英语高考作文范文14.咨询信

文体概述咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。通常包括三部分内容：1.说明自己的计划或目的，也就是询问信息的原因。2.征询具体信息。3.期待回复并表示感谢。常用语块1.寻求帮助_______________________2.向某人提供某物_______________________3.首先_______________________4.盼望着_______________________5.更多的信息_______________________furtherinformationaskforhelpprovidesb.withsth.tostartwithlookforwardto6.即将到来_______________________7.为……向某人收取费用_______________________8.为……而表示感激之情_______________________9.对……来说很重要_______________________10.寄回_______________________postbackroundthecornerchargesb.for…begratefulfor…beimportantto…11.对……感兴趣_______________________12.参加_______________________13.决心要做某事_______________________14.希望……_______________________15.缺乏/缺少_______________________beshortof/beinlack/demandofbeinterestedin…/takeinterestin…takepartin/participateinmakeupone’smindtodosth.inthehopeof/that套用句式如果能给我提供……方面的信息我将不胜感激。2.我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关……的信息。1.Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmeinformationregarding/concerning…2.Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding…3.此外，有没有我要特别注意的事情？4.您能告诉我……吗？5.期待您及时答复。3.Besides,isthereanythingthatIshouldpayspecialattentionto?4.Wouldyoubesokindastotellme…?5.Iamlookingforwardtoyourimmediateresponse.习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)DearSir/Madam,IamastudentinChinaorIplantogotoBritaintoattendsummerschoolduringthevacation.Ihadseenyouradvertisement,andIwouldliketoknowanythingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.and∧ahavesomethingFirstwherewillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshourarethereperweek?Beside,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.WhatIwouldalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopaytothecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluding.Wouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuawhenhoursBesidesforincluded1.or→and两句之间是“顺承”关系，而非“选择”关系。2.在summer前加a单数可数名词前用不定冠词表泛指。3.had→have根据上下文语境，此处应用现在完成时。4.anything→something肯定句中要用something。5.where→when根据上下文逻辑，此处应该是表示“什么时候”的疑问句。故填when。6.hour→hours因为howmany后须用名词的复数形式。7.Beside→Besides此处表示补充说明关系“此外/而且”，beside意为“在……旁边”。8.去掉Iwouldalso前的What后面是一个完整的句子，What在此显然是多余的。9.to→for固定短语payfor意为“为……付费”。10.including→included此处为被动结构，意为“……包含在内”。课堂练习假定你是李华，最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告，称其有称职教练(instructor)，一周包会。你会一点游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假参加训练。请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况，要点如下：1.训练的具体时间和地点。2.条件和费用。3.其他特别注意的事项。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearSir/Madam,Ihavereadyouradvertisementinthenewspaper.Youmentionedinitthatyourinstructorsarefullyqualifiedandyouensurethatlearnerswillbeabletoswimwellafteroneweek’straining.IcanswimalittlebutI’mnotveryconfidentinthewater.SoI’minterestedintakingpartinthetrainingcourse.Fortunately,thesummerholidayisaroundthecorner.I’mwritingtoinquirewhenandwherethecoursewillbegiven,andhowlongthetrainingcoursewilllasteachday.Ialsowanttoknowhowmuchyouwillchargemeforthat.Besides,wouldyoubesokindastotellmewhetherthereisanythingspecialthatshouldbepreparedordoesyourcompanyprovideeverythingnecessary?Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua课外作业假定你是李华，寒假中你去澳大利亚旅游，可是回国后发现你的相机落在旅馆了，所以你要给旅馆负责人写一封咨询信。要点如下：1.入住时间：1月27日～2月5日；房间号：608。2.相机：型号CanonIxus860，白色；你的17岁生日礼物，很重要。3.请他/她帮你寻找并寄回，表示感谢。4.你的地址在信封上。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearSir/Madam,Iamverygratefulforyourgreatservicewhilestayingatyourhotel,butI’mwritingtoaskforyourhelpwithsendingbackmycamerathatIleftinyourhotel.IcheckedinonJanuary27andoutonFebruary5andstayedinRoom608forthewholetime.PerhapsbecauseIleftinsucharushfortheairport,Imadethemistakeofleavingmycameraintheroom.Sinceitwasagiftfrommyparentsonmy17thbirthday,it’sveryimportanttome.It’sawhiteCanonIxus860.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpmefindit.Iffound,thecameracanbepostedbacktomebyusingtheaddressontheenvelope.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua