高三英语写作教学-新闻评论概要写作(公开课)(课堂PPT)

SummarywritingWhatisasummary?Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails.Howdoyouusuallydosummarywriting?Steps:2.Readforstructure3.Readformainpoints4.Rewriteinourown word word文档格式规范word作业纸小票打印word模板word简历模板免费word简历 s1.ReadforwritingstyleStep1.ReadquicklyforwritingstyleNewscommentary（新闻评论）News(background)Comments(suggestions)EndingPara1-2Para3-4Para5-6para7NewsCommentsSuggestionsEndingStep2.ReadquicklyforstructurePara1-2NewsPara3-4CommentsPara5-6SuggestionsPara7EndingParas.Mainpoints1News23Comments45Suggestions67EndingStep3.Readcarefullyformainpointsamanwaskilled/thetiger/getintothezooinNingbo/withoutpayingforaticket/thetigerwasshotdeadblame/cold-hearted/wrongtiredofforgivingtheparkwasnotwellpreparedraisepeople'sawareness/visitorstoobserverulesnomoresuchtragediesStep4.RewriteinyourownwordsTip1:usewordsorphrasesofsimilarmeaningOriginalexpressionsrewritegetintowithoutpayingforaticketwasshotdeadcold-heartedthoseinthewrongenterwithoutpayingwaskilledcold-bloodedrule-breakersStep4.RewriteinyourownwordsTip2.changeclausesorsentences1.Somesaidthiswasasignthatpeoplearebecomingmorecold-hearted.Buttheyarewrong.1.Somesaidthatpeoplebecomecold-hearted,whichiswrong.2.Thetiger’sdeathshowstheparkwasnotwellpreparedforsuchemergencies.2.Theparkshouldmakebetterpreparations.Step4.RewriteinyourownwordsTip3.useproperconnectionsThemajorityofvoicesonlineblamedthedeadmanfortheanimal’sdeath.Somesaidthatpeoplebecomecold-hearted,whichiswrong.Peoplearejusttiredofforgivingthoseinthewrong.Peopleblamedthemannotbecausetheyarecold-hearted,butbecausetheyaretiredofforgivingrule-breakers.Writeasummaryingroupsoffour.Getreadytosharethesummaryinclass.SummaryWriting1.Isthelengthproper?(40~80words)2.Isthereanysentenceexactlyfromthearticle?3.Doesitincludeallthemainpoints?onepossibleversion：AmanwhoenteredazooinNingbowithoutpayingwaskilledbyatigerwhichwasconsequentlykilled.Manypeopleblamedtherule-breakerforthedeathofthetigernotbecausetheyarecold-bloodedbutbecausesympathyshouldn’tbeabused.Toavoidsuchtragedies,theparkshouldtakemoreemergencyprecautionsandthepublicshouldraisetheirawarenessofobeyingrules.(62words)UseyourownwordsRulesRewritethearticlewithabout60wordsDon’tmissanymainpointsMakethesummarycoherent(连贯的)Correctspelling,properpunctuationmarksandgoodhandwritingSummaryWritingReadformainpointsSkillsReadforstructureReadforwritingstyleOrganizeyourlanguageSummaryWritingHomeworkFinishyourownsummaryandswapitwithyourpartnerandmakesomechangesothatitcanbeabetterone.Wishyougoodluckinthecomingexam!(1)Usewordsofsimilarmeanings同义替换法Ididn’tcatchanyfishowingtothefactthatIwasnotpatient.Ididn’tcatchanyfish_________Iwasnotpatient.becauseHowtorewrite(2)Adopttheoppositewaywhensayingasentence正话反说法Youwillfail.Youwill____________.notsucceed(3)Changethepartofspeech词性转换法Patienceisveryimportant.Patienceis_____________________.ofgreatimportance(4)Changethestructureofasentence句式变化法语态变换：Parentsshouldgivechildrenmorepraise.Childrenshould__________morepraise.begiven简单句变复合句：Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore.Thiswillhelpthemlearnfaster.Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore,_______willhelpthemlearnfaster.Childrenaregivenmorepraise.Theywillachievemoresuccess.When_________________,childrenwillachievemoresuccess.whichgivenmorepraise(5)Usetheshortestpossibletransitions连词衔接法注意使用一些短而精的连词，如but,and,so,while,however,then,thus,yet,for,therefore,including,insteadof等。Weshouldencouragechildren.Weshouldnotscoldthem.Weshouldencouragechildren__________scoldingthem.insteadof(6)Changetheorderofthewords.词序改变法Thesecretofsuccesswaspatience.________was___________________.Patiencethesecretofsuccess(7)Omitthedetails细节省略法Don’talwaysscoldandgivelotsofpraiseinstead.———————————————Don’tscoldandgivepraiseinstead.(8)Makeuseofthemeaningofasentence句意理解法ShoppingontheInternetisbecomingincreasinglypopular.______________________________________________________MoreandmorepeoplepreferInternetshopping.Step3.ReadforMainPointsPara.3Asnewsoftheincidentspread,themajorityofvoicesonlineblamedthedeadmanfortheanimal'sdeath.Somesaidthiswasasignthatpeoplearebecomingmorecold-hearted.Buttheyarewrong.Peoplehavebeendisplayingincreasinglymoreenthusiasmforhelpingthoseinneedandparticipatingincharitywork.In2016,theChinaCharityFederationreceiveddonationsof18.8billionyuan($2.7billion)intotal,46percentmorethanthedonationsreceivedin2015,andtheysenthelpinghandstoonetragedyafteranother.Para.3Asnewsoftheincidentspread,themajorityofvoicesonlineblamedthedeadmanfortheanimal'sdeath.Somesaidthiswasasignthatpeoplearebecomingmorecold-hearted.Buttheyarewrong.Peoplehavebeendisplayingincreasinglymoreenthusiasmforhelpingthoseinneedandparticipatingincharitywork.In2016,theChinaCharityFederationreceiveddonationsof18.8billionyuan($2.7billion)intotal,46percentmorethanthedonationsreceivedin2015,andtheysenthelpinghandstoonetragedyafteranother.opinionsupportingdetailsPara.4❶Peoplearejusttiredofforgivingthoseinthewrong.❷Whilesympathyisright,ithasbeenabusedtoomuch.❸Whensomebodycommitsacrime,nomatterhowcruelthecrimeis,mediaoutletsexplainthecriminal'smiserablechildhoodandtherearecallsforforgiveness.❹Whensomeonesmokesinpublic,therearealwayspeoplecallingfortolerance.Step3.ReadforMainPointsPara.4❶Peoplearejusttiredofforgivingthoseinthewrong.❷Whilesympathyisright,ithasbeenabusedtoomuch.❸Whensomebodycommitsacrime,nomatterhowcruelthecrimeis,mediaoutletsexplainthecriminal'smiserablechildhoodandtherearecallsforforgiveness.❹Whensomeonesmokesinpublic,therearealwayspeoplecallingfortolerance.❷reason❸❹examples