04 极致美学作文修辞（4集）

逻辑英语第五阶第4集极致美学作文修辞讲师：钟平PKU1.排比、简约和介词的灵动假设任务：一个美好的明天由大家共享，但是要靠每个人去实现。初级：Abeautifultomorrowissharedbyeveryone,butitreliesoneveryonetomakeitcometrue.中级：Abeautifultomorrowissharedbyeveryone,butitreliesoneach.Abeautifultomorrowissharedbyeveryone,butitreliesoneach.极致之美：Abettertomorrowissharedbyall,yetmadebyeach.实践中的用法：Itistimetomakesurethatattentionispaidtotheeducationequality;thatchildrenfromdisadvantagedfamiliescanhavethesamecourseswithothers;thatschoolsinpoorareasaregivenenoughfinancialaidtoenhancetheirfacilities.Noonecanbeperfectlyfreetillallarefree;noonecanbeperfectlymoraltillallaremoral;noonecanbeperfectlyhappytillallarehappy.经典权威中本修辞的体现：Icame;Isaw;Iconquer.Americaisreadytoencourage,eagertoinitiate,anxioustoparticipateinanyseemlyprogramlikelytolessentheprobabilityofwar.2.简约之美假设任务：环境被破坏了，我们的身体会受到伤害，同时我们的经济增长也会受到伤害初级：Iftheenvironmentisdestroyed,ourbodywillbehurt,andatthesametime,oureconomicgrowthwillbehurt.中级：Iftheenvironmentisdestroyed,ourbodywillbehurt,andthedevelopmentofoureconomicwillbedestroyedtoo.Iftheenvironmentisdestroyed,ourbody,aswellasoureconomicwillbeharmed.极致之美：Iftheenvironmentisdestroyed,ourhealthwillbeharmed,andwithitoureconomicdevelopment.实践中的用法：InEuropethevoiceistheobjectofculture,andwithittheyperformimpossibilities.Aslongasyoumakeefforts,yourgradeswillbeimproved,andwithityourconfidence.经典权威在本修辞中的体现：Untiltheseissuesareresolved,atechnologyofbehaviorwillcontinuetoberejected,andwithitpossiblytheonlywaytosolveourproblems.Asfamiliesmoveawayfromtheirstablecommunity,theirfriendsofmanyyears,andtheirextendedfamilyrelationships,theinformalflowofinformationiscutoff,andwithittheconfidencethatinformationwillbeavailablewhenneededandwillbetrustworthyandreliable.3.介词的使用介词的妙用，能够达到言简意赅、生动传神的效果。介词妙用：thatgovernmentofthepeople,bythepeople,forthepeople,shallnotperishfromtheearth比如，与其说Iloveyou,不如说Iamreallyintoyou.我对你如此迷恋，不能自拔。介词对比：Itisnotthetimetoaskwhatcanbemadeforyou,butwhatcanbemadebyyou.介词短语：Istudyhard.Istudywithdiligence.Irespectyou.Itreatyouwithrespect.beyondThankyousomuch.Mythankstoyouisbeyondimagination.Englishisbeyondme.Hissufferingisbeyonddescription.fromIspeakfromexperiences.FromwhatIknow,itisawrongchoice.farfromHeisfarfromperfectnow.Whatwearedoingnowisfarfromsatisfying.onThedisastersetthewholefamilyonthestovenow.Hewasonpinsandneedleswhenhesawtheresult.toMysuccessshouldbetotallyattributedtothetrainingatschool.from：Ispeakfromexperiences.with/withoutWeneedtotry,withorwithoutresults.对比介词：Tolookforwhatyouneed,youhavetolookintowhatyouhave.lookout/lookintoIfyouarestilllookingoutforsomeonetohelpyoufindtherightwaytoestablishyourconfidence,lookintothemirror.4.拟人初级：Manychangeshavetakenplaceintwentyyears.中级：替换词或句子构架替换词：Chinahasundergonemanychangesduringthepasttwodecades.句子架构升级：ItisinthepasttwentyyearsthatChinahasundergonemanychanges.极致之美：Chinahaswitnessedgreatchangesforthepasttwodecades.实践中的运用：Indiahaswitnessedmanypoliticalchangesinrecentyears.Theyear1886witnessedthefirstextendedtranslationintoEnglishofthewritingsofEliphasLevi.经典权威中本修辞的体现：Recentyearshavewitnessedagrowingsocialmobility.Theretailtradeiswitnessingasharpfallinsales.假设任务：在处理这个问题上，当勇气沉默时，恐惧就开始替代它。初级：Indealingwiththisproblem,whencourageissilent,fearwillreplaceit.中级：替换词或句子构架替换词：Inhandlingthisproblem,whencourageissilent,fearwilldominate.句子架构升级：Whenitcomestodealingwiththisproblem,whencourageissilent,fearwilldominate.极致之美：Indealingwithsuchaproblem,whencourageissilent,feartalks.钟平PKU钟平老师QQ26735509钟平老师微信zhongpingyingyu2助理QQ2770319995微博：@有道钟平@钟叔工作室@答疑妈关注微信公众号：有道逻辑英语钟叔带你，一个 公式 小学单位换算公式大全免费下载公式下载行测公式大全下载excel公式下载逻辑回归公式下载 读懂天下英文