第十届全国创新英语大赛复赛口语试题（选编）

才智在线在线才智 第十届全国创新英语大赛复赛口语试题(选编) A组 A01. Who, in your view, is the greatest athlete and how does he or she influence the lives of others? Why? A02. What are the negative social effects of advertisements? A03. Is there a generation gap between you and your parents? What do you think causes this generation gap? What can be done to solve this problem, A04. What does the recent royal wedding in Great Britain mean to the public? Why were they so excited about it? A05. If you became the richest man or woman in China, what kind of life do you think you would lead? B组 B01. Should romantic relations among students be encouraged? Why or why not? B02. What does your parents forbid you from doing when you were in senior high school? B03. What are some of the effective and ineffective methods people use to cope with stress? B04. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet. Will the Internet isolate us from one another? B05. If your school asked all the students to wear school uniform, and you were the head teacher. What would you say to persuade the students? C组 C01. What role does music play in your life? Do you listen to music while studying? Do you think it is a good habit? C02. Which emperor do you like best in Chinese history? 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 C03. Some people say. “We learn more outside class than in it” Do you agree,Why or Why not, C04. Do you think music can affect people‟s lives, for example, calming them down, cheering them up, or increasing efficiency? C05. What do you prefer, watching movies at home or at the cinema? Why? 第九届创新英语大赛口语试题题目(选编) A组 1.What do you always do to realize a low carbon society(低碳社会)? 2.How do you think of this competition? Give us some suggestions. 3.Some people are always pursuing famous brands(品牌)nowadays.What do you think? 4.Do you think watching TV too much is a waste of time? why, B组 1.If you can, will you consider about going abroad to study after you graduate from high school? Why? 2.What do you think of programs such as SUPER VOICE GIRL & HAPPY BOY? 3.The world cup brings passion to the whole world. What‟s your opinion on China‟s not capable of attending such a splendid event(精彩赛事)? 4.Do you participate in this contest voluntarily (自愿地)or somebody forced you to do so? What do you think of this contest, C组 1.Have you considered being a teacher in the future? If you were one of your teachers, what will you do to make your students better? 2.Talk about the most unforgettable match you watched or even experienced. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 3.Do you think participating in English speaking contests is a good way to improve your English? In your opinion, what is the best way? 4.Do you think there is a generation gap between you and your parents,Why do you think so, D组 1.What do you do to improve your oral English in your daily study? 2.Who‟s your favorite star? Why? 3.Do you enjoy traveling? Why? 4.Do you remember your parents‟ birthday? How do you celebrate, E组 1.What do your family do to save water and electricity 2.Do you think health is more important than money? Why? 3.Imagine that you are going to Canada to study for a whole year, what do you expect to learn there? Any plan? 4.Which song do you like best? Why? 第八届创新英语大赛复赛试题 作文: Directions: Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness. In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. Official statistics show that china has accumulated 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth. How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion. 作文命题思路和评分细则: 该作文题目就我国近年来越来越受重视和各认同的志愿者工作，对考生的观察能力、 思维能力和社会体验能力进行考察。通过该题目的写作，检查考生的语言逻辑组织能力 和语言表达能力。考生可以在所给题目范围内自己命题进行写作。 作文评分大致分为四等: 99-90分: 1.对作文题目有独到见解，并有很强的创新能力; 2.语言流畅，思路清晰，有较强的英语写作能力; 3.词汇和语法使用恰当，错误较少。 89-80分: 1.对作文题目有合理的理解，并有较强的创新能力; 2.语言比较流畅，思路比较清晰，有较好的英语写作能力; 3.词汇和语法使用比较恰当，错误较少。 79-70分: 1.对作文题目有正确的理解，并有一定的创新能力; 2.语言通顺，英语写作能力一般; 3.有常见词汇和语法使用错误。 69-60分: 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 1.对作文题目理解尚可，创新能力比较一般; 2.语言不太通顺，英语写作能力较差; 3.词汇和语法错误较多。 第八届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登 题目: Directions: Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness. In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth. How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion. Come and join us in volunteer work right now! 陈茜 江苏省张家港市第三中学高三18班 Dear grandfather: How are you? I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a voluntear in the great event, which is to hold in Shanghai. We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work. And you are welcomed by all our team members awing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture. Please don't tell me you are too old 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 to do this job. I believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer work. Nowadays, volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becomming more and more popular throughout the world. As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also necessary. One my personal wete, what's more, it's interesting and pleasant! It help us develop oursel . Firstly, for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social experience. By doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they may run across all kinds of troubles. They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems. You know, no pains, no gains. Also, individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone else's life, even the whole event, the world! Their confidence can be rovised and confidence is what it takes to do any job well. For families, if you're the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your issue will be more easily dealt with. If you're the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that “a virtwre deserues amother” because you'll get the best present - smile deeply from one's heart, in the whole world. It is a great chance for all members getting closer to each other in communities by taking part in volunteer work. Their team spirits, their co-operation will be great improued. So, why not? The most importantly, for the whole world, for the entire human race, volunteer work will make earth a better place to live in, it is through volunteer work that we know there are so many people are willing to help others although they can't get money from it. It is through volunteer work that we know we are all brothers and sisters, that we are all families. My dear grandfather, canre on! Join us and help introduce owr great Chinese culture to the world. 21 centuring is on open cewtury. You can trust yourself and please trust us, too! We'll help you and we need you help! Let's make the world a better place by being a volunteer! It's a small step for us but it is a leurge one for the whole world! Love you. Your granddaught. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 专家建议: 句子之间的衔接做的还不是很到位，建议多练练关联词的用法。词汇不够丰富，句型 变化不多，建议多看些范文，多练一些经典句型。 专家点评: 文章立意很好，整体结构清晰，语言大体流畅，还能够引经据典，显示出有一定的 文 化底蕴。 To be a volunteer ，Bring a ray of sunshine 陈天悦 山东省济南市山东省齐钢高级中学高三4班 Dear Tom: It is a great pleasure for me to have the wondeful chance to put pen to paper and send my greetings to you. You said that you wanted to be a volunteer and didn't know whether you should or not. I want to help you analyse it. In my opinion. I think it is not noly a good chance to help others but also a good opportunity to make selp-improvement. You'd better participate in the volunteer work. If we compane youth to flouers, as is often the case, then the young volunteers are the most beautiful flowers. By joining in the vounteer work, you will leam how to help others and how to love others. What's more you can also find it out that there are many people suffering from disaster and then you will value your comfortable life. Although you may feel very tired as a volunteer and it may cost you much time to help others, I still insist that you should be a volunteer because the advantages bright about by volunteer work overweigh the disadvantages. It all the people refused to be volunteers, the people suffered from the may 12 earthquake could lose heart and most of them wouldn't have the chance to survive from that disaster. If none of the people wanted to be a volunteer, the Beijing olympic Games would be a failure. If every people didn't feel like being a volunteer, there would be no people cleaning the environment and protecting the beautiful scenery automatically. It was terrible! From all mentioned above, volunteers play a very important part in our daily life. To be a volunteer will 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 gain glory for China. As is brow to all, Chinese children are always laughed at for lack of practice. So to be a volunteer is a good chance to canpensate for it. From my point of view, it's high time that you became a volunteer and learned to help others. If everyone makes a contribution to helping others, the world will be much more beautiful! At last, wish you all the best! Yours sincerely. Lily. 专家建议: 一篇文章的结构是评判该文章优劣的重要参考标准，但结构显然不够简洁清晰，所以 建议作者能在平时多阅读英文报纸上的文章，有意识地观察 规范 编程规范下载gsp规范下载钢格栅规范下载警徽规范下载建设厅规范下载 的英语文章是怎样设计 结构的。 专家点评: 文章二三段的结构很混乱，建议这样的文章段落都应写成总、分、总的形式更能突出 文章的逻辑性，并在“分”的部分也一条一条分开写，而不是都堆在一段内，让人分不清哪 句是观点哪句是论证，很混乱。另外注意同义词的替换已是文章表达更丰富，比如文章 中多次出现的帮助他人就都是使用:help others就显得过于单一了~ The importance of volunteer work 崔静远 辽宁省鞍山市鞍山市第一中学高三18班 In my opinion, volunteer work is quite an important part of the modern society. The reasons are as follows. In the modern time, thanks to the deselopment of economy and technolodge, material enjoyment 13 earned both in higher quality and larger quantiy. At a price of this, individunls are taking the risk of losing their own values and even sparing no effert to make their fartane even at the price of the interest of the society. So the volunteer work has been playing an 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 important part as a spiritual comfort not only to the receivers but also to the volunteers, promoting the well-being of the love-givers, making ertra value for others and keeping a perfect balance of the whole society. In families, volunteer work will help to emphasize the importance of morality, meet emotional needs and even become a vivid educational lesson. Parents, who are widely regarded as the first and most important teachers of their children, are teaching their children through the activities which must truely toach the deepest part of the young souls, instead of serious, traditional crivical words. Also, during the process, in which every member showstus true love, other members are able to recognize him from a difference point of view. This kind of awarness is promised to promote the communication of the family in the future. In the whole world, the volunteer work can be considered to be an appropriate part of the globalization, during which the world is becoming a Global village. And the natural and economic chisasters are driving people from different cultaral back grounds to stand together on the same side, emphasizing the interest of the whole world, which must not be deffended without any country's participation. And it is the volunteer work that can be granted the role of offering help in its hour of marimum need. All in all, volunteer work is truely an inreplacable part of the society and it is our responsibility to give our hands to make the world a better place. 专家建议: 建议该生平时利用好学校里使用的中学英语教科 书 关于书的成语关于读书的排比句社区图书漂流公约怎么写关于读书的小报汉书pdf ，因为教科书的权威性不容置疑， 选材也适合中学生，是精读甚至背诵的最好选择。之所以推荐给作者教科书，是因为该 考生在写作长句子时出现较多错误，说明该生的语法基础不够夯实，那么中学英语课本 就恰好能弥补这个弱点。 专家点评: 文章结构清晰明了，简洁明了的开头和结尾紧扣主题，精干又有力，很方便读者对文 章主旨的把握。中间部分的逻辑性强，思路也很清晰。唯一不足的是在一些长难句的表 达上出现了一些错误，有些句子让人很难理解。在以后的写作中可以多关注长句子的练 习。 Volunteer Life 代昱丞 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 辽宁省本溪市高级中学高二15班 As we know, “volunteer” is a kind of “work” that you offer to do it, and also, it is for free. From schools to shops, from Olympics to world wars, volunteers are everywhere. And to Chinese people, last year is an impresive(impressive) year because of volunteers. In May 12 earthquake and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Gams, volunteers played a really important role. They touched every Chinese's heart, including me. I don't usually have chances to do volunteer's work, but I have some creative ideas about it. In my opinion, helping others is a kind of volunteer and it is important to our lives. We can't become a volunteer in poor rural area, but we can help classmates sowe(solve) a math problem; we can't join the Olympics, but we can take part in a sports meeting in school and develope the spirit of “higher, faster, stronger” in other ways; we can't go to Wenchuan, but we can send our “gifts” there. In fact, we are volunteering everyday and everywhere, but we ignore it sometimes. Volunteer is not a simple matter about yourself, it also has great influence to your life, your family, even the world. If there are not volunteers any more, everyone is selfish and vain, the world will be a lonely place. Volunteer can bring people warm and kind feelings and help improve your personality. When you are volunteering, you'll find the beauty of the world and life and you really feel and touch some hard experience, it is able to lead you to treat your family, your life, your fridends(friends) more previously. My dad once told me a story: at the time of Beijing Olympic Games one year's flashback, some volunteers said that time was really a hard but valuable memory. Sometimes, they had to stand, it was not permitted to argue with tourists; sometimes, they even wanted to cry, but smiles had to be on theirs faces all the time. Volunteer was not an easy job, but they said that they didn't regret at all —— they responded to China, they won reputation for our nation! So, volunteer is worth joining and valuing, though it is hard, you have gained the best award —— a kind heart. Start your volunteer life now! 专家建议: 在不跑题前提下，内容虽然重要，但关键是语言的包装，建议多看些优秀范文，和英 文原著，增加语感，这样文章会更传神。 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 专家点评: 文章思路清晰，叙述条理清楚，但句子之间的衔接做得不够，要多用连接词。此外， 应多掌握一些词语的同义词，这样避免重复。在句式变换方便也要多下些功夫。 Volunteer work: an unique lesson 刁文卿 辽宁省大连市大连市第十二中学高二9班 With the rapid development of techndogy(technology) and communication in our society, the sense of competitiveness and cooperation filled our mind steadily. At the same time, the owarness(awareness) of helping others in people's mind also became stronger and stronger. This situation led to the start of a new “job”—volunteer. We just found from the passage that the increasing number of the vdunteer(volunteer) touched all the people home and abroad. And I argue the point that volunteer work plays an integral part in our daily life especially for the youth in China. First and foremest(foremost), nowadays, parents can only have one child and he or she may be given the best care of the other members in the family. As a consequence, the only clild(child) may become selfish and self-centered unconciously(unconsciously). The volunteer work, as a special lessons can help the youngster put the other people's feeling before theirs and ask for their opinion before taking actions. Second volunreer(volunteer) work is not only a training of do others a favour but a process of improving your cooperation ability as well. Last but not least, volunteer work is an unique lesson that we cant(cannot) get in our school. Former leader Jiangzemin said: the main goal in education is making students more creative and helping them reach their full potential. And in my poirt(point) view, it is volunteer work which can help them reach their full potential but not our school lessons. This kind of pratical practise can make us know more about what is going on in our society and in the world, for instance, the May 12 earthquake in wenchuan and the wonderful 2008 Beijing Olympic Game and so on. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 All the evidence discussed in the above awalysis the points to my conclusion that volunteer work is an unique lesson for our teenagers as it make us know more. do more and think more. And I believe that the accumulation of volunteer will rising rapily and it will lead our country to a brighter future. 专家建议: 写完作文后，自己通读一遍，这样会减少些不必要的拼写和语法错误，建议多学过的 词组造句，这样表达会更丰富，也可以多看些优秀范文。 专家点评: 文章表达清楚，语言较好，但结构有些不清晰，第二点在文章中没有展开说。时态用 的有些混乱。总体不错。 Volunteer work is necessary 郭昕硕 河北省衡水市衡水中学高三3班 There is no doubt that volunteer work in China has been brought into focus throughout the world. We presented so much last year, which indeed gave the world a big surprise. Our spirits, our merits, everything we showed during the grand gathering and the disaster proved that volunteer work is necessary. As far as I am concerned. The work of helping others without payment can be of great benefit for individuals. Apart from the experience, the progress we make during the process is enough. Time permitting, we can take more responsibility outside the school and gain the pleasure. Everyone builds our society. With the economical development, we are no longer worry about our essential needs in our life. Therefore, tospare more time and to give others a helping hand can just be the right choice. Only by this means can we get to know each other better and make contributions to our society. Moreover, it is certain that there are still so many developing countries all over the world. From Ethiopia to DPRK, too many people are in badly demand of help. Our gerosity and warth 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 means a lot. Furthermore, organization of all kinds about volunteer work will surely accelerate the process. Taking the above-mentioned factors into consideration. Raising our owareness and be helpful can definitely be so necessary. The connection between us must be permanent with our efforts of volunteer work. Therefore volunteer work is not only a political world, but a lively work related to you and me. So it stands to reason that volunteer work is necessary. 专家建议: 建议作者多阅读整篇的英语文章，增强自己的“篇章感“，因为在该篇文章中存在的问 题主要是段落见缺乏紧密联系，所以造成各段之间的孤立感的形成，建议作者以后写作 时注意段落间的合理过渡。 专家点评: 整体结构很好，尤其第一段开门见山的明确了文章的主题，给读者非常好的第一印象。 唯一不足的是第三段与上文的衔接很生硬，并且没有段落主题句，会影响文章整体的逻 辑感。另外，有个别句子出现表意不明的现象，单词拼写也存在问题，所以希望以后写 作时注意细节。 On Volunteer 黄昕彤 辽宁省鞍山市鞍山一中108班 The definition of the word volunteer in Lougnan(Longman) Dictionary is someone who helps others sponstaneously(spontaneously) and willingly. That's true! Life is a style of enjoying yourself, not only by entertaing and enriding yourself, but also by the process of helping others. Undoubtfully, those volunteers reveal their great love and passion for their country. Love is the eternal theme of the world, Without hove(love), it's like birds without wings, failing to show its talents of flying, It's like spring without flowers, burying is charming fragrants in the deep soil. Their volunty work unites China, shouing the world how united Chinese people are shocking the world of its cooperation. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 People around the country are making their efforts to helping others, which leaves the world an impression that China is a veal country, and all the people here are like brothers and sisters, who cares a lot for others. You can never imagine how touched I was when I watched the TV program called “Moving China”. 13 peasants from tangshang volunteered to help those victims of Sichuang on hearing the tremendous earthquake happened there, leaving all their farm work done in the field they sacrifiled anything and helped others at any cost, for they knew the glant pains the earthquake brings to people. They can never forget how much pains they havendertaken in the earthquake and how much help they have received from the world. They compared their own feelings to the victims and passed the splrit on. In this sense, people will pass the spirit from generation to queneration, from China to all over the world. Then, how sweet will the World be! I have a dream that one day, I will be a member of the volunteer team. I have a dream that oneday, I'll make contributions to China however slightest it may be. I have a dream that one day I'll be a founder of a world Charity, helping people all over the world. I'm firmly convinced that it will not only be a drean for me, but also a drean for people all over China, all over the world, and for the great Global Village. 专家建议: 整篇文章条理清晰，结构完整，总体感觉很好。但有个别语法错误，固定搭配有些用 得不够准确，建议多用课本学过的固定搭配或是词组造句。 专家点评: 文章语言流畅，运用了修辞手法，展现出一定的语言功底。此外，论据生动有力，让 人信服。如果句子之间的多用些关联词就更好了。 Volunteers: an indispensable role in society 宋思思 江苏省南京市南京外国语学校高三3班 Have you ever taken part into volunteer work? Have you ever been touched by the altruistic spirit of volunteers? Have you ever found your friends much maturer after a voluntary job? It you have experienced any of the sitnations I mentioned before, you will undoubtedly agree that in this highly-developed world, volunteer work, free of any reward, does play an indispensable 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 role which enjoys a unique significance. Through different kinds of voluntary jobs burgeon a rounded individual a harmonious family and a developed country. Numerous examples hereby listed do stand for my point of the importance of volunteers. The point of pinnacle importance for my view focuses on the enhancement of a single person, especially the youth. According to a survey conducted by UNESCO the United Nations, Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization, among parents and children around the world, about 95.5% of the parents admits that they find their children care more about the society after long time of volunteer work. The result also indicates the fact that 98% of, the children gets along better with their friends and coorperate with them more easily. Researchers believe that it is the volunteer work that not only develops children‟s' social responsibily but also teaches them how to work in a team, which is coined as team-working spirit. In this case, nobody could deny the positive influence the voluntary jobs put on individuals. What is more, a voluntary job can sometimes even bring harmony and happiness to families. Generally speaking, working as volunteers gives rise to common topics among family members and makes people understand more about each other. Take myself as an example. Before, hardly could I communicate with my parents for I definitely believed big age gap made us lack of common interests. After being volunteers in an elderly home together, however we enjoy more common topics such as how to make the elderly happiness or which kind of meals is best for the elderly. To be further, Rither my parents and I realize there is a lot to learn from each other and a hanmonious family is consequently achieved. Thanks to the voluntary jobs, had we not joined in the same volunteer work, we would have never had such a satisfactory relationship. Bertrand Russell, a highly respected and well-known philosopher in 19th century, once pointed out „To a country, none of the rules is worth a voluntary action‟, which dramatically matches what 1 am getting on. Rather than any rule or poliey that forces citizens to follow, a voluntary deed, largely from individuals' willing, exerts more optimistic influence on the development of a country. On one hand when people work as a volunteers, they do what they like to do while they show their social responsibility to the whole society. On the other hand, any of the significant changes involve in all citizens. Needless to say, all citizens' involvement as volunteers to some extend, enjoys a higher status than laws from a small part of people in the country. In light of the examples ranging from individuals, families to a whole country, we could definitely summarize that as more and more people involve into the volunteer jobs, 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 unimaginable accomplishment achieved and a higher quality of individuals comes out. Not only does a person himself, but also a family and a country do benefit from volunteers! 专家点评:本文作者用词准确，句型高级，结构层次分明，难能可贵的是举例充分且 恰当，虽然有一些小的瑕疵，但不失为一篇优秀的文章，值得我们好好研究和学习。 专家建议:受文化，历史背景和环境的影响，我国学生在写英语时喜欢拐弯抹角，喜 欢长句子，喜欢重复，喜欢大话，空话。总是写无意义的理论，而很少举例说明，多强 调数量而忽视质量，我们必须要杜绝这一现象，中国学生在写作中最缺乏的一件事情就 是不会举例说明，所以平时我们要多看名人传记，多注意和留心身边发生的有哲学思想 的事情，善于总结，日积月累，厚积薄发。 第十届全国创新英语大赛初赛作文题 Directions: Recently, Amy Chua, or the “Tiger Mother”, aroused heated discussions both in US and in China with her book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother. The following are the ten things she lists in her book that she strictly forbids her two daughters to do: Attend a sleepover (a party for children in which they stay the night at someone‟s house); Have a play date (in which children hang out with their friends); Be in a school play; Complain about not being in a school play; Watch TV or play computer games; Choose their own extracurricular activities; Get any grade less than an A; Not be the No. 1 student in every subject except gym and drama; Play any instrument other than the piano or violin; Not play the piano or violin. You are invited to write under either of the following two topics. The length of your writing should not exceed 300 words. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 Suppose you are a “tiger parent”. Write a letter to your child and explain to her/him your ideas about tiger parenting. Suppose you are a child who has tiger parents. Write a letter to your parents and explain to them your ideas about tiger parenting. 第十届全国创新英语大赛复赛作文题 Chinese people always have the tradition of helping others; regardless of a friend or a stranger. However, in recent years, people find that when they try to help others, some changes are taking places. One of the most common examples is that, a passer-by who sent an injured senior people to hospital would be very likely to be recognized as the accident-maker. This kind of events is being rerun again and again. When trapped in the dilemma of tradition and trouble, what would be your choice? 第九届创新英语大赛初赛作文题 Topic: Natural Disasters Directions: Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated in about 300 words. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness. A natural disaster is the effect of a natural hazard (e.g. flood, drought, tornado, volcano eruption, earthquake, typhoon, tsunami, or landslide) that affects the environment, and leads to financial, environmental and/or human losses. Recently, we can see many natural disasters occured home and abroad and huge damage have been made either to the environment or to our human lives. Those natural disasters urge us to reconsider our beliefs and actions toward our mother nature when we seek for clothes, food, and sheltering etc. Therefore, what is your attitude toward the natural disasters? What shall we do to prevent us from being simply destroyed? What kind of role did we play in the causes of those dreadful disasters? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion. 第九届创新英语大赛复赛作文试题 Topic: Should We Follow Fashions? Directions: Some people say that fashion is just for selling clothes, so we should not follow it and we should dress what we like and feel comfortable in it. How far do you agree with them? Write an essay on the following topic: should we follow fashions? 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 Requirements: Illustrate your view on the topic with no less than 250 words and write down your opinions and reasons so long as they are reasonable. 评分细则: 1.对作文题目有独到见解，并有很强的创新能力; 2. 思路清晰，观点明确，论证充分; 第一档 99—90 3.语言流畅，词汇丰富，句式多样; 4.有效地使用语句、段落间的连接成分，内容连贯，结 构紧凑; 5.词汇和语法使用恰当，错误较少。 1.对作文题目有恰当理解，并有较强的创新能力; 2.思路较清晰，观点较明确，论证较充分; 第二档 89—80 3.语言通顺，词汇和句式有变换; 4.能使用语句间的连接成分;内容较连贯; 5.词汇和语法使用较恰当，错误较少。 1.对作文题目有一定理解，创新能力一般; 2.有自己的观点，并加以论证; 第三档 79—70 3.词汇和句式基本满足需要; 4.语句较通顺; 5. 有常见词汇和语法使用错误。 1. 对作文题目理解尚可，创新能力比较一般; 2. 内容不太连贯; 第四档 69—60 3. 句式词汇有限; 4. 词汇和语法错误较多。 1.对作文题目理解不当; 2.字数不够，内容不连贯; 第五档 59以下 3.语言混乱，思路不清晰; 4. 词汇和语法错误很多。 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 第八届创新英语大赛初赛作文题 Directions: Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness. Some experts claim that parents` attitudes toward solving teenage problems are crucial determinants of child personality development. Do you agree or disagree? What role does parental attitude play in child rearing and personality development? You writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion. 第八届创新英语大赛复赛试题 Directions: Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness. In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth. How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion. 作文命题思路和评分细则: 该作文题目就我国近年来越来越受重视和各认同的志愿者工作，对考生的观察能力、思维能力和社 会体验能力进行考察。通过该题目的写作，检查考生的语言逻辑组织能力和语言表达能力。考生可以在 所给题目范围内自己命题进行写作。 作文评分大致分为四等: 99-90分: 1.对作文题目有独到见解，并有很强的创新能力; 2.语言流畅，思路清晰，有较强的英语写作能力; 3.词汇和语法使用恰当，错误较少。 89-80分: 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 1.对作文题目有合理的理解，并有较强的创新能力; 2.语言比较流畅，思路比较清晰，有较好的英语写作能力; 3.词汇和语法使用比较恰当，错误较少。 79-70分: 1.对作文题目有正确的理解，并有一定的创新能力; 2.语言通顺，英语写作能力一般; 3.有常见词汇和语法使用错误。 69-60分: 1.对作文题目理解尚可，创新能力比较一般; 2.语言不太通顺，英语写作能力较差; 3.词汇和语法错误较多。 第七届全国创新英语大赛初、复赛作文试题 初赛试题: Value of Exams in Schools Direction: Students have experienced a lot of exams all through their school years. They may have a lot to say about the present exam systems. You are allowed 60 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Value of Exams in Schools. You should write about 300 words, and base your composition on the following outline. Role of exams Your experience of failure at one exam Suggestions to better exam systems 复赛试题: Directions: With the development of computers, more and more people are working with computers. But, we know that computers are harmful as well as useful and helpful .Here, you are asked to write an essay on the topic “The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers”. You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion. Your essay should be written in English with no less than 300 words within 60 minutes. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 第六届全国创新英语大赛初、复赛作文试题 初赛试题: Directions: Read the following paragraph and then write an essay at about 300 words on the following topic: The Internet in My Life According to a report from the Digital Future Project in the U.S.,the overall Internet access has risen to its highest level in the last four years; about three-quarters of Americans go online. The number of hours online continues to increase---rising to an average of 12.5 hours per week---the highest level in the study so far. What do people do online? Both very experienced users and new users spent by far the largest percentage of their time online dealing with e-mails; followed by general Web browsing, work at home for their jobs, reading news, etc. In terms of who are online, the report reveals that three quarters of the Internet users are aged 55 and under. Are you an Internet user? If yes, how long are you online each week? How do you connect the Internet? What do you gain by using it? If not, why not? What do you miss by not using it? 复赛试题: Directions: Some people maintain that universities are the best place for young people to receive higher education; other people believe that young people can be equally educated by taking correspondence courses or going to evening classes and open universities in their spare time. Write an article of about 300 words in which you compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of formal university education and informal higher education. Which do you think is more effective and desirable? Support your argument with appropriate examples or illustrations 第五届全国创新英语大赛初、复赛作文试题 初赛试题: Write a composition of 300 words on the following topic: It is true tourism will certainly bring benefit to a nation. However, some people claim that it will also cause problem to environmental protection and cultural integrity. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion? 复赛试题: Writing Topic for Semifinals Directions: 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 We can be sure that most people have experienced failure and success. Most often, when we are successful we are happy. If we fail, we are sad. Now, you are asked to write an essay on the topic of Failure and Success. You can give some example and facts to support your opinion. You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion. Your essay should be written in English with on less than 300 words within 60 minutes. 第七届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登 复赛试题: Directions: With the development of computers, more and more people are working with computers. But, we know that computers are harmful as well as useful and helpful .Here, you are asked to write an essay on the topic “The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers”. You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion. Your essay should be written in English with no less than 300 words within 60 minutes. The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers 李彦妮 辽宁市鞍山市第一中学10届14班 Nowadays, the idea of progress loorns so large in the modern world, and the progress of a particular kind is actually taking place around us. In this circumstances, computers which have a great help come out with the wisdom and hard-working of human beings. It do have given human a tremendous help, it, however, has brought to us its harmness at the some time. The computers can make a great help for us in this high speed society. In the light of this statement, it is computers that can store documents for us which is essential for us, it is 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 computers that can shorten the time in seeking useful information instead of looking for knowledge from a large sums of books and it is computers that can make it possible to comunicate with different people who are far away from you. In a word, we can't live nomally without computers in such a high-tech society. On the contary, having helped us a lot, computers are harmful to people at the same time, especially the adolescents. First of all, sitting in front of the computer may do harm to our eyes. On the other hand, computers not only bring us useful information but also entertainments. Being weak in controlling themselves, those poor adolescents are more easier to get crazy about the fantasy world. Seeing a vivid picture which is about a son who gets stuck in computers and phones to his parents downstairs to bring dinner for him. I realized deeply that the computers really have their disadvantages. According to the statements above, it can not be superficial to simply say that computers are good or bad for us as every coin has both sides. Personally, I still consider that a computer can bring us convinience and high speed which is extolled to all the people even though it is a two-edged weapon. We can learn well punctuated by those purchasable wells of wisdom - computers. 专家建议: 本文个别语言使用不够地道并且偶尔出现句子表意不明的情况，因此建议该考生在平 时的学习中尽量多阅读原汁原味的 英语 (论坛) 文章，有意识地积累地道的英语表达， 不断提高语言运用能力。 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 专家点评: 本篇文章段落结构基本清晰，第一段交代文章主题，第二段主要说明计算机的优势， 第三段罗列计算机给人们带来的害处，最后一段是对文章的总结和作者个人看法，整篇 文章思路比较清晰。文章用词较为准确，也出现了不少词组及句型，语法多样性也有所 体现。能看出这绝对是高中生中佼佼者完成的文章。不足之处在于有个别语言点不够地 道，希望以后能进一步雕琢语言，使写作水平进一步提升。 The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers. 曹欣平 安徽省黄山市屯溪一中高一2班 Currently, with the development of Internet, more and more people voico focus on the issue that whether it is right to have got a computer. As we all know, a coin has two sides, and a computer has both advantages and disadvatages. Sometimes, we insist that it is rather useful to get a computer, but on the other hand, we find it much more hamful. In a word, however, nothing goins more discussion than computers. For one thing, we regard computer convenient, in that we can use a computer to draw pictures, write essays and sum up countless numbers. We work on computers and comminicate by Internet. Because of e-mails, on-line shopping and trimendous, number of imformations on Internot, we adnire the useful computer. What's more, computer and Internet can work in a fantastic speed, which makes our work swiftly. No one com deny that, human can live and work well without computers. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 For omother, however, computers bring harmfulnesses to us as well. First, computer games are at large nowadays. Teenagers can be octlracted by them easily. They plays computers night and day, forgetting anything including study. They spend their valueable youngth hurting thies active bodies. Glasses on their faces show their weakness of sight. Meanwhile internet provides too many things and people cannot tell bad ones from right ones promptly sometimes. As a result, their spirit can be damaged. Nothing can be worse than this. The last but not the least, internet offers many ways to crime. Meanwhile, it is hard to find out. For instance, some bad sayings spread well on internet but the police can do nothing to stop them. As for as I am concerned, I consider that the computer is rather useful. Whether you may be damaged by computers and internet depends on yourself to the core. You would not be hurt if your, eyes were bright enough to tell right from wrong. As for me, I use computers to write articles, watch movies and communicate with each other and I do not fancy any computer games. Besides, the Governmout should focus their attention to protecting teenagers from computer games. At last, I would say that despite the disadvantages still exist now, computers play a very significant part of role in modern life. 专家建议: 建议该生多读英语议论文章，揣摩正规议论文的段落内部的逻辑关系是怎样做到严谨 合理的，培养对一件事发表议论的能力。另外，平时应该多练习写作议论文，并在写作 过程中要求自己思路清晰，明确自己究竟要写什么，为什么要写这句话，句与句之间到 底有没有关系，有什么关系。希望对作者有所帮助。 专家点评: 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 本文结构设置清晰明了，词汇及句型句式的运用较为高级和丰富，语法应用也比较准 确和多样。不足之处在于本文段落内部逻辑的混乱，句与句之间的逻辑关系更是令读者 一头雾水。值得一提的是，本文还多处出现了议论文章的大忌讳，那就是主观猜测出的 毫无依据支持的信息以及缺乏客观性的极端信息，希望作者日后避免此类错误。 Computers 常悦 辽宁省大连市育明高中高二12班 Computer is one of people's greatest inventions in the last centry. Meanwhile, it brings about as many problems as the convienience it offers. This essay will look at the advantages and disadvantages of computers. To begin with, there are numerous reasons to say computers do good to our daily life. Firstly, computers make it possible for students to gain knowledge online with a simple click, instead of ckecking thousands of books. A veriaty kinds of information on all subjects are stored in computers, available to everyone, Moreover, thanks to the computers, people can “talk” to others, who are millions of miles away, even overseas. Computers offer a great alternative of communication, which develops people's view and enables us to know different cultures. A third point is that computers make a great contribution to building up a globle village. By shopping online, one can buy Japanese sushi, HongKong clothings and Italian wine in America. Nevertheless, despite the advantages of computer, there're many drawbacks of it. First of all, because of the attractive computer games, many adolescents give up studying. Computers have a damage effect on youngsters' health and accdamic education, what's more, they even cause juvenile crimes. A second point is that when people get too used to communicating on computers, they loose their ablity of talking face to face. A report has shown that over 69% of people choose to use e-mails or tax messages to communicate. Furthermore, computers, in some degree, make developing and developed countries more devided, because while some countries are wired to communicate, others remain isolated. In summery, nothing has gained more praise and blame than computer. In my point of view, computer is just a tool. Its advantages and disadvantages mostly depends on how we use it. If we make a good use of it, it will be a great assistant of mankind. 专家建议: 作者基本掌握了议论文的写作要领，只在文章个别之处逻辑存在一些诸如思维跳跃度过大的问题， 另外就是有的表达不够地道和准确。因此建议该考生在平时的学习中尽量多阅读原汁原味的英语文章， 有意识地积累地道的英语表达，不断提高语言运用能力。 专家点评: 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 本篇文章段落结构清晰明了，第一段作为引言段交代文章主题并且引出文章主题段落，第二段主要 说明计算机的益处，第三段罗列计算机给人们带来的害处，最后一段是对文章的总结和作者个人看法。 整篇文章思路清晰，段落主题突出。文章词汇运用较为高级与丰富，语法多样性也有所体现。不足之处 在于有个别语言点不够地道，希望以后能进一步完善语言，使写作水平进一步提升。 