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Tpo小站专业托福 1 对 1 TPO小站专业托福一对一保分指导http://tpooo.taobao.com QQ：380586497 托福备考超级群：102662731 共 17171717种类型（TWE185TWE185TWE185TWE185题库） 1.1.1.1. 建造问题： itititit hashashashas beenbeenbeenbeen announcedannouncedannouncedannounced thatthatthatthat aaaa newnewnewnew factory\restaurant\shoppingfactory\restaurant\shoppingfactory\restaurant\shoppingfactory\restaurant\shopping center\moviecenter\moviecenter\moviecenter\movie theatre\hightheatre\hightheatre\hightheatre\high school\statueschool\statueschool\statueschool\statue orororor monument\agriculturemonument\agriculturemonument\agriculturemonument\agriculture orororor businessbusinessbusinessbusiness researchresearchresearchresearch centercentercentercenter Advantage: 1. offering jobs 2. stimulate the development of local business 3. increase the revenue and thus government can distribute more fund for education, welfare, and health care. 4. offering a place for relaxation Disadvantages: 1. environment pollution: noise, dust, air.(in construction) 2. aggravate traffic burden. 3. damage the original design of the community(finished) 2222．假设问题((((参照口语 1111，2222题)))) 3.3.3.3.品德问题: what qualities of good teacher\supervisor\neighbor\children \roommates\parent Good qualities: 1. respect other’s privacy 2. can give a hand to others when people are in trouble 3. understand others well 4. have a solid basic of professional techniques(one should build on a firm ground) 5. industrious\hardworking 6. aggressive\ambitious 4.4.4.4.花钱问题:::: University\ company\ government\ one spend money in doing A or B? a.a.a.a. (university)sports(university)sports(university)sports(university)sports activityactivityactivityactivity orororor library?library?library?library? 1. sports can improve one’s health 2. sports can cultivate one’s teamwork 3. sports can provide people a aggressive and competitive attitude 4. sports activity can increase the reputation of a college. b.b.b.b. ((((GGGGovernment)overnment)overnment)overnment) ameliorateameliorateameliorateameliorate thethethethe roadroadroadroad conditionsconditionsconditionsconditions orororor publicpublicpublicpublic transportations(buses,transportations(buses,transportations(buses,transportations(buses, trains,trains,trains,trains, Tpo小站专业托福 1 对 1 TPO小站专业托福一对一保分指导http://tpooo.taobao.com QQ：380586497 托福备考超级群：102662731 subway)?subway)?subway)?subway)? 1. road condition is the basic factor that contributes to the efficiency of traffic. 2. a convenient highway system can attract investment outside the city or even state. 3. from the perspective of a environmentalist, people should be encouraged more to make use of the public transportation to protect the environment c.c.c.c. (one)enjoy(one)enjoy(one)enjoy(one)enjoy moneymoneymoneymoney orororor savesavesavesave money?money?money?money? 1. the ultimate goal to earn money is to enjoy a higher life quality. 2. spending money stimulate people to earn more money. 3. when the financial situation is not so tight, saving… d.d.d.d. aaaa piecepiecepiecepiece ofofofof jewelryjewelryjewelryjewelry orororor tickets?tickets?tickets?tickets? 1. love art 2. a good relaxation 3. can go with friends, and enjoy friendship e.e.e.e. artartartart orororor environment?environment?environment?environment? 1. environment is the basic things people depend on 2. can win more support of the public 3. art is necessary f. buybuybuybuy carcarcarcar orororor gogogogo forforforfor aaaa vocation?vocation?vocation?vocation? 1. vocation can provide a relaxation 2. private car will contribute to the air pollution, and I usually tend to take bus or subway. 3. go vocation with friends. g.g.g.g. purchasepurchasepurchasepurchase aaaa househousehousehouse orororor aaaa business?business?business?business? 1. a big house on the broad white beach and near the wide sea is a dream of mine since I was a kid. 2. I am not good at running a business,. 3. running a business will met with a lot of troubles; 5555．原因问题 a.a.a.a. attendingattendingattendingattending collegecollegecollegecollege forforforfor what?what?what?what? 1. receive a scientific and systematic methodology: cultivate the ability to solve problem. 2. form a healthy value and unique personality. 3. making friends b.b.b.b. whywhywhywhy visitvisitvisitvisit museummuseummuseummuseum whilewhilewhilewhile travelingtravelingtravelingtraveling totototo thethethethe newnewnewnew places?places?places?places? 1. museum reflect the culture of a city or a country. 2. museum enable visitors to know about the local customs and culture in a short time. Tpo小站专业托福 1 对 1 TPO小站专业托福一对一保分指导http://tpooo.taobao.com QQ：380586497 托福备考超级群：102662731 3. some rare treasures can be only displayed in museum. c.c.c.c. causescausescausescauses ofofofof longerlongerlongerlonger livinglivinglivingliving 1. scientific methods to improve the life quality 2. comfortable living condition, rather than the tough, live-or-die condition in the ancient times. 3. There is a growing concern about health among individuals, exercises, reasonable diet, scientific schedule of work and rest. d.d.d.d. whywhywhywhy peoplepeoplepeoplepeople areareareare attractedattractedattractedattracted bybybyby dangerousdangerousdangerousdangerous sports.sports.sports.sports. 1. life quality has raised, people do not only aim at a healthy life but also seek for a adventure life. 2. attending these dangerous sports derives from the potential spirit of human: challenging. 3. alleviate the pressure/ stress e.e.e.e. peoplepeoplepeoplepeople workworkworkwork forforforfor what?what?what?what? (except(except(except(except money)money)money)money) 1. for achieving one’s dreams. (manager) 2. for enjoying the process.(artists) 3. making friends. 5.5.5.5. 交友问题 a.a.a.a. makingmakingmakingmaking friendsfriendsfriendsfriends withwithwithwith whichwhichwhichwhich qualities?qualities?qualities?qualities? (sense(sense(sense(sense ofofofof humor,humor,humor,humor, intelligent,intelligent,intelligent,intelligent, reliable)reliable)reliable)reliable) 1. friendship is based on honesty, so if one is unreliable for me, he or she cannot be my friend, let alone a close friend. 2. a honest friend won’t betray me when (见 excel 文件) b.b.b.b. spendspendspendspend mostmostmostmost ofofofof timetimetimetime withwithwithwith friendsfriendsfriendsfriends orororor alonealonealonealone 1. can gain lot about the positive behaviors and conduct of friends 2. acquire more information of various field 3. people still need spend time alone to contemplate about one’s life, future career, or personality. c.c.c.c. spendspendspendspend timetimetimetime withwithwithwith aaaa fewfewfewfew closeclosecloseclose friendsfriendsfriendsfriends orororor withwithwithwith aaaa largelargelargelarge numbernumbernumbernumber ofofofof friends.friends.friends.friends. 1. personally, I enjoy having various kind of friends since I can learn different things in their areas. 2. improve one’s teamwork and the ability to communicate 3. close friends should be cherished, but as a socialized person,… d.d.d.d. choosechoosechoosechoose friendsfriendsfriendsfriends similarsimilarsimilarsimilar totototo youyouyouyou orororor differentdifferentdifferentdifferent fromfromfromfrom youyouyouyou 1. if people share a same goal or dream, they can encourage each other and help each other to achieve their goal. 2. with a congenial friend, one can communicate one’s idea better. 3. yet people should tolerate the one different from them Tpo小站专业托福 1 对 1 TPO小站专业托福一对一保分指导http://tpooo.taobao.com QQ：380586497 托福备考超级群：102662731 7.7.7.7. 学习与教育 a.a.a.a. knowledgeknowledgeknowledgeknowledge gainedgainedgainedgained fromfromfromfrom booksbooksbooksbooks andandandand knowledgeknowledgeknowledgeknowledge gainedgainedgainedgained fromfromfromfrom experience,experience,experience,experience, whichwhichwhichwhich isisisis moremoremoremore important?important?important?important? 1. people, especially the college students can acquire a systematic frame of knowledge, widely and thoroughly. 2. laying a solid theoretical basic on a subject is highly necessary for one before put it in practice. 3. many knowledge cannot be gained from experience, but only through computer simulation and result analysis can people progress on the subject. (theoretical math and theoretical physics) b.b.b.b. collegecollegecollegecollege studentsstudentsstudentsstudents shouldshouldshouldshould bebebebe requiredrequiredrequiredrequired totototo attendattendattendattend classesclassesclassesclasses orororor not?not?not?not? 1. in terms of students, especially a young student, ennui can hardly be avoided, so it is necessary… 2. erudite professors of a college are the most essential treasure, and thus the lectures of them are significant. 3. However, students do need some hours alone in library to contemplate on their life, or other academic issues. c.c.c.c. learnlearnlearnlearn bybybyby studentsstudentsstudentsstudents themselvesthemselvesthemselvesthemselves orororor withwithwithwith aaaa teacher,teacher,teacher,teacher, whichwhichwhichwhich isisisis better?better?better?better? （同上） d.d.d.d. dailydailydailydaily assignmentsassignmentsassignmentsassignments areareareare necessarynecessarynecessarynecessary orororor not?not?not?not? (同上) e.e.e.e. gradesgradesgradesgrades encourageencourageencourageencourage studentsstudentsstudentsstudents totototo learn?learn?learn?learn? 1. learn for chasing their dream. 2. learn for their personal interest: they just love this subject or field. 3. maybe the poverty of their family encourage them. f.f.f.f. taketaketaketake classclassclassclass inininin manymanymanymany subjectssubjectssubjectssubjects orororor specializespecializespecializespecialize inininin oneoneoneone subjectsubjectsubjectsubject 1. it is necessary for high school students to lay a solid basic by studying various subjects for their further education. 2. before contacting with these kinds of subjects, students may be not clear about which field they actually love 3. when entering the college, specializing in a certain major is suggested. g.g.g.g. ChildrenChildrenChildrenChildren shouldshouldshouldshould beginbeginbeginbegin learninglearninglearninglearning aaaa foreignforeignforeignforeign languagelanguagelanguagelanguage asasasas soonsoonsoonsoon asasasas theytheytheythey startstartstartstart schoolschoolschoolschool orororor not?not?not?not? 1. first of all, children should master the native language well before they start to learn another one. 2. it is blind to require children to study a foreign language if they are not interested with it. 3. after children grow, it is necessary for them to learn a foreign language, just like they also need to study math and physics. h.h.h.h. BoysBoysBoysBoys andandandand girlsgirlsgirlsgirls shouldshouldshouldshould attendattendattendattend separateseparateseparateseparate schools.schools.schools.schools. 1. since the boys’ characteristics are different with those of girls’, they can develop their fine Tpo小站专业托福 1 对 1 TPO小站专业托福一对一保分指导http://tpooo.taobao.com QQ：380586497 托福备考超级群：102662731 personality by being influenced positively each other. 2. a school having both boys and girls can offer a bigger platform for children to make friends, and from more friends children can learn different things. (soccer, movie) 3. living in a environment filled of all boys or all girls might distort a boy or a girl’s mind, since when they enter society, what they face with is a place where all men and women work equally i.i.i.i. SchoolsSchoolsSchoolsSchools shouldshouldshouldshould askaskaskask studentsstudentsstudentsstudents totototo evaluateevaluateevaluateevaluate theirtheirtheirtheir teachers.teachers.teachers.teachers. 1. urge teacher more responsible and concentrative on students, and thus students can receive an education of higher quality. 2. In terms of the rights of a consumer, since a student pay the tuition, they enjoy their rights in evaluating the education system. 3. the validity of the evaluation should be assured. j.j.j.j. collegecollegecollegecollege orororor universityuniversityuniversityuniversity educationeducationeducationeducation shouldshouldshouldshould bebebebe availableavailableavailableavailable totototo allallallall students.students.students.students. OthersOthersOthersOthers believebelievebelievebelieve thatthatthatthat higherhigherhigherhigher educationeducationeducationeducation shouldshouldshouldshould bebebebe availableavailableavailableavailable onlyonlyonlyonly totototo goodgoodgoodgood studentsstudentsstudentsstudents 1. since going to college is to receive a further education, so its precondition is students do well in the high school. 2. if enter college become available to all students, it is highly possible for some unexpected ones to enter college, who might just want to spend leisure days in college. This will decrease the whole efficiency of education… 3. on the other hand, not available to college does not mean the rest of students will lead a bleak life in future: they can study in some technical school k.k.k.k. whichwhichwhichwhich isisisis thethethethe bestbestbestbest waywaywayway ofofofof learninglearninglearninglearning aboutaboutaboutabout lifelifelifelife,,,, bybybyby listeninglisteninglisteninglistening totototo thethethethe adviceadviceadviceadvice ofofofof familyfamilyfamilyfamily andandandand friendsfriendsfriendsfriends orororor throughthroughthroughthrough personalpersonalpersonalpersonal experienceexperienceexperienceexperience???? 1. some other’s experience does not work the same with me, since people’s ideologies and methodologies are different. 2. times is lapsing since its existence, which means all the things happened second before have become the history. 3. other’s advice should be valued. l.l.l.l. PeoplePeoplePeoplePeople shouldshouldshouldshould readreadreadread onlyonlyonlyonly thosethosethosethose booksbooksbooksbooks thatthatthatthat areareareare aboutaboutaboutabout realrealrealreal events,events,events,events, realrealrealreal people,people,people,people, andandandand establishedestablishedestablishedestablished factsfactsfactsfacts 1. as for children, fairy tales will always be the best book. Full of imagination and beauty, enlighten children and show them a perfect world. 2. Even for adults, fictions can relax.(Harry potter) 3. newspaper and journals are still the major approach to collect effective information. m.m.m.m. moremoremoremore importantimportantimportantimportant forforforfor studentsstudentsstudentsstudents totototo studystudystudystudy historyhistoryhistoryhistory andandandand literatureliteratureliteratureliterature orororor totototo studystudystudystudy sciencesciencesciencescience andandandand mathematicsmathematicsmathematicsmathematics???? 