2012情景作文赏析

nullnull2010北京卷高分情景作文赏析null学习目标 ：通过赏析2010北京情景作文掌握情景作文的答题思路及技巧： 开头+过程(细节)+结尾, 注意连接词的使用。2.通过自主学习、小组讨论、训练巩固等 方法 快递客服问题件处理详细方法山木方法pdf计算方法pdf华与华方法下载八字理论方法下载 使学生掌握文中的重点词组，并能够运用部分重点词组造句，例如：help sb do sth, go to a place to do sth, 提高学生写简单句的能力及扩充学生词汇量。null1. 结构完整. (beginning---body---ending)情景作文高分亮点2. 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 要点 综治信访维稳工作要点综治信访维稳工作要点2018综治平安建设工作要点新学期教学工作要点医院纪检监察工作要点 全、细节支持清楚.4. 词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。3. 上下文行文连贯，连接词使用恰当。对基础弱的学生来说，简单句只要能正确地传递信息，达到交际目的，就是好句子。尽量使用简单句可以少出错误。nullnull early in the morning in the afternoonin the middle of the day / at noonin the evening / at nightat weekends on Sunday morninglast Monday the next dayin classwhen we arrived / upon our arrivaltwo hours latera few days later1.上周末 2. 在下午 3. 在晚上 4.在清早 5. 在中午 6. 在周末 7.在周日早上 8.上周一 9.第二天 10.课上 11.课后 12.在我的业余时间 13.两个小时之后 14.几天之后 15.当我们到达的时候after classin my spare timelast weekendnullExercise3: 用下列短语造句 1. help sb do /（to do）/ with sth 翻译句子： 1) 昨天晚上，我帮助祖父母收拾行李.(pack sth.) 2)放学后, 我帮助一位老人走下台阶。 3)上周末，我帮助父母打扫房间，例如扫地、洗衣服、擦窗子等。（such as）I helped my grandparents to pack their suitcase last night.After class, I helped an old man go down the stairs. Last weekend, I helped my parents clean the house, such as sweeping the floor, washing the clothes, wiping the windows and so on.null2. go to a place to do sth 昨天下午我们去火车站去为他送行。（see sb off） 2)上周六我和朋友们去北京参观故宫。( the Forbidden City) 3) 三月五日，我们去敬老院去帮助老人做一些事 (senior citizens home)We went to the train station to see him off yesterday afternoon.Last Saturday, I went to Beijing to visit the Forbidden City with my friends.On March 5th, we went to a senior citizens home to help the old people to do something.null3. 翻译句子： 1)上周五，我上网查询旅游信息,例如天气,景点等等. 2) 最后我们和他们道别.(say goodbye to sb) 3) 我向他们挥手告别。 4)我希望他们旅途顺利.(smooth) Last Friday, I searched the Internet for some information about trips, such as weather, sights and so on.At last, we said goodbye to them.I waved goodbye to them.I wished them a smooth trip.null巩固提高 2010丰台1模 情景作文（20分） 假如你是红星中学高三一班的学生。3月5日是学雷锋日，你班组织了一次帮扶活动。请根据下面四幅图所提供的活动内容和过程写一篇英文短文，为你校校刊英语专栏投稿。短文词数不少于60。 提示词：senior citizens home养老院Beginning: On March 5th our class organized an activity in memory of Lei Feng. 主体人称：主体时态：Wedidnull要点：Picture1:Picture2:Picture3:Picture4:have a class meeting to discuss what we would dohelp the elderly do a thorough cleaning teach them some daily English give them some wonderful performancesleave the senior citizens homenullThe day before,Development：the time lineAfter that,When the lunch time came,In the morning,null细节：要点：have a class meeting to discuss what we would docome up with several ideasdecide to go to the senior citizens home to help them to do somethingnull要点：细节：help the elderly do a thorough cleaning sweep the floormop the floorwipe the windowslook tidy and cleannull要点：细节：teach them some daily Englishgive them wonderful performanceslearn English slowly but very carefullybe patientsing and danceapplaud for usnull要点：细节：Ending:leave the senior citizens homewave goodbye to themhope we would come againbe tired but happybe unforgettable / meaningful / memorablenull写出这篇作文，文章结构要完整，注意连接词使用,使上下文行文连贯。根据个人情况，可使用高级词汇及多样的句式如：定语从句、状语从句、分词短语、倒装等，但力争保证语言的准确。nullHomework: 1. Copy the beautiful composition and try to understand the structure again.2. Recite the important phrases and prepare for a dictation.nullOn SaturdayDevelopment：the time lineIn the eveningEarly in the morning on SundayIn the afternoonnull Our class planned to organize an activity on March 5th in memory of Lei Feng. The day before, we had had a class meeting to discuss what we would do. After a heated discussion, we had decided to go to a senior citizens home to do something for the elderly. On March 5th, we set out early in the morning. As soon as we got to the senior citizens home, we first did a thorough cleaning. Some swept and mopped the floor. Some cleaned the windows and the others did some washing. nullAn hour later, the rooms in the senior citizens home looked clean and tidy. And then we were divided into two groups. One group gave wonderful performances that the elderly enjoyed a lot, the other group taught those who were interested in English some daily English expressions. All the elderly had a good time with us. When lunch time came, we had to say good-bye to them. We’ve really learned a lot from what we did. We also realize that we can make ourselves useful to those who need help and care.