中考英语写作技巧公开课(共25张PPT)

ALessonofWriting假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据 表格 关于规范使用各类表格的通知入职表格免费下载关于主播时间做一个表格详细英语字母大小写表格下载简历表格模板下载 内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)Howtowriteacomposition.认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息。写作第一步审假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)主题字数人称体裁提示要点补充信息一般现在时时态用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.Mydreamistoworkatschool.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.加加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Writingbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.aniceheadanicetailanicebody连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：英语写作时常用的过渡语:表并列或递进：and,besides,both…and，notonly…butalso，what’smore,…表转折：but,yet,however,though，although…表因果关系：because,so,therefore,asaresult…表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally…表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,…表列举说明：forexample,forinstance,suchas…发表观点：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,…表总结陈词：ingeneral,allinall,inaword,generallyspeaking…Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.alsoInthiswayBecause美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Soshethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditalsobringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Inthiswayhecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.Shewantstobeawriter.Shewantstobeasuccessfulwriterinthefuture,justlikeMoYan.Hewantstobeaguide.Heislookingforwardtotravellingabroadsohewantstobeaguideinforeigncountries.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.Whenshegrowsup,shewantstobeaWWFworkertosavetheanimalsindangerandhelpanimalsliveinpeace.适当运用名言或俗语Timeismoney.一寸光阴一寸金Timewaitsfornoman.岁月不待人Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧Itsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老……SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrectGoodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.WatchTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceaweekWatchingbeachieveSkillTwoExpressindifferentwaysWhenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…书面表达写作技巧审列加连美中考作文评分标准第五档（很好）（25-21分）完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档（好）（20-16分）完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（一般）（15-11分）基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第二档（较差）（10-6分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。第一档（差）（5-0分）未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。Romeisnotbuiltinaday.Tips:1.卷面工整。2. 规范 编程规范下载gsp规范下载钢格栅规范下载警徽规范下载建设厅规范下载 写作过程。3.多背诵美文，积累素材。HaveaTry!书面表达以“Ihaveadream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供参考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue…Thanks!