1. science and mathematics are the basic of the modern world in almost every field. 2. learn science and mathematics can develop one’s logic and ways of thinking 3. history and literature is necessary. Tpo小站专业托福 1 对 1 TPO小站专业托福一对一保分指导http://tpooo.taobao.com QQ：380586497 托福备考超级群：102662731 n.n.n.n. AllAllAllAll studentsstudentsstudentsstudents shouldshouldshouldshould bebebebe requiredrequiredrequiredrequired totototo studystudystudystudy artartartart andandandand musicmusicmusicmusic inininin secondarysecondarysecondarysecondary schoolschoolschoolschool 1. art can help student develop a fine personality. EQ is as important as IQ 2. art can relax 3. science should never be ignored. o.o.o.o. ThereThereThereThere isisisis nothingnothingnothingnothing thatthatthatthat youngyoungyoungyoung peoplepeoplepeoplepeople cancancancan teachteachteachteach olderolderolderolder people.people.people.people. 1. technology develops rapidly, it is easy for the older people to keep pace with the era. 2. young people always tend to show ambitious and aggressive personality, and it is of great significance. 3. however,.. p.p.p.p. HighHighHighHigh schoolsschoolsschoolsschools shouldshouldshouldshould allowallowallowallow studentsstudentsstudentsstudents totototo studystudystudystudy thethethethe coursescoursescoursescourses thatthatthatthat studentsstudentsstudentsstudents wantwantwantwant totototo studystudystudystudy???? 1. from the perspective of a consumer, since students pay the tuition, they enjoy the rights to choose the courses they like. 2. since the aim of high school is to lay a solid foundation for students’ further education, thus a wide range of subjects can benefit students much.. 3. However, a student should be aware of the significance of the basic subjects, such as math and physics q.q.q.q. studentsstudentsstudentsstudents shouldshouldshouldshould bebebebe givengivengivengiven oneoneoneone longlonglonglong vacationvacationvacationvacation eacheacheacheach yearyearyearyear orororor severalseveralseveralseveral shortshortshortshort vocationvocationvocationvocation duringduringduringduring aaaa year?year?year?year? 1. short is better. Since during a long vacation students can easily forget the things taught in lecture or learned in books when in school, so… 2. long vocation also means a long semester, which will make students feel boring about the… 3. short vocations can have.. r.r.r.r. studyingstudyingstudyingstudying atatatat homehomehomehome bybybyby usingusingusingusing technologytechnologytechnologytechnology suchsuchsuchsuch asasasas computerscomputerscomputerscomputers orororor televisiontelevisiontelevisiontelevision orororor ofofofof studyingstudyingstudyingstudying atatatat traditionaltraditionaltraditionaltraditional schoolsschoolsschoolsschools 1. discussion and presentation. 2. atmosphere, with professors. 3. at traditional school also can enjoy the convenience of the high technology s.s.s.s. SomeSomeSomeSome studentsstudentsstudentsstudents likelikelikelike classesclassesclassesclasses wherewherewherewhere teachersteachersteachersteachers lecturelecturelecturelecture (do(do(do(do allallallall ofofofof thethethethe talking)talking)talking)talking) inininin class.class.class.class. OtherOtherOtherOther studentsstudentsstudentsstudents preferpreferpreferprefer classesclassesclassesclasses wherewherewherewhere thethethethe studentsstudentsstudentsstudents dodododo somesomesomesome ofofofof thethethethe talking.talking.talking.talking. 1. subjective initiative, students who positively study can achieve a higher efficiency. They can truly reflect on the issues that teachers mention. 2.during the talking, students learn to communicate with others, which is of great significance. 3.during talking, students also exchange their sparks of thoughts. t.t.t.t. studystudystudystudy alonealonealonealone orororor studystudystudystudy inininin aaaa groupgroupgroupgroup 1. gain others’ advanced thoughts or methods Tpo小站专业托福 1 对 1 TPO小站专业托福一对一保分指导http://tpooo.taobao.com QQ：380586497 托福备考超级群：102662731 2. find flaws of own methodology or ideology 3. teamwork 7.7.7.7. 父母儿童教育与成长 a.a.a.a. ParentsParentsParentsParents areareareare thethethethe bestbestbestbest teachersteachersteachersteachers 1. nobody can deny that parents are the best first teacher for children. 2. patience and tolerance are the most valuable characters which enable parents beyond the common teachers. 3. However, it is necessary for children to enter the university to receive the further education, since the lively lecture that given by the erudite professors is of great significance. b.b.b.b. betterbetterbetterbetter forforforfor childrenchildrenchildrenchildren totototo growgrowgrowgrow upupupup inininin thethethethe countrysidecountrysidecountrysidecountryside thanthanthanthan inininin aaaa bigbigbigbig citycitycitycity???? 1. growing up in countryside will limit the visions of children. 2. living in the city can help the children keep pace