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AS THE CROW FLIES
"Hand that feeds Ye"
Written by
Angus Macfadyen
TEASER
FADE IN:
EXT. ROAD - EARLY MORNING
Flash of bright yellow, sound of labored exertion. Quick cuts of feet pumping away at the pedals of a bike.
HAMISH MACLEAN is furiously exerting himself up a steep hill, dressed in full Tour de France regalia.
Now he?s coasting down another.
He slowly brakes to a standstill.
INT. BEDROOM - MORNING
AENEAS OG, a man with a thick beard, opens his eyes. Stares at the pale ceiling. Turns his head and looks out the window, catching out of the corner of his eye, a figure on a bike, staring down at him. The wind howls eerily across the heather in the subdued morning light.
EXT. ISLAND HOUSE - EARLY MORNING
Hamish looks down upon the building and just watches it, without expression, catching his breath.
INT. ISLAND HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Hearing a noise downstairs, Aeneas looks away. When he turns back to the window, the figure on the bike is gone. The wind remains. INT. KITCHEN - MORNING
Aeneas Og, now dressed in jeans, a thick sweater, hiking boots and a beanie, prepares his coffee. As the kettle begins to whistle, he watches the birds outside, scratching his thick beard. He leaves frame. The kettle whistles. Outside the window, in the garden, Aeneas enters frame and begins to disperse handfuls of bread crumbs for the birds. The kettle whistles. He exits frame.
Re-entering frame inside the kitchen again, he turns off the gas and the kettle goes silent. A cell phone goes off. Aeneas answers it while pouring water into a coffee jug. AENEAS
Aye.
A voice talks into his ear. He stares at the birds congregating...
AENEAS
What do you mean, strange? Hey!
He shouts suddenly. Exits frame.
AENEAS (V.O.)
No, not you, it?s the cat...
We see him outside the window again, chasing away an unseen cat. AENEAS
The cat is after the birds again.
Look, I?ll be right over.
He exits the frame and re-enters frame inside the kitchen. Talking to an unseen cat we hearing meowing hungrily. AENEAS
Aye, I know, its your nature. Not you,
Hamish, the cat. Where are you? Colin
Macdonald?s croft? I?ll be there in
fifteen minutes.
He hangs up and feeds the cat on the counter. She purrs as she feeds. He strokes her and pours his coffee, black. MOTHER (V.O.)
Aeneas?
AENEAS
Aye.
MOTHER
Don?t forget the shopping list.
AENEAS
Got it.
Notices the shopping list pinned to the wall. Sipping his coffee, he plucks it off the wall and puts it in his pocket, leaving frame.
INT. CAR, ISLE OF EILEAN - MORNING
Still sipping his coffee, Aeneas Og drives.
2.
EXT. ROAD, ISLE OF EILEAN - MORNING
The car drives by at a leisurely pace.
EXT. COLIN MACDONALD?S CROFT - MORNING
Aeneas Og pulls up in his car and steps out. He is greeted by Sergeant Hamish Maclean, still in Tour de France mountain bike gear. He honestly does look out of place for a policeman. Well, for any man, in this environment.
HAMISH
Morning, Detective Inspector Og.
AENEAS
Morning, Sergeant Maclean.
HAMISH
Like I said, strange. He says he was
attacked jus? before dawn as he was
getting ready to go out an? feed the cows.
They enter the garage. Crofter Colin Macdonald, slumped on a hay bale, next to his tractor, holding his arm close to his chest.
AENEAS
Morning Colin.
The crofter does not respond. Just looks at him with strange eyes. AENEAS
The doctor?
HAMISH
We called, got an answer phone.
AENEAS
Keep trying. How are you, Colin?
The crofter just stares at him. Holding his arm close to his chest. HAMISH
He?s been acting a wee bit doolally.
AENEAS
Can I see your hand, Colin?
Aeneas reaches out but the old crofter immediately shrinks back and snarls.
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Hamish and Aeneas stop and glance at each other. HAMISH
Did he just snarl at us?
Just as suddenly, Macdonald snaps out of it and holds out his arm, pleading.
COLIN MACDONALD
Came at me with his teeth. Sunk „em
right into me. See? Then just fled intae the night. Aeneas looks at the hand. Teeth mark punctures, very sore looking. AENEAS
We?ll get that taken care of right
away, Colin. You didn?t get a look at
his face did you?
The crofter shakes his head and sinks back into a strange reverie. His collie dog bounds up and begins to lick the wound. Colin pays no attention. Then he notices his dog. Starts to growl at him. The dog pulls back and bares his fangs. Aeneas and Hamish look at each other, unsettled. AENEAS
What?
HAMISH
Well?
AENEAS
Well what?
They look back at Macdonald. Is that him foaming at the corner of his mouth?
FADE OUT.
END OF TEASER
4.
ACT ONE
FADE IN:
EXT. COLIN MACDONALD?S CROFT - MORNING
Hamish is handing over to a very pretty policewoman in uniform, Police constable SARAH KNOX. Aeneas stares out across the rolling fields and into the distance, where the Northern winds are whipping up an angry froth upon the glistening black sea rocks. Hamish makes his way towards Aeneas. In the background, Sarah smiles at Aeneas and waves.
SARAH
Morning, detective inspector.
Hamish glances back then winks at Aeneas.
HAMISH
Another one bites the dust?
Aeneas ignores this and gets into his car. Hamish leans down. HAMISH
Mind if I get a lift?
AENEAS
You?ve taken up cycling?
Hamish grabs his twelve speed racing bike and begins to stuff it into the trunk of the car.
HAMISH
How d?ye think I keep my girlish
figure, Mr. Og? Things they have a
changed around here since you been gone.
INT. CAR - CONTINUOUS
He climbs into the passenger seat and slams the door cheerfully, singing.
HAMISH
“Since you?ve been gone, since you?ve
been gone, I?m outta my head, can?t take it.”
Aeneas sighs, and starts the engine.
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HAMISH
Am I annoying ye? It?s the fresh air.
All this fresh air!
He breathes deep.
HAMISH
Is that why you came back, Aeneas? All
this fresh air? Miss yer ma?s home
cooking or something?
AENEAS
Belt up.
HAMISH
Eh?
AENEAS
Put your seat belt on.
HAMISH
Ladies and gentlemen, please fasten your seat belts, we are experiencing some turbulence. Its all this fresh air ladies and gents. Did I forget to say this is yer co-pilot speaking? Detective Inspector Aeneas Og backs up carefully, past police
constable Sarah Knox, who smiles again. SARAH
See you back at the station then. They pull away.
HAMISH
Right you are, constable Knox. She?s
smashin?. Isn?t she? Come on, tell me
she isn?t smashin?. She?s gorgeous.
Usual story. All the girls only got eyes for Inspector Silenzio here. Slim pickin?s, Aeneas, plenty a? fresh air,
but prime Scottish rump like that? Best grab that off the shelf while ye can. AENEAS
Women?s emancipation not reached this far north yet?
HAMISH
Again, in English!
6.
AENEAS
“Prime Scottish rump”. If I were a woman I?d be offended by that remark. HAMISH
If you were a woman, I?d be offended too.
His mobile phone is ringing. Hamish has grabbed it.
HAMISH
Hello, you have reached a recording of Sergeant Hamish Maclean?s voice, this
is not he. Please leave him a message after the loud farting noise. Just kiddin?, its me, go on then.
He listens. Aeneas drives through the countryside.
HAMISH
Turnbull?s pig? The prize pig? Right
you are. We?ll be there in a few.
(hangs up) Step on it miss Moneypenny, we?ve a case to solve. You know Turnbull?
AENEAS
Ian Turnbull?
HAMISH
Right. No Alistair, his brother.
AENEAS
Alistair?
HAMISH
Aye, Alistair, no Ian. Ian went off prospecting for gold in Guatemala, oh, three, four years back. Anyway, Ian?s
called in „cause his prize pig has
gone missing. This could be the big one, batman.
AENEAS
You mean Alistair.
HAMISH
Eh?
AENEAS
Alistair called in. Ian?s in Nicaragua.
7.
HAMISH
Aye, that?s what I said. Alistair?s in
Guatemala. You said Nicaragua. AENEAS
I said Nicaragua?
HAMISH
Aye, Ian?s in Nicaragua, but it?s
Alistair who?s in Nicaragua.
AENEAS
Guatemala. He?s in Guatemala.
HAMISH
Who is?
AENEAS
Alistair.
HAMISH
I?m confused.
They drive for a while in silence. Hamish is preoccupied, then...
HAMISH
Did you think that was a wee bit odd? AENEAS
Odd.
HAMISH
Aye, Colin Macdonald?s dog. Obviously
bit him on the hand, but why wouldn?t
he just say it? Why go to the bother of dragging us out to the croft and spinning a yarn about some interloper.... AENEAS
Maybe he was in shock.
HAMISH
Right you are...
But his tone makes us understand he doesn?t believe it. Aeneas drives. HAMISH
You gonnae see Moira now that you?re back?
Aeneas just looks at him.
8.
AENEAS
Why?
HAMISH
Why what?
AENEAS
Why don?t you mind yer own business.
Hamish lets out a sigh. Silence. HAMISH
Guess you heard then.
AENEAS
Heard what?
Hamish looks at him, trying to gauge what he knows.
HAMISH
Well you tell me what you?ve heard and
then I?ll tell you if you heard right.
AENEAS
Still the smart ass, eh, Hamish? HAMISH
Is it me or is the tension palpable in the batmobile this fine, rain splattered morning? Must be all this fresh air! Seriously though, why?d you
come back to the island, old man? Long pause as he drives. Is he going to answer?
AENEAS
You won?t tell a soul if I let you in on a secret?
HAMISH
No.
Aeneas looks at him.
HAMISH
No, I swear. Who?m I gonnae tell,
besides, you know me, I can keep a secret better than most. Discretion is the better part of valor. My trout pouts are sealed.
AENEAS
Came back for the fresh air, Hamish. 9.
Now Hamish studies him.
HAMISH
Hey, Aeneas. Do you wannae know why I ride my bike those twelve miles to work every day, come rain or sleet, looking like a french condom?
Aeneas glances over at him. And SMILES. For the first time.
AENEAS
You?re a very strange man, Hamish Maclean.
HAMISH
Aye, but do you wannae know why I choose to look like an elephant?s
sphincter each and every day of my pathetic life?
They drive. He belts out a song. HAMISH
“Because I believe I can fly. I
believe I can touch the sky.”
EXT. ROAD, ISLE OF EILEAN - MORNING A bus load of tourists taking photos on the bus, some of them
have oozed out onto the road, loudly complaining about the
sheep blocking the road.
TOURIST 1
(in French)
Incredible! Can?t they move?
TOURIST 2
(in French; English
subtitles)
What are you going to do? A sheep is a sheep, all the world over.
AENEAS and HAMISH exit their car. TOURIST 1
Ah, finally, mister policeman, are you going to move these animals along? TOURIST 3
Jean Jacques, Merde! Watch out for the merde! 10.
TOURIST 1
Nothing to be done?
TOURIST 3
Nothing.
TOURIST 1
You?d think we were in a Samuel Beckett play. Aeneas scratches his head. Hamish takes his bike out the back.
Aeneas gives him a look.
HAMISH
Brains and beauty too. See you at the station.
AENEAS
Are you going to stop by Ian
Turnbull?s croft and get a photo of his prize pig?
HAMISH
Alistair!
AENEAS
Eh?
HAMISH
Ian Turnbull?s in Guatemala. Or is it bloody Nicaragua?
A scream. One of the tourists is being charged by a ram. Pandemonium. Hamish is cycling away.
HAMISH
Welcome back to the island, detective
inspector. “Our doors are never locked!”
EXT. ROAD, ISLE OF EILEAN - CONTINUOUS
Aeneas trying to deal with the stubborn nature of sheep. DISSOLVE TO:
SERIES OF SHOTS:
A) He chases them off the road, but some inevitably return. B) Aeneas grabs one by the head and wrestles it off the road, it bucks him and he falls flat into a pile of sheep shit. The tourists laugh.
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C) Aeneas muddier and muddier, struggling with the sheep as the bus driver and tourists look on, taking photos, commenting. Some applaud
D). The bus drives away, leaving Aeneas in a muddy mess. The sheep stand grazing by the side of the road, eyeing him suspiciously. He shakes his head. Wipes shit off his jacket. INT. CAR - MORNING
Aeneas, still muddy is driving past a pub, he slows down and pulls onto the gravel parking.
EXT. THE EILEAN INN - CONTINUOUS
Aeneas slides out of the car. He enters the pub, outside which there is a flurry of early morning activity; crates of bottles being emptied from a truck, and other crates of empties ready to be carted away. Also food deliveries, being dropped for the lunch service. A pretty woman is directing in a Scots-Polish accent. SOFIA
Don?t break another bottle or I break
your testicle. Hello detective inspector.
AENEAS
Morning, Sofia.
INT. THE EILEAN INN - CONTINUOUS
The pub owner, DUNCAN DUNCANSON, a short fellow with irrepressible energy, calls out to Aeneas.
DUNCAN
Aeneas! Over here!
AENEAS
Just got to use your bathroom, Duncan.
DUNCAN
Over here!
He waves him over insistently to the bar. Aeneas changes direction and heads to the bar. A man in a sable fur coat with a wave of dyed red hair stands with his back to Aeneas. DUNCAN
Allow me Aeneas to introduce you to
Mr. Trump here. Robert Trump. Donald
Trump?s brother.
12.
The big man turns, he removes an unlit cigar from his plump lips and puts down the dram of whisky he has been sipping. TRUMP
You?re fired.
DUNCAN
Mr. Trump is buying the pub off me
Aeneas. Pub, Hotel. Whole kit an? kaboodle.
AENEAS
Is that right?
TRUMP
Yeah. I?m here with my brother?s power of attorney.
DUNCAN
And at a pretty penny too.
TRUMP
Yep. We?re gonna be extending our
interests this far north. You?ve got
some great wilderness around here. You
know what I see, Anus?
AENEAS
Aeneas.
Aeneas can?t stop staring at the drooping swish of red hair
that seems to defy gravity by hanging like a blow dried tabby across his forehead. Its distracting. Trump leans in. AENEAS
Eh. No.
TRUMP
Golf courses.
He stands back, impressed with his vision, indifferent to all differences of opinion.
TRUMP
Golf courses. Casinos. And malls. See
we?re not just buying this pub, Duncan.
DUNCAN
Aye. Ye are.
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TRUMP
We?re buying history, man. We?re gonna
build an Eilean Inn every mile along the road, in every mall we build and rename it “The Bonnie Prince Charlie”.
DUNCAN
Well, you should keep the name. TRUMP
Eilean Inn? Eilean Inn, what in the hell is that? How do you even say that? Sounds like someone?s got a disease.
DUNCAN
We like it.
TRUMP
I don?t. I like the color of envy.
Because its green, like money. Like the golf courses of my mind. He lights his cigar.
DUNCAN
Eh.
TRUMP
And golden towers erupt, Anus. AENEAS
Aeneas.
DUNCAN
Mister Trump, there?s no smoking here.
TRUMP
Kinda name is that?
AENEAS
Its ancient Greek.
TRUMP
Greek?
DUNCAN
Mister Trump?
TRUMP
Duncan, what?
Duncan points apologetically to the sign.
14.
DUNCAN
No smoking.
TRUMP
Those laws weren?t made for my Scotch
ass, Duncanson.
He puffs away, blowing smoke in Aeneas? face.
DUNCAN
Aye but, you see this man here. He?s
the island inspector.
Trump looks at the shit stained figure of Aeneas. TRUMP
Garbage inspector. Inspecting toilets? DUNCAN
No sir.
TRUMP
You?re Greek?
AENEAS
Detective inspector. Put out the cigar please. Aeneas has taken out his badge.
Long pause. Trump looks into Aeneas? eyes, puzzled. Will this
man be a problem to him? Does he not like money? Slowly he puts out the cigar, reaches out his enormous paw.
Shakes Aeneas? hand.
TRUMP
I like Greeks. Greeks gave us law. I?m
a man of the law. Another round,
Duncan. What?ll it be, Kojak? Ouzo?
Duncan pours Trump another shot of malt. Without even looking
at Duncan, he takes the bottle.
TRUMP
Forget the serving shot, Duncan
Duncanson. We?re all men of gargantuan
appetites here.
AENEAS
If you?ll excuse me, I?ve really got to....
15.
TRUMP
You?ll have a dram with me.
AENEAS
It?s early. I?m on duty.
Aeneas is backing away. Trump laughs.
TRUMP
The Greeks invented it!
Aeneas slips into the toilets. Trump raises his glass. INT. THE EILEAN INN PUB TOILETS - MOMENTS LATER Aeneas throws water on his face. Stares at himself in the
mirror for a beat. Wipes away a mud stain from his neck. Music
starts to play.
“I put a spell on you” by Screamin? Jay Hawkins.
INT. CAR - LATER
Aeneas sits in his car, staking out a house.
EXT. CAR - CONTINUOUS
Angle on the house. A small semi detached building, which has seen better days. The door opens and a woman exits, with a man, locking the door behind her.
Aeneas sinks down in his seat, not wanting to be seen. The man is Hamish. He kisses her on the lips affectionately, and goes his separate way.
She walks along the other side of the street. Along the way, she hands out leaflets to islanders
INT. CAR - CONTINUOUS
Aeneas turns on the engine and follows her at a distance. She turns a corner. He stops at the corner and watches her walk away. EXT. EILEAN SUPERMARKET - MOMENTS LATER
Outside the market, more activity, crates of fruits and vegetables being unloaded from trucks by busy delivery men. The woman stops to pin a large poster on the window, then she enters the store.
Aeneas pulls up into the car park and turns off the engine. The music stops.
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EXT. EALEIN SUPERMARKET - CONTINUOUS
Aeneas stares at the poster: SCOTLAND FOR SCOTS; VOTE FOR INDEPENDENCE. He enters the market.
INT. EILEAN SUPERMARKET - MOMENTS LATER
Now replaced by the innocuous blare of supermarket music, but its still the same tune, easy listening style. Aeneas enters cautiously. The woman is nowhere to be seen. He wanders along the aisles, peering around corners. Sees her. Stops. Stands there, in a state of paralysis.
Until she rounds the corner, almost knocking into him with her trolley. She stops. There is a silence.
Aeneas can?t look at her. He fishes in his pocket for his
grocery list which he suddenly remembers and holds it up with a diffident grin.
MOIRA
You?re back.
AENEAS
Aye.
Another silence.
AENEAS
Just picking up some groceries for the folks.
MOIRA
How are they?
AENEAS
Aye, they?re fine. You?
MOIRA
I?m fine.
AENEAS
Grand. That?s...
A pause. She starts to move past him. MOIRA
I?ve got to go.
AENEAS
Moira.
His voice stops her. She looks at him. He tries but can?t
return her stare.
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AENEAS
See you around?
MOIRA
Why?
And she?s off. Aeneas stares after her til she disappears
around a corner of the market. He looks down at his list.
Coffee. Milk. Frozen pizza. Pound of mince. Biscuits. STORE MANAGER
Is there anything wrong, detective
inspector Og?
Aeneas looks up. The sixty year old manager peers over his half
moon specs.
AENEAS
I...uh...
He looks down at his list.
STORE MANAGER
Lachlan, get over here.
He waves his emotionally disturbed middle aged son over.
STORE MANAGER
This is my lad, Lachlan. He?ll help
you find everything. You see, we?ve
changed the layout since you were last here. Lachlan.
The manager urges him into action. The unkempt man-child begins
to deliver an ill digested speech which his father has drilled into him.
LACHLAN
Good morning, sir. Welcome to the
Eilean superstore, and how are you today? AENEAS
Fine.
LACHLAN
And how can I be of assistance, my good sir? STORE MANAGER
The list, Lachlan. Take the list.
Lachlan looks at his father anxiously and takes the list.
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LACHLAN
Eh, biscuits, that?ll be this aisle
here. Aisle two. And we?ve got the
coffee too, in aisle two, is that
instant coffee you?ll be wanting or beans?
