类型5| 求助信
1.求助信要简明扼要,语气委婉、真诚,不强人所难,并尽量提供足够的信息,能使收信人愿意帮助你。
2.写作指导
(1)清晰陈述请求的
内容
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或所要获取的信息;
(2)提出的问题数量不宜过多,要便于回答;
(3)解释收信人回信的理由并表示感谢。
假如你是某中学的高一学生李明,最近与母亲关系紧张,难以相处。请根据下表内容用
英语
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给某英文杂志Helper栏目的编辑Mr.Smith写一封80词左右的求助信,请他帮你解决问题。
你的情况
你母亲的情况
你的问题
1.学习成绩好;
2.爱母亲;
3.有点害怕母亲。
1.大学教授,工作勤奋,很少有时间和你说话;
2.对你严格要求,易发脾气。
1.与母亲很少交流;
2.不知如何沟通。
[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing to tell you my problem ①troubled me for a long time.It is ②relationship between my mother and me.
1.避免词汇搭配错误
④处in改为with
My mother is a university professor ③she works very hard.She is strict ④in me but she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper ⑤easy.I don't know how to communicate with her.
2.杜绝语法错误
①处troubled应改成troubling
②处应添加冠词the
③处应添加连词and
⑤处easy改为easily
⑥处exchange改为exchanged
Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and ⑥exchange our feelings and thoughts.⑦ (如果您能帮助我,我将不胜感激。)
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3.要点一定不要遗漏
补上⑦处要点:I'd appreciate
it if you give me a way out.
[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing to tell you my problem ①troubling me for a long time.It is the relationship between my mother and me.
高级句型
①处改为定语从句:which/that has troubled me for a long time
②处改为现在分词短语:working very hard
My mother is a university professor,②and she works very hard.She is strict with me but ③she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily.④I don't know how to communicate with her.⑤Maybe it's because we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts.I'd appreciate it if you give me a way out.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
③处改为倒装句:so busy is she with her work that she finds little time to talk to me
用the reason why...is that...连接④、⑤句:The reason why I don't know how to communicate with her is that we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts.