽可能小心。2.Withhismother'swordsinmind,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.（with复合结构）谨记妈妈的话，Margarito小心翼翼地使向大路。3.Itwashalfwayacrossthecreekthatanunfortunateincidenttookplace.（强调句）正是在过河途中，不幸的事情发生了。Therushingwatersgrabbedholdofhisvehicle,pushingitofftheroadandsendingitdownarockycreekbed.（v-ing做伴随状语）湍急的河水控制住了他的车，把车推离了道路，顺着岩石河床推了下去。Injuredandtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.（过去分词做原因状语）由于泥水迅速上涨，Margarito受伤并被困在里面，他确信自己会死。Shakingwithfear,hewasatalossaboutwhattodo.（v-ing做原因状语）他吓得浑身发抖，不知道该怎么办。环境描写好句Twohourslater,hecametoabumpymountainroadthathadbeenfloodedbyacreek.两小时后，他来到一条崎岖不平的山路，山路被一条小溪淹没Margarito’sproblemsonlygrewfromthereasthewaterhadsomehowpositionedthetruckintothecreekbankata45-degreeangle,makingitdifficultforhimtoopenthedriver’ssidedoor.Margarito的问题只是从那里开始的，因为河水以45度的角度将卡车卡在河岸上，使他很难打开司机的侧门。参考范文：Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”Withtherock,hehitthewindowoverandoverbuthadlittlesuccess.StevethenshoutedtoMargaritotomoveawayfromthewindow.Hebalancedhimselfonthetruck,leanedbackandthrewtherockatthewindow.Finally,theglassbrokeandStevekickedintheremainingpiecesofglass.Relieved,MargaritoreachedoutforSteve'shandandwasrescued.Thetwomenescapedandreturnedtosafety.MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Withtremblinghands,Margaritotookoutthephoneandpressedittohisear.Hismother'sanxiousvoicecameoverthephone,“Areyouhomeyet?Everything'sgood?”Tearswelledupinhiseyesatthefamiliarsoundofconcern.Margaritochokedupasheexplainedtheaccidenttohismomandcomfortedher.Hangingupthephone,heturnedtoSteveandMikeandsincerelythankedbothofthem.Coldastherainwas,greatwarmthfilledhisheartlikeneverbefore.教师习作1：Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”Hearinghisorder,Mikeimmediatelyrolledaheavystonetotheriverbank.StevetiedthestonewiththeropeandaskedMiketostayandwaitforhim.Thenhesteppedintothecreekandwalkedtowardsthetruck.Luckily,heopenedthedriver’ssidedoorbeforeMargaritowasdrowntodeath.Afterspittingoutsomemuddywater,Margaritocamebacktolife.HavingplacedtheropeonthetruckandplacedMargaritoonhisbackcarefully,StevemanagedtosaveMargarito.Then,theystartedtodragtherope,withtheeffortsofthethree,thetruckwassuccessfullydraggedbacktothebank.MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Hepickedupthephoneandthevoiceofhismothercameout,askingifeverythingwasfine.Hetoldherabouttheincidentandhowhewassaved.MomthankedSteveandMikesincerelyandinvitedthemfordinner.However,theyrefusedastheyhavesomefurnituretodeliver.Hearingthis,momaskedaboutthebuyer'saddresstopickthemupaftertheyfinishedtheirwork.ItwasMargaritowhoorderedthefurnitureformom!Whatasmallworld!SotheysetouttogetherforMargarito’shousewithdelight!