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PAGEPAGE3DearEditor-in-ChiefinXXXXXXX:Thankyouverymuchforyourhelpinprocessingthereviewofourmanuscript(ManuscriptIDXXXXX).Wehavecarefullyreadthethoughtfulcommentsfromyouandreviewersandfoundthatthesesuggestionsarehelpfulforustoimproveourmanuscript.Onthebasisoftheenlighteningquestionsandhelpfuladvices,wehavenowcompletedtherevisionofourmanuscript.Theitemizedresponsestothereviewers’commentsarelistedinthesucceedingsheets.Wehopethatallthesecorrectionsandrevisionswouldbesatisfactory.Thanksalot,again.Title:XXXManuscripttype:ArticleCorrespondingauthor:XXXFullauthornames:XXXSincerely,Prof.XXXSchoolofChemistryandChemicalEngineering,XXKeyLaboratoryofControllableChemistryReaction&MaterialChemicalEngineering,XXUniversity,Wuhan,Hubei,430072 ,PRChina.2015-03-05ResponsestocommentsofEditorThankyouforyourseriousandconstructivecommentsonourmanuscript.Accordingtoyoursuggestion,themanuscripthasbeenrevisedasalettertoeditor.Therevisionswehavemadeareasfollows:1Subtitles"5.Conclusions","6.Acknowledgments",and"7.References"shouldberevisedinto"4.Conclusions","Acknowledgments",and"References",respectively.Reply:Thankyouforyourconstructiveandhelpfulsuggestion.Therelevantsubtitleshavebeenrevisedintherevision.2InthesectionoftheReferences,titleofcitedpapershouldberemoved,andinref.35thesuperfluouscommashouldbedeleted.Reply:Thankyouforyourconstructiveandhelpfulsuggestion.Allthetitleshavebeenremovedasyourequiredandthesuperfluouscommainref.35hasalsobeendeleted.3Numerousrelevantpapershavebeenpublishedinrecentyearsespeciallyin2014and2015.Somekey,importantor/andlatestresearchresultsinthisfield,shouldbementionedandcitedinthesectionofintroductioninsteadofoutdatedorearlierpaperssothatwecanprovideasolidbackgroundandprogresstothereadersregardingthecurrentstate-of-knowledgeonthistopic.Therefore,Istronglyrequireyoutorewritethispartandthenupdateyourcitations.Reply:Thankyouforyourconstructiveandhelpfulsuggestion.Wehaverewrittenthesectionofintroductionandupdatedcorrespondingcitationsasyourequired.Indetail,somerecentandexcellentresearcheshavebeencitedintherevisiontoreplacethoseofearlierpaperswhicharenolongernovel.4Anychangesorrevisionsinthetextshouldbehighlightedbydifferentcolorintherevisedmanuscriptcomparedwiththatofthepreviousversion.Reply:Thankyouforyourconstructiveandhelpfulsuggestion.Allthechangesandrevisionshavebeenhighlightedbycyan.WehaverevisedourmanuscriptagainWehavemadefurthermodificationsonthemanuscript,especiallytheintroductionsection.Thelatestrevisionsarehighlightedbygreen,whilepreviouschangesarehighlightedbycyan.Tobespecific:a)Someadjustmentsaboutsentencestructureshavebeenmadetoincreasethediversityofexpression.b)ThesecondexampleaboutN-dopedcarbonmaterialsisrelativelyearlyresearchresultpublishedin2009.Thuswehavereplaceditwithalastedandoutstandingpaper.c)TheuniqueeffectsofS-dopinghavebeenexpoundedintherevisiontocorrespondtotheeffectsofN-dopingintroducedabove.d)Inadditiontorewritingthepartofintroductionasyourequired,wehavealsopolishedandrevisedthechaptersofexperimental,resultsanddiscussion,conclusionsandupdatedthesectionofreferences.TheinitialexamplesaboutN-S-codopedcarbonmaterials(references16and17)areearlierresultspublishedin2012and2013.Thuswehavereplacedthemwithsomelastedandoutstandingpapers.