But Aeneas just stares at him, making him even more edgy. He drops the list but doesn?t seem to notice, and begins to giggle
nervously. His father admonishes him.
STORE MANAGER
Och Lachlan, the list. The list! Stop
giggling, you useless boy!
The man-child suddenly panics and belts out the store with childish fury.
LACHLAN
Fuck off!
STORE MANAGER
Lachlan? Lachlan!
He picks up the list apologetically.
STORE MANAGER
I can?t imagine what the devil has
gotten intae him. Sorry aboot that.
Lets see now. Cloned mince. That?s
right over here in aisle three, cloned goods.
The manager walks away. Aeneas follows him, his head coming back down to earth, staring at the door the boy just ran out of. There, by the exit, is Moira, at the check out counter, buying her provisions. She is staring at him.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT ONE
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ACT TWO
FADE IN:
EXT. EILEAN POLICE STATION - AFTERNOON
Establishing shot of the humble abode where our coppers work. Yet again, signs of the twenty first century hustle and bustle on this rather antiquated island, a delivery man is dropping off some large plastic bottles for the water cooler. INT. EILEAN POLICE STATION, CONFERENCE ROOM - CONTINUOUS The police team sits around a desk, sipping coffee. (This scene should have the style of Criminal Minds and CSI, camera circling our intrepid team in a visually exciting style.) Aeneas Og, Hamish Maclean (now in work clothes), Sarah Knox, DAVY CAMPBELL, a young handsome boy who mans the station, are waiting to go over the day?s events. Davy is flirting with
Sarah. Hamish watches them, and fires surreptitious paper pellets at Davy, who knows its him but ignores him completely.
Meanwhile Sarah is grabbing glances of Aeneas, who sits there,
clothes still covered in mud. In walks CHIEF INSPECTOR KENNETH DRUMMOND, a tired looking man.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Alright, eyes forward. What have we got on our plate today?
DAVY CAMPBELL
Got a call this morning from Ian Turnbull about his pig.
HAMISH
Alistair.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Hamish?
HAMISH
Its Alistair. Ian?s in Panama
prospecting for gold.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Right you are. Davy?
DAVY CAMPBELL
Alistair then. Has anyone been over there yet? He?s called six times.
Alistair?s a wee bit upset. Says
there?s a ransom note.
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SARAH
I have. Got the note. Quote. “We have
the pig. If you want to see Esmerelda. Alive. Again. It will cost you. Do not contact the police. We will be in touch.”
She pins the note on the board. Silence. Sniggers.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Is this a bloody joke?
Everyone looks around at Hamish. He shrugs. HAMISH
I swear on my goldfishes? lives. Not me.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Right. Kidnapping is no laughing matter. He sighs deeply.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Jesus Christ. Anything else?
SARAH
I also got a photo of the pig.
HAMISH
Oh, well done, Sarah.
She pins a photo of the prize winning pig on the wall, an enormous creature, held by a smiling Alistair Turnbull, and
pokes her tongue at Hamish.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
What about the Macdonald incident?
Aeneas?
AENEAS
We think the dog bit him.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Ah ha.
AENEAS
I?ve asked the vet to have the dog
checked for rabies.
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CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Right. Follow up on the dog, make sure
he?s had his shots, and can we get the
photo of the pig online and displayed
at the school and supermarket across
the island. Sounds like a schoolboy
prank to me. Who?s going to do that?
Hamish puts up his arm.
HAMISH
I will.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Snoop around. Ask questions. Flush out
the truth, sergeant Maclean.
HAMISH
Aye aye chief inspector. The truth is the truth. CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Shut up. What else?
HAMISH
Och, the usual friday night squabbles.
CUT TO:
EXT. EILEAN INN - LAST NIGHT
Two twin girls go at it, too drunk to even do too much damage.
Much screaming and pulling of hair.
CUT TO:
INT. EILEAN POLICE STATION, HOLDING CELL - THIS MORNING The twins sit hung-over in a cell, battered and bruised, in
need of a cup of tea. They can barely lift their heads to needle one another.
HAMISH (V.O.)
The Mackenzie twins still drying out downstairs in the cell, usual stuff.
TWIN 1
Piss off.
TWIN 2
Wanker.
22.
INT. EILEAN POLICE STATION, CONFERENCE ROOM - CONTINUOUS HAMISH
Also, car in a ditch, over by Eilean
Loch, no injuries.
CUT TO:
EXT. ROAD, EILEAN ISLAND - DAY
A car sits there in a ditch, abandoned. Sound of the wind blowing through the open windows. A flock of sheep sniff at the
car curiously.
INT. EILEAN POLICE STATION, CONFERENCE ROOM - CONTINUOUS CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Anything else?
SARAH
Oh, some of the local kids have gone
and painted over the harbour signs again. CUT TO:
EXT. HARBOUR, EILEAN ISLAND - DAY
A road sign, says “THANK YOU FOR VISITING Eilean ISLAND: OUR
DOORS WERE NEVER LOCKED”. Scrawled over it in red, “YER WIVES
AND DAUGHTERS WERE MUCH APPRECIATED. THANKS!”.
In the background, the ferry is pulling out, its horn blows
hauntingly across the bay.
More signs of a busy island. The fishing boats are unloading their catch.
INT. EILEAN POLICE STATION, CONFERENCE ROOM - CONTINUOUS DAVY CAMPBELL
And we?ve a call from crofter
Macdonald about the cattle tagging
today. Says there?s going to be
trouble with the outsiders not feeding
their cattle in winter. Says “there
will be blood”. That?s a quote.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Christ, is that today? Probably all
blather. Send someone down there just
in case. Detective inspector Og?
23.
AENEAS
Aye.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
You?ve some experience with the
Macdonalds on this issue in the past, you take it, and take one of these brats with you. Teach them the bloody ropes. Anyone?
DAVY CAMPBELL
Me?
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Eh. No, Davy Campbell, no need fer you tae be gettin? into it wi? Colin Macdonald.
SARAH
I?ll go.
Aeneas looks over at Sarah. She has her hand up and smiles at
him. Hamish also smiles at Aeneas with a lascivious wink.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Is that it then?
He?s already leaving the room.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
I thought so. Detective inspector, in my office, please.
He has left. The others stand.
HAMISH
Hey. People.
They turn to look at him. He affects his worst American accent.
HAMISH
Be careful out there.
INT. DRUMMOND?S OFFICE - MOMENTS LATER
Drummond sits behind his desk, sharpening pencils. Aeneas
enters. He doesn?t look up.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Close the door.
Aeneas closes the door.
24.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
You gonnae tell me why you?re caked in shite?
AENEAS
Had to clear a road of sheep, sir. Drummond stops sharpening, and looks up. CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Settling in okay are you?
AENEAS
Yes sir.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND
Locals not giving you too much hassle? AENEAS
I can handle it, sir.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND They?re a nosy bloody bunch. How?re your folks? AENEAS
Good.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND Talkative fellow, aren?t you?