教师作文2：Next,heturnedtoMikeandyelled,“Givemearock!”Hearinghisuncle’surgentcommand,Mikeknewthesituationwasmuchtougherthanheimagined.Itmeantthedoorcouldn’tbeopenedfromoutside,butitmustbebrokeninto.Hebentdownandfoundasharpandheavystone.AfterStevegottherock,Hesmashedthewindowglasswiththerockoverandoveragainwithallhismight/strength.Itcrackedandbrokeandbecamepieces.Withinseconds,Margaritowaspulledoutfromthefuggytruck.MargaritowasabouttothankSteveandMikewhenthemobilephoneinhisjacketpocketrang.Itwashismomcalling,concerninghissafety.Gasping,Margaritotoldherwhathadhappenedandhowhewasrescuedbythetwobravedeliverydrivers.Hismomsobbedandcouldn’tthankthemmorethroughthephone,knowingdeeplythatwithoutthesestrangers’determinationandwillingnesstohelp,herson’slifewouldhavebeeningreatdangerorworseotherwise.ToMargarito,thisincidentwasalifelonglesson.小情节1.捡起石头Hebentdownandfoundasharpandheavystone.他弯下腰，发现了一块又尖又重的石头。Mikequicklybentdownandgrabbedarock.迈克迅速弯下腰，抓起一块石头。小情节2.砸窗Hesmashedthewindowglasswiththerockoverandoveragainwithallhismight/strength.他使出浑身解数一次又一次地用石头敲打窗户玻璃。Stevegrabbedtherockandgavethewindowaheavyblow.史蒂夫抓起石头，狠狠地砸了一下窗户。小情节3.表示感谢Hismomsobbedandcouldn’tthankthemmorethroughthephone,knowingdeeplythatwithoutthesestrangers’determinationandwillingnesstohelp,herson’slifewouldhavebeeningreatdangerorworseotherwise.他的母亲抽泣着，无法通过电话向他们表达更多的感谢，因为她深知，如果没有这些陌生人的决心和帮助的意愿，她儿子的生命将处于极大的危险之中，或者更糟。Withtearsofgratituderollingdownhisface,hebowedtothem.他感激的泪水从脸上滑落，向他们鞠躬致意。Hangingupthephone,heturnedtoSteveandMikeandsincerelythankedbothofthem.挂断电话后，他转向史蒂夫和迈克，真诚地感谢他们两人。试题改编：完形填空Instorm-ravagedSantaClarita,California,lastMarch,Margaritoapproachedthemainroadcarefully.A1streamhadfloodedit.Margarito，drivingafour-wheeldrivetruck,2he'dbeOK,butit3abigmistake.Halfway4,therushingwatergrabbedholdofhisvehicle,5itofftheroadandwashingitdownarockystreambed.Itfinallystoppedsome80feetaway,whenthewater.6liftedthetruckandlandeditinthegroundata45-degreeangle.Injured,7,andtrappedinsidewiththemuddywater8quickly,andthedoorseriouslydamaged,Margaritowascertainhewasgoingtodie.OntheroadrightbehindMargaritowereadeliveryworkernamedSteveandhisnephewMike.Theywatchedthehorror9,andwhenMargarito'struckcametoa(n)10inthemiddleofthestream,Stevequicklybegantotakeaction.First,hegrabbedheavy-dutyropesfromthebackofhisvanand11theswingingtrucktonearbyposts.Thenheclimbedtothetopofthetruckandbangedonaback12withhisfists,but13.Frustrated,heturnedtohisnephewandyelled,"Givemearock!"Overandoverhesmashedtherockintothewindow.14,theglassbrokeandStevekickedintheremainingpiecesofglass.Soon,asoakedMargarito15throughthewindowframe,Thetwomenescapedandreturnedtosafety.1.A.swollenB.brokenC.desertedD.constructed2.A.wonderedB.valuedC.proposedD.figured3.A.stucktoB.turnedoutC.madeD.avoided4.A.acrossB.overC.downD.through5.A.clearingB.stretchingC.cuttingD.sweeping6.A.anyhowB.anywayC.somehowD.somewhat7.A.shakenB.confusedC.relievedD.suspected8.A.fallingB.risingC.disappearingD.lowering9.A.fadeB.unfoldC.ceaseD.react10.A.endB.pauseC.agreementD.rest11.A.linkedB.exposedC.securedD.restored12.A.seatB.mirrorC.wheelD.window13.A.incontrolB.inturnC.invainD.ineffect14.A.ObviouslyB.UltimatelyC.FrequentlyD.Precisely15.A.emergedB.extendedC.releasedD.surfedKeys:1-5ADBAD6-10CABBD11-15CDCBA