Computers 常悦 辽宁省大连市育明高中高二12班 Computer is one of people's greatest inventions in the last centry. Meanwhile, it brings about as many problems as the convienience it offers. This essay will look at the advantages and disadvantages of computers. To begin with, there are numerous reasons to say computers do good to our daily life. Firstly, computers make it possible for students to gain knowledge online with a simple click, instead of ckecking thousands of books. A veriaty kinds of information on all subjects are stored in computers, available to everyone, Moreover, thanks to the computers, people can “talk” to others, who are millions of miles away, even overseas. Computers offer a great alternative of communication, which develops people's view and enables us to know different cultures. A third point is that computers make a great contribution to building up a globle village. By shopping online, one can buy Japanese sushi, HongKong clothings and Italian wine in America. Nevertheless, despite the advantages of computer, there're many drawbacks of it. First of all, because of the attractive computer games, many adolescents give up studying. Computers have a damage effect on youngsters' health and accdamic education, what's more, they even cause juvenile crimes. A second point is that when people get too used to communicating on computers, they loose their ablity of talking face to face. A report has shown that over 69% of people choose to use e-mails or tax messages to communicate. Furthermore, computers, in some degree, make developing and developed countries more devided, because while some countries are wired to communicate, others remain isolated. In summery, nothing has gained more praise and blame than computer. In my point of view, computer is just a tool. Its advantages and disadvantages mostly depends on how we use it. If we make a good use of it, it will be a great assistant of mankind. 专家建议: 作者基本掌握了议论文的写作要领，只在文章个别之处逻辑存在一些诸如思维跳跃度过大的问题， 另外就是有的表达不够地道和准确。因此建议该考生在平时的学习中尽量多阅读原汁原味的英语文章， 有意识地积累地道的英语表达，不断提高语言运用能力。 专家点评: 本篇文章段落结构清晰明了，第一段作为引言段交代文章主题并且引出文章主题段落，第二段主要 说明计算机的益处，第三段罗列计算机给人们带来的害处，最后一段是对文章的总结和作者个人看法。 整篇文章思路清晰，段落主题突出。文章词汇运用较为高级与丰富，语法多样性也有所体现。不足之处 在于有个别语言点不够地道，希望以后能进一步完善语言，使写作水平进一步提升。 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 The advantages and disadvantages of Computers 陈瑶 江苏省泰州市泰州中学高二5班 In this imformation age, computers are necessary in our daily life. However, according to personal experience and personality type, some people hold the view that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages while others think the disadvantages corry more weight than the advantages. From my point of view, the computers are harmful as well as useful and helful and we should take advantage of the computers properly and avoid the disadvantages of the computers. Among countless disadvantages of the computers, there've three compiuous ones. It's convenient for us to search for information on the Internet. The Internet is just like a library that folled with many books. Whenever you have questoons and problems, you can find the answers you want with the computer. Also, communicating with others on the Internet is very convenient and cheap. For instance, if you talk to others with telephones, especially for long-distance phone, you will pay much money for it, Nevertheless, if you use the Internet to communicate with others, you just need to spend little money. Lastly, it's very useful for us students to study with the computers. Take me for an example, I took many exercises that can improve my lestening with the computer in the pase. I also gain a lot of information which is benefinial to my study on the Internet. In contrast, the computers also has many disadvantages. First, many Students are dedicated in playing computer games, as a result, their grades become very low after playing them. Take my classmate for an example, previous to playing computer games, his marks were very high in the examinations, However, after he lost himself in computer garnes, his marks fell down sharply. Furthermore, the Internet will spread some bad things, such as voilence and bule films. Every coin has both sides, and the computer is no exception. It's wise for us to reduce the dosadvantages of the computer, and make the computer play its great role. We must keep a clear mind and de what is useful to improve ourselves with the computer. 专家建议: 建议该生平时在阅读英文读物时，有意识地积累地道的英文表达，相信坚持一段时间，英文写作水 平就会有进一步提高。 专家点评: 本文结构清晰有序，段落设置合理得当，难得的是，文章每一段的第一句都是该段的主题句，对于 一个中学生来说，能对写作英语议论文的规范有如此到位的落实，实在不常见。本文词汇运用较为高级， 句型句式较为丰富，语法应用较为准确。不足之处在于有些英文表达还可以更地道一点~ The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers 宫琦 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 陕西省太原市太原外国语中学高二602班 In contemporary society, computer is playing an increasingly essential role in our daily lives. But in the meantime, whether computer is a blessing or curse has sparked spirited debate. Some people assert that computer has fundamentally beneficial influence on our society while many others argue that it has detrimental effect as well. As far as I concerned, I am in favor of the former view. Convincing arguments can be made that with computers, our lives may become rather colorful. To start with, computers can help the technology developing faster and faster; therefore, most individuals can enjoy efficient lives and numerous companies can combat more issues with the hele of computers. More over, we can buy what we like via Internet, this usually seems less time-consuming and more economical. Specifically, to illustrate, we can buy a great number of things on Taobao Ebay and Paipai, and the price is not very expensive. Lastly, many youngsters like to play a variety of computer games, the beautiful scenes and complete legends often draw a magnet on us that is to say, we can relax our bodies and amuse our minds in this way. Admittedly, computer really does harm to ourselves in some occasions. The reason for this is that many websites on the Internet spread violence and sex informations, which can exert a bad influence on adolescents to learn and try. Meanwhile there are many hackers steal our Internet bank account and our personal informations through computer viruses. Obviously, the things I described above can lead to social crimes. Even so, we can set up net forces to curb the 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 proliferation of the trend of Internet crimes, and the advantages which computer proride us with proved undeniable in many individuals' eyes. Having considered all the arguments above, I would concede that computers may cause many problems to our society. Despite that, computers can truly bring comfortable and convinient tempo of living to us. Overall, I am convinced that the advantages of computers far outweigh the disvantages, and we should use computers in right way to contribute to societal well-being. 专家建议: 建议该生扩大英文阅读量，阅读不仅可以帮助考生积累更为地道准确的语言表达方 式，更能让该生借鉴文章段落结构的设置以及段落内部句子的逻辑严谨的逻辑关系。关 于阅读材料，可以选择课外权威英文议论文读物，如英文报纸，期刊等。这些材料中的 文章语言准确地道，结构清晰工整，逻辑正确严谨，时刻散发着英文理性的魅力，可以 对议论文写作提高有所帮助。 专家点评: 本篇文章结构清晰，严格按照“总起—优势—劣势—总结”的段落分布。语句基本连贯 通顺，词汇运用较为丰富，语法的多样性也有所体现。本文作者的写作水平绝对超出了 现阶段高中生英语写作能力的平均水平。但是，本文中出现个别逻辑错误，段落内部句 子与句子间的逻辑关系不够紧凑，个别段落间的过度有些生硬，望日后写作时留意。 What Computers Bring to Us 李潇然 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 辽宁省大连市辽师大附中高三2班 With the advent of computers, the worid is changing rapidly and profoundly. The influence they bring to us is obvious and far-reaehing. Hence, people voice growing concern over what computers buing to us. The vital flavour that computers alo the soicety can't be ignored. In the finst place, for students, they're beneficial to our studying. By surfing or the Internet, we can gain some knowledge which can't be grasped from textbooks. In the second place, as an approach of meelia, they play a noticeable role in spreading the cultoral information. In the third place, they can simplify pleaty of work, which intensifies the capacity in the work of scientific development. Last but by no means least, computers, in my view, boost the prosperity of global economy. As is known to au, they convert the world into a village. It's just this cause that promotes the economical improvement. Nevertheless, every coin has its two sieles. In spite of the convinience, we should also fastea our attention upon the drawbacks. For one thing, some people are addicteel to the not real world they create. They lose therselves in it and for sure, they lose their dreams and amlitions. But the worid is just liks enchenting bubble, it's so fragile that can't stand a gentle touch. For auother, someone makes utmost of the significant influence they bring to pose a threat to the indisidual, the soicety and even the nation. What's worse, someone called locher by producing vims destys millions of computert ever. Weighing pros and cons, from my perspective, we can safely come to the condusion that computers contribute much to our human being to some extent, however, we ought to be confronted with the chanllenges of the moral behavions they lead to. In my eyes, only by realizing the stuff of them can we elevate the protential valus of them and create a shining tomorrow for ouselues. 专家建议: 建议改考生平时多练习写作，在写作过程中要求自己保持思路清晰，头脑清醒，做到每写一句话都 是为文章中心服务的。另外建议平时多阅读权威英语文章，阅读的同时去体会什么叫做言之有物，什么 叫做逻辑严谨;当然，还要有意识地积累地道准确的英文表达。 专家点评: 本文结构清晰明了，严格按照议论文“引言-主体-结尾”的结构完成，词汇运用较为高级，句型句式 较丰富，语法应用较准确。不足之处在于文章段落内部逻辑关系混乱，有些语句表意不明，一些例证和 观点是与本文主题完全无关的内容，更有个别语句是毫无存在意义的空洞内容，望日后写作时杜绝此现 象的发生。 Vitamin Not Poison 郭聪 吉林省吉林市江城中学高三四班 With the high development of science and techonology, computers have stepped into common people's daliy life. Computers are like vitamin and bring us lots of nutritions, however, if we don't use them in a right way, they can be poisonous and have bad effects on us. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 There is no doubt that computers are changing our life more or less from young to old, from person to the whole society. To our students, computers can bring us a large number of knowledge with its various news and readings, which may broaden our eyes, full our minds and keep up with all the fashions. It's also convinent for teachers and schools on education. Teachers can exchange their teaching experience through the internet and electronic technoloy teaching can be more lively and esily draw students' attention, no doubt, the qulity of teoching will be improved. What's more, many middle aged people may play games, listen some light music to relife their pressure, while the olds can also enjoy themselves by computers. In addition, companyies use computers to do bussiness, which will be more convienent, of couse can make more profits. However, as the old going says “Every coin has two sides”. if we can't use computers in a proper way, it's also harmful. In modem life, many students even college students are so addicated to computers that they give up studying half-way; at the same time the crimeinal rent of computers is growing up these years. As a consequence, many students have mentle illness and all the above will have bad effects on the tohole society. In my opinion, computers are good tools for us just like vitamin, if we do not want them to be poison, the only thing we should do is to control ourselves and use them in a reasonable and proper way and partents should show respect for computers and company with their child in case of some unheathly effects. Taking all these factors into consideration, computers are vitamin not poison. Computers bring us knowledge and joyand Since reforming is boorning in China, computers are becoming more and more important. Without computers, forgien guests can not know more about China; without computers commnication is still be a serious problem; without computers the Olympic won't be such a success. If we use computers in a proper way, we will find it like vitamin not poison, only in this way can we arm our-selves with knowledye, keep up the high pace of modern life and really make a difference. 专家建议: 建议该考生针对自己的写作语言还有必要再雕琢的情况，平时在学习中学课本或是阅读课外权威英 语材料时，有意识地积累文章中的英语表达，以便以后在写作过程中使用。另外，文章中偶尔出现逻辑 错误，这就要求考生平时有意识地多阅读英文议论文章，并且观察与模仿文章中严谨的逻辑关系，提升 自己的逻辑思考能力。 专家点评: 该篇文章段落间结构基本清晰，内容丰满充沛。特别之处在于把计算机比作维生素来说明一件东西 如果我们利用得当那么它就是宝贝;如果利用不得当，那它就是“毒药“。文章语言运用绝对超出了现阶 段高中生的平均水平，词汇运用较为准确和高级，语法及句型运用也较为丰富和多变。但是，文章中充 斥着大量与主题无关的语句，使文章显得冗长厚重。把电脑比作维生素从某些角度来写也是不严谨的， 再有，文章中的一些语句存在逻辑错误，还有空间再进行雕琢，可使文章语言更地道更严谨。 The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers 安明玉 山东省泰安市第一中学9班 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 Gone are the days when people have to ride thousands of miles away to send letters to our friends and relatives. Nowadays, with the development of modernization, computers have been common in our daily life. With the computers, we can communicate with our friends who are even millions of miles away. And we can buy what we want without walking out of the door. What's more, computers also broaden our horizens as well as richen our knowledge. Through the Internet, we can know more about the world, such as how many gold medals Chinese athletes have got in the Olympic Games, what is the life like in the cities of Sichuan and when our “Shenzhou-?” will come back to earth. It seems like that the whole world is no more than one metre away (from the screen of computers to our own eyes). Besides, many difficult works can be perfectly and quickly finished by computers. It's no doubt that computers are playing a such an important role in our life that we cannot live without them. However, overy coin has two cides. In spite of these advantages, computers are sometimes harmful to us if they are not properly used. According to a recent research, an increasing number of students are cocooring self themseloes in computer games. As a result, their marks are becoming lower and lower. What's more, some illegal information, which will do great harm to the children who do not always have a correct judgement, is spreading quickly through the internet. Thus can also lead to an increasing percentage of crime. In my opinion, only if the computer is correctly used by us can it be a true friend and teacher of us. I believe that our society will be more peaceful and developed with all our offort and all of the disadoantages can be avoid successfully. 专家建议: 建议作者平时多练习议论文写作，并且在练习中要时刻提醒自己议论文写作的规则是什么，那就是 文中的每一句话都是围绕文章主题进行的，至少，段落内的每一句话都是围绕段落中心的。作者在这方 面还有空间提高。 专家点评: 本文运用了较多的高级词汇和表达;论证语言比较有力，得体;语法的多样性也有所体现;并且在 文章中不乏新颖独特的语言表达。但是本文结构设置差强人意，冗长的第一段既是文章的引言段又充当 了文章用于说明计算机给我们的好处的主题段，所以看起来不够清晰，明了。结尾的部分无论从语言还 是内容来看都有待修改，如果不是因为时间仓促，那么这个结尾的创作就实在不是很用心了。 The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers 褚婧雅 湖南省长沙市天心区长郡中学高二0612班 Nobody denies that we can live a colourful life with computers. No matter who we are, no matter what kind of job we do, we all need a computer to surf the Internet or spend on playing computers for recreations. However, computers bring us both advantages and disadvantages. Computers provide us with various of imformation. We can get a knowledge of news, advertisements and even great events about the whole world. During the 2008 Olympic games, people can learn a lot about the 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 competitions, sports games, reports or the results of the Olympic Games. Computers really supply us with vivid images about the society. In addition, computers make we study more effectivly. It is undoubtedly that lots of students are able to get large amounts of e-books from computers. For example, we always use computers as tools to learn English or other popular languages. Stressed out as we are, we listen to the computers and speak aloud by following it. Moreover, adults also get a lot from computers when they want to study or in need of piles of files about their work. Generally speaking, with the Internet, we find it easier to share achievements, happiness and sorrows with friends in the world through communications on computers. Not only can we talk about funny things, but also we can know more about the different cultures from different backgrounds. A majority of people are engaged in commucating with friends through QQ or MSN. It is yeally an attractive and happy thing to enjoy in our spare time. Achievements, happiness and sorrows in daily life are all got across to each sides of the “bridge”, and we can eventually satisfy our inner desire and become more energetic. As a matter of fact, I'm afraid, some teens are hooked on playing computer games. It possiblly makes them go astray. These students have been addicted to computers and only few of them can be saved from this awful troubles. How dissapointed their parerts are! What can hopefully relief them? As for this situation, in fact, computers paly a cruel killer that avoid students from studying and even ruin their bright future. In conclusion, without computers, there is little chance to change our life and we may not live a life so efficiently. But if some people who not take care of computers, they will loose their beautiful tomorrow. So please regard computers as coins with two sides. 专家建议: 建议该考生针对自己的写作语言还有必要再雕琢的情况，平时在学习中学课本或是阅读课外权威英 语材料时，有意识地积累文章中的英语表达，以便以后在写作过程中使用。另外，文章中偶尔出现逻辑 错误，这就要求考生平时有意识地多阅读英文议论文章，并且观察与模仿文章中严谨精确的逻辑关系， 提升自己的逻辑思考能力。 专家点评: 该篇文章分为多个段落，段落间结构基本清晰，内容丰满充沛。文章语言运用绝对超出了现阶段高 中生的平均水平，词汇运用较为准确和高级，语法及句型运用也较为丰富和多变，是一篇不可多得的中 学生英语文章。但文章中的个别语句还有空间再进行雕琢，可使文章语言更地道更严谨。 第六届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登 题目: Directions: Some people maintain that universities are the best place for young people to receive higher education; other people believe that young people can be equally educated by taking correspondence courses or going to evening classes and open universities in their spare time. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 Write an article of about 300 words in which you compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of formal university education and informal higher education. Which do you think is more effective and desirable? Support your argument with appropriate examples or illustrations. 命题思路: 本试题要求学生对比高等教育的两种主要形式:正规的大学课堂教育与函授、夜大学、电视大学等业余的非正规高等教育。学生必须在对比权衡两种不同模式的利弊后，阐述自己的观点，并有适当的例证。 就题目所涉及的内容而言，考生比较熟悉，因为高等教育是与他们最贴近的现实。这样可以在一定程度上保证本次写作考试的信度，确保学生不至于因为思路障碍，无话可说而影响英语写作。从组织结构而言，本试题是典型的”对比型”作文，能够比较有效地考察学生的逻辑思维能力、观点表达能力以及运用适当的语言形式来实现转折、衔接、连贯等语言能力。评分细则: 本题作文的评分可参照如下标准: 1.内容:(30%) 主要观测点: ?内容是否充实、完整;是否有一定的支撑细节; ?观点是否鲜明; ?论证是否有力; ?逻辑是否合理; 2.组织结构:(20%) 主要观测点: ?总体结构是否合理; ?能否确定有意义的比照点，逐点分层次阐述; ?能否分段落陈述，各段落有合适的主题句(Topic Sentence)和辅助句(Supporting Sentences); ?段落之间是否连贯; 3.语言表达:(50%)主要观测点: ?用词是否贴切; ?句子结构是否符合语法; 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 ?能否运用不同的语言形式，灵活表达; ?能否运用对比、递进、转折等语言衔接手段，实现文章的连贯; ?语言是否得体，语气是否得当。 Although most students are still fighting for the diploma in universities after graduation from high school, it has been a clear trend that more and more students choose to start their working career earlier and receive informal higher education, which in my opinion, serves better to build more competition (competitive) and suitable personal abilities. Informal higher education offers better opportunities to adapt to social life for students, and help them understand better the reality of their social community and responsibilities they are to take. Compared with those who spend entirely their time in the (on) campus, students who take evening classes could contact with more people, develop their communication skills and social behaviors during working hours. They know better how cruel and realistic the society is and that it is your power and capabilities that only speak. They understand and adapt better to the pressure of life‟s difficulties which in universities could hardly be realized. Secondly, after experiencing real working life, these (those) who attend correspondence courses would know better what kind of knowledge and abilities they must master, which definitely help them in future advancement and career choices. Suppose you‟re a graduate from high school and become an assist of a car repairing workshop. Then you‟ll have to know how the engine and different parts of the car works and how to deal with various crisises (emergent problems). Therefore, night schools‟ education (evening classes) would enable you (插入 to) acquire more specialized knowledge which are fit to you. However, in universities, you have to learn a great many courses, some of which are comparatively useless and can even make you bewilded of future (bewildered to the future). Furthermore, as they have more time to manage for themselves, students drop higher education in universities could earn some money and gain earlier start in career. These will ease their families‟ burdens and satisfy their desire for basic money needs. As a matter of fact, nowadays, more than a few American teens abandon university‟ s education and try to become a worker like air-conditional repairer (air-conditioner repairman) who can earn as much as $ 30, 000 for the first year. Thus, their decisions benefit themselves and their families. Conclude (To conclude) from all the facts talked above, we can safely arrive at the summary that informal higher education is more efficient and serves better. It make (makes) you ahead of others in career development with more competitive skills, fit knowledge, pre cious experiences of social life and more leisure to earn some essential financial supports. As we‟ll one day indulge ourselves in the real soci (walk into the realistic society,) informal higher education serves better for our present and future developing. (development) Fruit & the Vitamin Medicine 姓名 俞艾杉 辽宁省大连市第二十四中 学校 2?10班级 准考证号 0335 With the world developing in (at) high speed, more and more young people take part in higher educated (education). Some of the (them) choose to go to universities, and the others joined evening classes and open universities or took correspondence courses. I think, if we put the formal university education as the fruits we 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 eat and the informal higher education would be like the vitamin medicine. Both of them could give us what we need. Let‟s see two examples: The first one is my elder sister, who studyed (studied) very well and went into Beijing University with a high mark. Now, after the four-year university life, she was employed by a lawyer firm and makes a large sum of money every year. Another example is a girl who used to working in (work in) my father‟s bar. She was a country girl, (插入 and) she worked hard but got little money, so under my father‟s encouragement, she attended an evening class in spare time. The first two years was a hard time, because on one hand, she must to (去掉) learn knowledge in the evening when she was very tired after one day's work; On the other hand, she had to make money to pay for the evening class. But then her way was wider and wider, and now she found a better job in a small company and can offer much more money to her poor family. In my opinion, even both the girl and my sister got a good job at last, but I still think that enter (attending) formal university is better. Because in universities we could make more friends, we could get more chances to communicate with the experienceness (experienced) professors, we could get more ways to receive information of our future jobs, and we could also send ourselves into the coulful (colorful) groups in the university so that we could have a happier higher educated life. But in the informal education, there could not be so much fun. Though I thought like this, but I have to say equally that both fruit and vitamin medicine can give us the vitamins we need, the only difference between them is that some people love fruits and the others may thought (think) having medicine is easier. So whatever you choose, the fruit or the medicine (the formal university education or the informal higher education), the most important is that you can get the knowledge you wanted, isn't it? Let's Go to Universities! 姓名 张培培 山东省淄博市第十一中 学校 高二22班级 准考证号 0209 There's a general debate (插入 on) whether or not universities are the best place for young people to receive higher education. Some people think it right while others think the opposite is true. There‟s probably some truth in both opinions. Some students dream to go (dream of going) to universities be- cause studying in universities does do good to them. Universities have super (outstanding) teachers and professors and most universities are equipped with excellent facilities. Also, by taking part in all kinds of activities organized in universities, students can widen their views (插入 and) increase their experience. In this case, many students are motivated to study harder and acquire more knowledge in middle schools in order to be admitted by the universities they dream of. Not only (插入 do) universities provide good studying place (circumstance), but also they (去掉) encourage students to study. However, there are also some disadvantages. For instance, some universities are not so good as expected, (插入 and) many students can‟t learn much to meet the need of society. Those who fail in their exams can‟t go to their desirable universities. However, the opportunity is offered by the open universities. Students can be equally educated by taking correspondence courses or going to evening class if they fail to go to universities. They can choose courses that 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 cater for their interest and the need of the times freely. Although they are refused to go to universities, they can also benefit from the correspondence courses or evening classes. As the saying goes, “every coin has two sides”. Things always leave undesiabl (something undesirable). There are some evening classes whoes (whose) quality is not good. It‟s hard for people to receive sufficient knowledge. For me, as a student, I would like to go to universities. Once a time, I walked in the Peking University. I was really attracted by the swaggering confidence, the irrepressible spirit and the indomitable nerves that the students in it (去掉) have. I was lost in the studying atmosphere. I‟m really eager to go to university that I like. It is the goal that motivates me to study hard. I have done my best and will continue to do so. I believe it won‟t be long before I achieve my goal! Ibsen once said, “It‟ a your suprem (supreme) duty to cast yourself into a useful emplement.” (implement) I set my mind to go to the university and I‟m determined to succeed. Let‟s go to universities for the universities‟ advantages provided. Stop Your Superstition On Universities 姓名 张益 中河北省石家庄市石家庄外国语 学校 高一(10)班班级 准考证号 0208 Last decade saw the flood peak of students streaming into formal, venerable universities. It seems as if university is the only cradle for(插入 its) talented professers (professors) and well-known celebribties (celebrities). However, I myself never believe the theory holds water. On the contrary, I recommend correspondence courses as well as open universities to be the more preferable choices for modem teenagers. Surely, formal universities enjoy a much better reputation throughout the society, which may more or less be helpful for their students to get a well-paid job. But don‟t be deceived by the attracting illusion. University might be a good place to obtain knowledge, but knowledge seems to be too narrow in front of the definition of education. Not only those language point from the book, but also the specific skills on how to communicate with people, are what we need to become successful. But take a glance at the way students get “educated” in formal universities. They get up at an approximately same time, (插入 and) they go to assigned classroom and start facing dull books all day. They just have no time to get more sociable skills as well as definite, professional tecneques (techniques). That‟s why oceans of university graduations are obliged to major some more practical skills again, for they are mostly jobless. However, attending correspondence courses or evening classes, is a perfect way to solve the problem. We can make full use of our spare time to do a part-time job and to get more “education” naturally from the vivid society. To say “I obtain knowledge, and I get the true essence of how to become a real marl. “ is not enough to de- scribe its efficiency and magic. We can undoubtedly renew our antiquated, inadequate “knowledge case” inside our brain by diligently study (studying) at night, and conscientiously taking a job and get- ring “extra-education” at daytime. Stop your superstition on universities, and make a more effective choice without hesitation. Only in this way can a perfect celerity both well-educated and sociable be shaped! Universities or Informal Education? 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 姓名 刘钥铭 辽宁省本溪市高级中学 学校 高二十五班班级 准考证号 0125 It is an undeniable fact that, nowadays, a controversial debate has (插入 been) risen as to whether universities or informal higher education is more essential for students, (which is more essential for students, universities or informal higher education). People vary in their opinions on this question. Those who are in favor of universities often provide the following evidence. First of all, universities are run by the government and seem to be more reliable, whereas informal higher education is short of serious disciplines. Moreover universities have the incomparable merits that with students living in their dormitories they provide (are provided) plenty of time to gain the knowledge they long for. Nevertheless, there are also people who set forth a totally opposite idea. They claim that there are various kinds of informal education ranging from correspondence courses to open universities and evening classes, from which students can choose freely according to their own needs and likes. Furthermore, students can get more spare time to step into other activities or continue their work during the daytime. While in universities, students have to stay inside all day. This, of course, will reject those workers who have an appetite for knowledge and want to further their study. From my perspective, I think the former group‟s idea is more favorable. Three key components account for my choice. First and foremost, with a longer history, universities provide students with more accurate knowledge and can equip them better for their future career. What‟s more, during the four years of acdamic (academic) life, students can broaden their eyes, deepen their understanding, sharpen their mind and maintain specialized training. Last but not least, it is commonly accepted that universities are more experienced in education and have a better environment for students to develop themselves both mentally and physically. Taking all these factors into consideration, I confidentally (confidently) come to the conclusion that one should give priority to universifies. Only in this way can they arm themselves with more knowledge and perfect their personalities. University, a Better Choice 姓名 卢亦岑 辽宁省沈阳市东北育才 学校 高一9班级 准考证号 0083 Today, more and more students choose to go to universities after their (they) graduate from high school. The motive varies from individual to individual. Meanwhile, there are also a number of people argue that for juveniles, taking correspondence courses or going to evening classes and open universities in their spare time would be a better choice, since these students, who are new-comers of the society, can learn much more outside the classroom. To determine which is more desirable, we should look into further details. It is a simple yet universial (universal) law that for adolescents, study is a never-changed thing to do. Consequently, students may never take the pain to ponder: why I go to school? (插入 When) answering the question why they go to universities, they may say, “to learn more academic knowledges (knowledge), to made new friends, to look for a higher-paid (well-paid) job and so on.” Universities, nevertheless, have the ability to offer young peoples (people) who are of an age a large platform, which let them to meet, to compete, and to learn from each other. The impact that universities have had on our society in general, is undeniable. Lots of people when reminded (recalling) of the old days in university, would say, that four years are golden, since (for) 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 it provided them lots of opportunities. Though painstaking and time-consuming in many people‟s eye, the function that university as a refinery of the young is highly valued and of essence. On the contrary, evening classes and so on so force (去掉), would stand in a lower position for its lack of communications. Say, students come from a single (the same) city, not even a country. Unlike the exotic faces in a university campus (去掉), students of a (an) evening class are not at all diversified. In addition, it is no doubt that in a broad sense, no one can garantee (guarantee) that those student (students) will be under a condition of “learning” during the free time of a part time (part-time) class. Will all of them, our future elites, go to work or read books in libraries? Hardly. Gone are the days when knowledge is highly valued. It is a time now, when technology is accumulated by multiplying, and at the same time becomes more and more entertaining. Internet, TV, ... all kinds of things will lead to a consequence that students‟ concentration be distracted. As a result, the detriments of evening class will overweigh its benifits (benefits). When the issue comes to my current situation, I will definetly (definitely) choose go to universities without any hesitate (hesitation). However, part-time classes would be a better choice under only one circumstance. It only benefits people who have high self-control, who are virtually minority in quantity. 姓名 耿侠英 山西省太原市外国语 学校 高601班级 准考证号0382 There was a time when people believed in the simple truth that one couldn‟t have a bright future without a university-education degree. Have you ever been deeply convinced about this opinion? Have you ever tried to prove it? Is it true that the informal education is a kind of the worst choice? There is no doubt that being admitted to a key university is a good way to success. Being in our ideal universities, we can enjoy the various kinds of school lives and find (discover) ourselves while working in students‟ communities. With joyness (joys) and happiness, we grow more mature and knowledgeable and get a harvest of precious experience. We let out all our intelligience (intelligence) in university and make friends with each other. What‟s more, we receive a high level of education which is given by qualified and experienced professors. In a word, we make big improvements during the colorful and fruitful school lives. But at the same time, the formal university educations may lead to the unfairness between the general students. A great many students are forced to give up the chance to go to university for the lack of money. Considering this, we may ask ourselves ff it is the only way for every one to catch their dreams. With the development of the education, there exists (exist) many informal higher education schools like evening classes and open universities. We must notice that these social schools have indeed helped many students solve their problems in education. A part of people could take lessons (receive education) and go on working at the same time. For some people, it is another way to fulfill their broken (unfulfillable) dreams of universities. According to the basic condition of China, the informal education really does a good job a- bout the necessity of so many people‟s education, and help to improve the quality of people in general. Besides this, people can experience a different concept of education if ones have (one has) already got bored with their majors and want to learn more. In my opinion, it is alright for everyone to do what they love to, to be what they love to be, for we are different from each other. We all have our own goals and dreams. Everyone is fair (equal) and every one has the right to realize their dreams. The most important thing is that we want to study, we want to make progress and we want to be someone. Although there are so many praises and abuses about our choices, we should stick 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 on (to) our ideas just for the simple reason that we‟ll make it only if we keep on studying. Believe me and believe in this idea: no one can stop you except yourself, (插入 and) your choice can be right just because you believe it is right, after all, impossible is nothing! 吕 图 辽宁省大连市育明高中 学校 三?九班级 准考证号 0139 姓名 Dear Jean: It is a great surprise that you sent me a letter telling me that you were considering about getting higher education! Now that you can hardly decide whether to go to formal universities or informal courses, let me give you some advice that may help. The formal or the informal, there is much discussion nowadays on it (both). Most people incline to the former for the most important reason: it is formal. The word “formal” means famous professors, latest information, better facilities and more opportunities, few of which the informal colleges can provide with (去 掉). However, there are some things that formal universities can not offer: a flexible timetable and a study plan just for you. The reason why Bill Gates left Harvard before graduation lies in the fact that he couldn‟t gain what he himself wanted to learn. On the other hand, some people hold the view that young people can be equally educated by taking informal courses in their spare time. The reasons are as follow. First and foremost, informal courses give people more chances to learn if they failed to attend a formal university. Furthermore, the timetable is so flexible that you don‟t have to quit from your job. Last but not least, the open attitude of informal courses encourages more people to pick up books again when they are no more young (not young), as the saying goes “Live to learn, learn till death. “ Notwithstanding the advantages, there are still some advantages (disadvantages). For instance, many companies don‟t hire a man who has just been in informal universities instead of a formal one. As far as I‟m concerned, I tend to a formal university and I‟ve just told you the reasons above. But there is one thing that I believe all my life: the fit one is the best. Please don‟t just follow my advice, on the contrary you should think carefully and make you own decision. The future being in your own hand, just ask yourself: what you truly desire for. Well, please send me a letter after you make up your mind. No matter what the decision is, I am proud of you! Good Luck! Your sincerely, Ann 姓名 陈 茜 辽宁省大连市第24高中 学校 高二?一班级 准考证号 0300 With different kinds of evening classes and open universities popping up everywhere, there is no denying that complementary schools have played an integral part in our lives. However, my perspective is that formal universities far outweigh such complementary schools. 才智在线在线才智 才智在线在线才智 Allowing for more flexibility, students (Complementary schools allow more flexibility, and the students there) can adjust their study schedule to match the time of day when they are most alert (busy). Nevertheless, there also exist some disadvantages that should never be ignored. Firstly, such schools don‟t have severe disciplines, thus some students are easily lured to the dreadful sin instead of the heaven for knowledge (逻辑错 误, acquiring knowledge). Gang violence can be seen in such schools. Secondly, some students there just want to kill time and attach too much importance on (to) fashion. As a result, poor students would be ostracized for their shabby clothing, while middle class students would feel much pressure to spend exorbitant amounts on expensive designer clothing. Thirdly, some open schools are like marshmallows, light and fluffy with no real sub- stance. It‟s a waste of time and money. Last but not least, all companies don‟t view certifications (certificates) of such schools equivalent to those of formal schools. Job hunting could become a (an) insurmountable problem. Conversely, there is a correlation between formal universities and the word “authority”. Firstly, universities provide an ideal environment for study with rules promoting discipline. Needless to say, it will stimulate students to discuss about thought-provoking issues and exchange their own experiences. Secondly, formal universities can creat (create) a sense of cohesiveness, which leads students to work within a group concept. It‟s an all-important factor in the society. Thirdly, students can build successful human interaction in (on) campus since they have more time to spend together, finding they have more in common with one another. Life in universities is like food, be it nutritious food for our body or spiritual food for our soul. There are several examples of some individuals who get success without university experience. However, there‟re tens of thousands of examples who fail. Auending a formal university, as a general rule of thumb, is the best way to go. 才智在线在线才智