Aeneas says nothing.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND On your way then.
Aeneas opens the door. AENEAS
Chief inspector?
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND Aye.
AENEAS
Did you know that Donald Trump has a brother?
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND The Donald Trump?
AENEAS
Aye.
25.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND Not that I?m aware of.
AENEAS
He?s on the island, says he?s buying
up the Eilean Inn and building a casino resort.
CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND First I?ve heard of it.
Aeneas exits, closing the door. CHIEF INSPECTOR DRUMMOND Open.
Aeneas opens the door. INT. CAR - AFTERNOON
Aeneas and Sarah Knox drive in silence. She keeps glancing over
at him with a cheery look. SARAH
You?re the silent type, eh?
No answer.
SARAH
Everyone?s all a flutter about you
coming back. The gossip, och. I pay no
attention to it.
Silence.
SARAH
For example, they say you killed a
man, down in Glasgow, is it true?
Silence.
SARAH
Sorry. Am I being intrusive? AENEAS
I?m just gonnae stop off at the house
and drop off these groceries, Sarah, won?t take a minute.
SARAH
Don?t mind me. You going to the
ceilidh tonight then?
26.
AENEAS
I don?t think...
SARAH
Och come on, it?ll be magic! Live life!
Silence. She looks out at the sky, the beach to her left.
SARAH
Gorgeous day, isn?t it? Look at the
colors! Want tae pull over and find some seashells?
He just looks at her. She laughs, looks away.
SARAH
When I was a wee girl, I used to love going to the seashore, collecting seashells. All kinds of pretty shapes and colors. Ach. Come on.
She looks at him, more seriously, studying him. It makes Aeneas
uncomfortable.
SARAH
You?re the enigma, aren?t you?
AENEAS
Am I?
SARAH
“Am I?” I don?t know, are you?
She laughs again.
SARAH
You?re like those shells out there on
the beach. Will the real Aeneas Og please come on out, wherever he is? She shouts this out the window and laughs, girlishly.
SARAH
Och, you?re a clam. All clammed up.
But I?m gonnae steam you open. I?m
gonnae get to the bottom of you, detective inspector Og.
EXT. SANDY BEACH - AFTERNOON
The car pulls over and stops, engine still running.
27.
INT. CAR - CONTINUOUS
AENEAS
Go on.
SARAH
What?
AENEAS
Jump out. Have fun. Build a sandcastle or whatever it is you?re talking
about. I?ve work tae do.
SARAH
I...
AENEAS
I?ll be back around in an hour or so
and collect you. Go on.
Silence. She is humiliated.
SARAH
No. I?ve a job to do with you. Ropes
tae learn.
Silence. Aeneas puts the car in gear and drives away. Sarah
stares at him.
He stares ahead at the road.
EXT. OG RESIDENCE - AFTERNOON
The car pulls up to a gate. Aeneas exits, followed by Sarah.
AENEAS
Its quite alright, I?ll handle these.
SARAH
Don?t be silly, I?ll help.
She grabs a few of the shopping bags off Aeneas and follows him
to the front door of the house. INT. OG RESIDENCE - AFTERNOON
Aeneas enters, followed by Sarah. The TV is on loud in the other room.
AENEAS
Mum. Dad. Anyone up? Hello?
28.
MOTHER (V.O.)
Turn it down, I can?t hear myself think!
FATHER (V.O.)
Its not up loud. I can?t hear it.
MOTHER
Its so loud! Turn it down!
Aeneas has put the shopping bags down on the kitchen counter
and moves towards the TV room. Sarah waits there.
INT. TV ROOM, OG RESIDENCE - CONTINUOUS Aeneas stands in the door, unnoticed by his eighty year old
parents and observes their ritual daily TV struggle.
MOTHER
Don?t change the channel! I was watching that!
FATHER
I?m just seeing what else is on.
MOTHER
I want to watch the cooking show! FATHER
Its one o?clock, the news is on.
MOTHER
I want to watch my cooking channel Once a policeman, eh?
She throws a pillow at him, and notices Aeneas in the doorway
with a shriek.
MOTHER
Goodness! You gave me a fright! What on earth happened to you?
AENEAS
Ach. Fell in the mud, helping some tourists. MOTHER
Let me make you a cup of tea. Get out of those rags!
She is up and off into the kitchen. Aeneas stands there with
his father, who is watching the news. 29.
NEWSCASTER
In Scotland, the parliament vote which passed last year, to proceed with putting not just genetically modified foods, but also cloned meat into Scottish supermarkets is being met with stiff resistance by the church of Scotland and by picketeers across the country. AENEAS
Alright, dad?
His father doesn?t look up.
FATHER
Aye. Fine, son. Anything interesting today? AENEAS
Not much. Usual friday night trouble. Eh. Colin Macdonald?s dog bit his hand
this morning.
PROTESTOR ON TV
Its unGodly, is what it is. Its an aberration in the sight of God. These animals were given to us by God and now we?re going to refuse His bounty
and become our own Creator? This is a satanic plot.
FATHER
You bought the cloned meat, didn?t ye?
AENEAS
Aye.
FATHER
Good. I dinnae mind the taste. So long as the poor beasties don?t suffer. Nae
need fer that nae mare.
AENEAS
I?m a vegetarian, dad, remember?
FATHER
Are you? Since when?
AENEAS
Since about a year ago.
FATHER
Oh, aye. Anything else?
30.
AENEAS
Aye. Some of the kids grafitti?d the
harbor sign again, and there?s a car
abandoned in a ditch over by Eilean Loch. FATHER
Kids these days.
AENEAS
Oh, and Turnbull?s pig has been kidnapped.
FATHER
Kidnapped? Kidnapped ye say?
His father?s face turns towards him. An old bulldog of a face.
He turns off the tv and stands eye to eye with his son.
FATHER
Any clues?
AENEAS
No clues yet.
INT. OG KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
Mother has the kettle on. We hear a toilet flush and Sarah
enters. Mother is watching out the window. MOTHER
Get away from those birds! You mean pussy!
SARAH
Oh, hello!
Aeneas? mother turns and stares steadily at Sarah. MOTHER
Hello. How are you?
She seems strangely hostile to her. Pushes past her to fetch
some tea cups.
MOTHER
I?m making tea, you going to have some or not?
SARAH
Eh. Is your son having some? I suppose its fine, he?ll have to change out of
those muddy rags.
31.
Mother turns on her.
MOTHER
My son does not wear rags. How dare you. SARAH
Excuse me?
MOTHER
He hasn?t got a bad bone in his body.
I always said you were no good for him. Drove him away, you did, and now he?s back, well here you are again.
Sniffing around, looking for trouble. SARAH
Eh, Mrs. Og, I think you might have me mistaken for someone else.
MOTHER
I know who you are!
SARAH
I?m Sarah Knox. I?m on the force with your son.
Aeneas enters followed by his father. FATHER
Of course it?s the local kids.
Question is who. That troublemaker, Lachlan, you know, son of the store manager. Like father like son. It?s
probably him. Sounds like something he?d get up to. Not right in the head, that one.
AENEAS
Are we doing alright?
SARAH
Aye, your mother was just making us some tea.
MOTHER
I?m just making the tea. What?s your name again, dear?
SARAH
Sarah Knox.
32.
MOTHER
Do you want a McVitie, Sarah, with your tea?
SARAH
I shouldn?t really. Och, go on then.
FATHER
I?ll have to see the ransom note. Can
you get that to me today? That?ll hold
clues. Its all in the handwriting. Spelling mistakes. I?ll get my books
out on interpreting handwriting, you just bring me that note over this afternoon, son.
AENEAS
We can?t stop for tea, mum. Gottae get
to the Macdonald croft , they?re
tagging the cows.
MOTHER
Och. I do enjoy a good tagging! She says this to Sarah. Aeneas is walking up the stairs.
AENEAS
I?ll be two minutes and we?ve gottae run.
FATHER
Hello Moira. Back on the force then, are you?
Sarah looks confused.
MOTHER
Och, this isn?t Moira. Her name is
Sarah. Ignore him. He?s hopeless. Have
you been to a tagging before? Mother is going through the shopping. MOTHER
No no no. I wanted McVities digestives, not ginger snaps! Did you write it down on the list? I bet you didn?t.
This to father, who is studying Sarah. 33.
FATHER
Aye, I wrote it down. McVities digestives, now Sarah, you?re aware of
this kidnapping, aren?t you?
SARAH
Sorry, Mr. Og?
FATHER
The case of the missing pig.
SARAH
Aye. I found the ransom note. FATHER
Did you now? And would you happen to have it on your person?
MOTHER
There?s coffee here, but no tea. I
don?t drink coffee!
SARAH
I don?t have it.
MOTHER
I know you don?t have it. She hasn?t
got the tea, you stupid man. But I wanted tea!
FATHER
Ah ha, but you could get your hands on it. Could you not?
Mother hits father on the arm. MOTHER
She hasn?t got the tea! Useless!
EXT. MACDONALD CROFT - TWENTY MINUTES LATER A bellowing cow is being tagged on the ear. And released. Next.
The crofters are standing around. Now they begin to murmur. One
of the outsider?s cows is up. Colin Macdonald, nursing his hand
in a sling speaks up.
COLIN MACDONALD
Feed your bloody cattle, Sinclair. Crofter Sinclair, not born on the island faces off.
34.
SINCLAIR
Mind your own bloody business, Macdonald.
In the background we can see Aeneas? car pulling up. He and
Sarah get out and approach.
COLIN MACDONALD
Look at the state of them. I can see their ribs.
SINCLAIR
Utter nonsense. There?s plenty of
grass on the hills, even in winter. COLIN MACDONALD
He?s gonnae tell us how tae rear
cattle, an? he?s been doin? this two years.
SINCLAIR
Two years up here, three years down south.
COLIN MACDONALD
The Macdonalds been rearin? cattle for
sixteen generations, an? I?m tellin? you....
SINCLAIR
Get out of my face, Colin, I?ll deck you.
Aeneas steps in.
AENEAS
Easy now, there?s no need for violence...
COLIN MACDONALD
Stay out of this Og, this doesn?t
concern the police.
AENEAS
Colin , I?m going to have to ask you
to calm down.
COLIN MACDONALD
Me? What about him? He doesn?t even
know how many head of cattle he?s got!
35.
SINCLAIR
Oh what does it bloody matter, we?re
all out of business anyway, everyone?s
being sold on this God damned cloned meat. A bellowing as Sinclair?s cow is tagged and released. Confusion suddenly as the cow seems to eye up Macdonald and runs at him.
Sarah screams.
SINCLAIR
Watch it!
He throws himself at Macdonald and gets trampled by the rampaging cow.
Silence. Then suddenly, Sarah and Aeneas move into action.
AENEAS
Sarah, call an ambulance.
She moves to the car and whips out a mobile phone. Aeneas
kneels next to Sinclair and Macdonald. Macdonald is stunned but unhurt.
Sinclair however, is hurt. Badly. He is unconscious. AENEAS
Mister Sinclair, can you hear me?
The crofters surround them.
AENEAS
Move back, give the man air. Don?t move him.
Aeneas stands back and observes the carnage. COLIN MACDONALD
Saved my life, he did.
He says it in shock as they all look at the unconscious body.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT TWO
36.
ACT THREE
FADE IN:
EXT. EILEAN HOSPITAL - DUSK Establishing shot off the setting sun, a spectacular sunset.
INT. EILEAN HOSPITAL - EVENING Aeneas, Sarah and Colin Macdonald sit in the waiting area.
Sarah stands.
SARAH
I?m going to get a coffee. Anyone?
AENEAS
No thanks, Sarah.
Macdonald is too preoccupied to answer. She walks away.
AENEAS
Alright, Colin?
COLIN MACDONALD
He saved my life, Aeneas. Threw himself in front of the beastie. AENEAS
Aye.
COLIN MACDONALD
Years now we?ve been squabblin?. Last
year we came to blows. Damn near close to it the noo.
AENEAS
Aye.
COLIN MACDONALD
I wouldn?t a? done the same for him, if it came to it.
AENEAS
You don?t know that.
COLIN MACDONALD
Aye but. I wouldn?ae.
AENEAS
You don?t know that, Colin. Ordinary
folk perform extraordinary tasks when
the occasion demands.
37.
COLIN MACDONALD
He doesn?ae even know how many head of
cattle he?s got.
AENEAS
Well, looks like he?s out for the
count for a while.
COLIN MACDONALD
Dinnae worry aboot his cattle, I?ll
take care of them fer the noo. AENEAS
That?s good of you, Colin.
COLIN MACDONALD
Least I can do. Saved my life.
The doctor comes through the doors marked Emergency. Both men
stand. Sarah reappears with her coffee. DOCTOR DALRYMPLE
Gentlemen.
AENEAS
How is he, doctor?
DOCTOR DALRYMPLE
He?s resting now. There?s trauma to
the cranium, we?ve got him sedated,
and we?ll just have to wait and see if
the swelling continues or if it starts to improve. If it gets any worst overnight, we?ll have to have him
evacuated to the mainland, I don?t
have the facilities to deal with him here. How?s the hand, Colin?
He tries to take his hand, Macdonald whips it away.
COLIN MACDONALD
Leave it.
DOCTOR DALRYMPLE
There?s nothing you can do here
tonight. I suggest you go to the ceilidh and try to relax. I?m sure its
been a long week for all of us. SARAH
Are those doctor?s orders, doctor?
She says this with a pointed look at Aeneas. 38.
DOCTOR DALRYMPLE
Aeneas, may I have a word with you alone? They move away from the others. DOCTOR DALRYMPLE
Its about Colin?s hand. You said he
was bitten by his dog, didn?t you?
AENEAS
Aye.
DOCTOR DALRYMPLE
Those punctures were not made by a dog, Aeneas.
AENEAS
What are you saying?
DOCTOR DALRYMPLE
They were made by a human being. Aeneas looks across the room at Colin Macdonald. Is he snarling
at them?
CUT TO:
EXT. CEILIDH HALL - NIGHT
A band plays. The twins we saw last night, beating each other senseless, and this morning in the cell are now best of friends again, dancing arm in arm, drinking off that hangover, working on a new one for tomorrow.
TWINS
Hamish! Come and dance wi? us!
Hamish and Davy, standing at the bar, watch them with mild amusement.
DAVY CAMPBELL
Weren?t those two in the holding cell
just this morning?
HAMISH
Aye.
Davy elbows him. For through the front door of the hall enters Sarah Knox.
39.
If she looked pretty earlier on in her police uniform, now, with her wild mane of strawberry hair, thick like hay and perfumed like the sweet morning dew, cascading down her pale shoulders, she looks more like a conquering Viking goddess, come to slay all mankind.
She spies the lads and strolls across the room, which goes silent. The band has stopped playing. The two drunken twins have just sobered up.
SARAH
Play! Don?t stop!
This is an order to the band, and who are they to disobey the great blonde tormentor of men, in her crimson boots and black leather trousers, which hug her delightful cello shaped derriere. Hamish falls to his knees.
HAMISH
Oh ye Gods, take pity on this mortal soul.
Davy embraces the opposite strategy, and attempts to act cool. SARAH
Hello davy.
DAVY CAMPBELL
Aye, whatever.
HAMISH
Tiger, tiger, burning bright, in the
middle of the night, what immortal
hand or eye, could frame thy fearful
symmetry?
SARAH
Fearful?
HAMISH
I?m shaking, touch my hand. I?ve gone
cold as ice. Am I dying?
SARAH
You?ve gone white as a sheet.
HAMISH
Past cure am I, now reason is past care, and frantic mad with ever more unrest, my thoughts and my discourse as madman?s are, at random from the
truth vainly expressed.
40.
DAVY CAMPBELL
Hamish, chill.
HAMISH
Shut up, Davy. For I have sworn thee fair and thought thee bright, who art as black as hell; as dark as night. SARAH
That?s not very nice.
HAMISH
I?m not very nice. I?m a devil. I?m an
animal in the sack. Ask around. Grrr.... SARAH
Who wants to dance?
HAMISH
That was Shakespeare by the way. I?m
not nice but I?ve got a mind like a steel trap.
But Davy has whisked her away onto the dance floor. Hamish
watches them with envy.
HAMISH
Round one, Davy Campbell.
Hamish notices the twins making a beeline straight for him. He
sees Aeneas sitting with Duncan in a darkened corner of the
room and hurries in their direction, pulling out his flask.
HAMISH
I come bearing poison.
He pours a shot in each of their glasses. Duncan is
enthusiastically predicting a wealthy future for himself.
DUNCAN
He?s talking a million pound for the
Inn alone, and then another million for the acreage around it. That?s no
chicken feed.
Aeneas is drunk. He holds his liquor well, but he?s drunk.
AENEAS
Duncan.
DUNCAN
Aye.
41.
AENEAS
Duncan.
DUNCAN
Aye. That?s my name.
AENEAS
Duncan.
DUNCAN
I know what yer gonnae say.
AENEAS
You?ve got his passport, right? DUNCAN
Aye, I?m no fool.
AENEAS
And he?s been paying his tab?
DUNCAN
(lying) Aye.
AENEAS
Duncan.
DUNCAN
Leave me alone. HAMISH
Oh aye? You think the Trump fella?s an impostor?
Duncan gets up, annoyed.
DUNCAN
Shut it, both of you!
AENEAS
Duncan!
DUNCAN
Stop raining on my parade. You?re just filled with the sin of envy. Its a
terrible disease, envy. It?ll give ye the cancer! I?m one lucky bastard! COLIN MACDONALD and his mates swing by.
MACDONALD
Hey, Duncanson 42.
DUNCAN
Aye?
MACDONALD
Where?s yer pretty young mail order bride tonight then?
DUNCAN
She?s tending bar back at the inn.
MACDONALD
You sure aboot that?
DUNCAN
What do you mean?
Macdonald laughs with the others. MACDONALD
Tend to yer sheep, Duncanson, tend to yer sheep.
DUNCAN
The fuck does that mean?
MACDONALD
There be thieves in them thar hills. The others laugh, a mocking laughter. Deep resentments in this
community. Macdonald and his gang saunter off. Duncan stares
after them. He turns to Hamish. DUNCAN
You know anything aboot that? HAMISH
Nothin?
DUNCAN
Are they suggesting my wife is galavanting aboot wi? someone on the island?
HAMISH
Leave it alone, Duncan.
DUNCAN
She disnae have the time, what with the bar, the restaurant, and then the sunset spa. She disnae have time. I?ll
cut her throat.
HAMISH
Och, Duncan.
43.
DUNCAN
And I?ll cut the balls off the prick.
Still handy with the old gelding knife, ye know. I may have moved on from sheep farmin?, but its like
ridin? a bike, some thing ye never
forget. But I?ll forgrt how tae pull a
pint fast enough. I?m gonnae be a
wealthy man!
Hamish looks uncomfortable.
Duncan has danced away. Aeneas sits back. Looks at Hamish who
raises an eyebrow and winks at the dance floor.
They watch Sarah dancing with Davy. Aeneas sits up.
Moira has entered the hall. She notices Aeneas straight away,
but turns away and heads to the bar. HAMISH
Uh oh.
AENEAS
Uh oh what?
HAMISH
Eh?
AENEAS
Uh oh. You said uh oh.
HAMISH
No, I didn?t.
AENEAS
Hamish.
HAMISH
I didnae say uh oh. I may have said it?s gonnae snow. Tomorrow. You know.
AENEAS
Why would you say that?
HAMISH
I dunno. But if the interrogation is over, Serpico, I do know that you owe me a hula hula show.
AENEAS
Serpico?
44.
HAMISH
Folks dress up for a ceilidh around here in case you?d forgotten. They
take baths, mister Og.
AENEAS
Oh no.
HAMISH
Oh ho ho ho.
He is dragging him up onto the dance floor.
AENEAS
Hamish. Get off.
HAMISH
Ladies and gents, I?d like you all to
give a warm hand to our newly promoted detective inspector Aeneas Og whose just back in our midst after a hard slog down on the mean streets o?
Glasgae. He?s back! We missed him, didn?t we?
Applause. He raises his glass as if to speak. Forgets what he?s
going to say.
HAMISH
Bollocks.
To laughter, he drinks. Aeneas, tries to leave the dance floor,
but Hamish grabs him and begins to waltz around the room.
Aeneas warms up.
Sarah cuts in.
SARAH
May I?
HAMISH
But of course.
Hamish goes to waltz with her, but she grabs Aeneas instead and
off she goes, to the dismay of Hamish. They dance in silence. Aeneas has a warm fuzzy smile on his
face. He has relaxed. Sarah notices this. SARAH
You dance well, detective inspector. 45.
AENEAS
Thanks. Listen, about earlier, I?m
sorry if I was a little tough...
SARAH
Ach. I?m no dainty flower, I can take
it. Your parents are sweet.
AENEAS
Eccentric.
SARAH
But sweet. Where did they go wrong with you? AENEAS
Haha.
He is looking at Moira who is now dancing with Hamish. Sarah
notices his attention drifting to Moira, who cleans up well. At
forty, she is a handsome woman.
SARAH
So Moira, eh?
AENEAS
Sorry?
SARAH
Your mother thought I was Moira
earlier. She your ex?
AENEAS
Aye. There she is now.
He nods over at Moira. Sarah studies her. SARAH
And she broke your heart?
Aeneas laughs almost bitterly.
AENEAS
Quite the opposite actually. I ran off and did all the breaking.
SARAH
Then why are you the one who?s wearing
the lost puppy look?
AENEAS
Am I?
46.
Aeneas notices that Hamish?s hand has wandered to Moira?s ass.
She lifts it back up to her waist. It slides down to her ass
again, more insistently. She moves it back. Sarah is singing in his ear, rather erotically. SARAH
Forget your troubles, come on get
happy, you better chase all your
cares away. Shout hallelujah, come on get happy, get ready for the judgement day. But Aeneas has disconnected. He pulls away and tries to stroll
as calmly as possible over to Moira and the lascivious Hamish.
He stands before them, swaying slightly. AENEAS
Mind if I cut in.
Hamish glances at him.
HAMISH
Yeah, I do actually.
He keeps dancing, he holds her tight to him, she looks
uncomfortable. Sarah stands watching this in the background.
Aeneas leans in and taps him on the shoulder. AENEAS
I?m not asking.
Hamish stops dancing and faces Aeneas. HAMISH
Oh aye?
AENEAS
I?m telling you, she doesn?t
appreciate the wandering digits, pal. HAMISH
“Women?s emancipation”, inspector. Why
don?t we ask the lady herself what she
thinks of my digits?
AENEAS
You?re an arse, sergeant.
MOIRA
Aeneas.
47.
HAMISH
You wanna dance with this clown, Moira? AENEAS
I?m gonnae ask you one time.
HAMISH
Big man, are ye?
AENEAS
I?m gonnae ask you one time.
Hamish laughs in his face and grabs Moira?s arm.
HAMISH
Come on Moira.
MOIRA
I don?t want to dance with either of you big idiots.
It all happens very quickly. She pulls her arm away, he holds
onto it, Aeneas takes an accurate swing at his chin with a left
hook and almost simultaneously Hamish?s left hook connects with
Aeneas? face.
A woman screams as the two men go down. The violence is real
here. And it has consequences.
Pandemonium.
MOIRA
No! NO!
FADE TO BLACK.
INT. CAR - NIGHT
Aeneas comes to. His jaw is in pain, he has a split lip and
blood has spilled all over his clothes. He is in the passenger
seat. Moira is driving.
AENEAS
Where are you taking me?
MOIRA
I can?t let your parents see you in this state.
He sits up and turns the rear view mirror to inspect the
damage. Moira is fuming. She lets loose. 48.
MOIRA
The fuck was that about, Aeneas? AENEAS
He was touching your arse.
MOIRA
I had it under control.
AENEAS
He was touching your arse and I didn?t like it.
MOIRA
(shouting) Am I your piece of arse then? Is that what this is? Hey?
Silence. She drives in the dark. Dangerously brimming over with emotions that have been kept in check for ten years, wounds that have never truly healed.
AENEAS
I?m sorry.
MOIRA
Oh, that?ll fix it all. That?ll make
it all go away. You?re fucking sorry?
Grow up. Act your age. One day you run
away, not a word, ten years later
you?re back, and you?re casing my
house, following me around like you?re
Popeye Doyle, or Dirty fucking Harry,
yeah, I saw you, I was on the force
with you for ten years, remember? I
was practically married to you, its in
my bones, lord help me.
She has pulled over. Turns off the engine. Considers letting loose. Decides against it. Gets out.
MOIRA
Come on. Both of you clowns. And shut up.
She walks away. Hamish sits up, looking sheepish, holding a bag of ice to his eye.
HAMISH
Are we home already?
AENEAS
What the hell are you doin? here?
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Hamish gets out slowly and closes the car door on one side, Aeneas on the other. Aeneas and Hamish stare at each other. Then they both follow her up the path to her door, which she has opened, and into the house.
INT. MOIRA?S HOUSE, LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
She throws Aeneas? car keys and her bag on the coffee table.
Points at the couch.
MOIRA
There?s your bed.
He sits down on it. She towers over him, hands on her hips, ready to blast him some more.
HAMISH
I?ll just grab my stuff and be on my way then.
MOIRA
You do that, Hamish.
Hamish grabs his cycling gear in a bag and heads for the door. From the stairs, a voice, sleepy.
BREE
Mummy?
Moira turns and gathers up her daughter in her arms. BREE
Who?s that?
MOIRA
Ssh, baby, back to bed, now, mummy
will be up in a sec.
BREE
Hello uncle Hamish.
HAMISH
Hello darlin? Gi?us a kiss goodnight then.
BREE
Come and read me a story.
HAMISH
It?s a wee bit late for stories, love.
BREE
Uncle Hamish is a policeman!
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The baby sitter appears.
BABYSITTER
She was asleep but she woke up when the car pulled up, sorry.
MOIRA
Put her back in bed, I?ll be right up.
The babysitter leaves the room. Moira turns back to face
Aeneas, sitting on the couch, with a puzzled expression.
AENEAS
You have a daughter?
Hamish looks from one to the other. She nods, staring at him. He searches for his thoughts.
AENEAS
How old is she?
MOIRA
Ten.
She stares at him. He sits back. It sinks in. AENEAS
So who?s the father?
Silence.
HAMISH
I?ll be off then.
Hamish slips out the front door. Aeneas, confused, watches the
door close. Then he looks back to Moira. Moira takes a blanket and practically flings it at him. She
leans in and the words come out with a hiss.
MOIRA
First thing in the morning I want you out. Gone. Am I clear?
He nods his head. She turns and leaves, flipping off the light
switch. He lays down, staring at the ceiling. Closes his weary eyes.
END OF SHOW.
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