2021年度浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析

.9浙江高考：OneweekendinJuly，Janeandherhusband，Tom，haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately，onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake，JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround，hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise，shesawnothingbutforestand，farbeyond，asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom！"shecried."Help!"Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving，butthefarthershewalked，themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall，Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark，JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday，hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream，Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately，thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater，anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse，thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意:1.所续写短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线核心词语：3.续写某些分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完毕后，请用下划线标出你所使用核心词语。Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup..6Onabright，warmJulyafternoon，MacHollan，aprimaryschoolteacher，wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair，buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon，andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone，hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man，that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside，hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall，butawolf，quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofhearspray.Withonehandonthebars，hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal，andtoMac'srelief，itfellback，shakingitshead.Butaminutelater，itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike，tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime，andagain，itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）。Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill，he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment，PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater，theyspottedwhatthey，too，assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser，theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast，justadozenyardsawaynow.注意:1.所续写短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线核心词语：3.续写某些分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完毕后，请用下划线标出你所使用核心词语。Paragraph1Thecarabrubtlystoppedinfrontofhim.Paragraph2Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.11.浙江高考A vacationwithmymother  Ihadaninterestingchildhood：Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements，allbecauseofmymother-loving，sweet，andyet absent-minded and forgetful.Onestrangefamily trip wetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.  MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota，andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached, David，myeight-year-oldbrother，andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally，themomentofourdeparturearrived，andweloadedsuitcases，books，games, camping equipment，anda tent intothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecks Mom hadforgotten.  DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhile Dadslept:”YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo，andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind：“Honey，wherearethekids?”“What?！Oh，Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity，butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight，wehad trouble findingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime，Momsuddenlygotagreatidea：Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief，Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps，Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasas nice assheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown. 注意：1.所续写短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线核心词语；3.续写某些分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完毕后，请用下划线标出你所使用核心词语。Para1： Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Para2： Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.6Itwassummer，andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque，abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul，mydad’sfriend，pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning，UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast，IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon，IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahoseride，andhesaidyes，aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So，mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats，gotonourhorses，andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried，"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK！"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfamhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks，thedeepgreenpinetrees，andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织）blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1.所续写短文词数应为l50左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线核心词语：3.续写某些分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完毕后，请用下划线标出你所使用核心词语。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.参照范文一：Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Atthatmoment(时间)，shefeltalittlesad，butshewasn’tsofrightened(情感).Sheremindedherselfconstantly，(心理)“Tommusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybe(情感)hewasinoneofthemandwillreturnsoon(动作)！Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”Shefeltasleep(动作)anddreamedofseeingTom(动作).Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthen(时间)walkedalongthestream，hoping(心理)tofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Shewalkedandwalked，exhaustedbutfullofhope.Suddenly(时间)，shespotted(动作)ahugeflatrock.Shemanaged(动作)toclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Themoment(时间)thehelicopterappeared(动作)again.Theneareritgot(动作)，themoreshewaved(动作)theyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy，(情感)thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.Tomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrushed(动作)towardsJane.Theyhuggedeachothertightly(情感)andburstintotears(情感).参照范文二：Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Hethenranaroundtothepassengerdoor，butitwaslocked，aswell，sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Whenspottingthis,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor，andthefrightenedmandivedin，slammingthedoorbehindhim.PaullookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter，theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater，theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Maccriedtothem.Macretrieved（取回）hisbicycle，andthethreemenresumed(继续）theirroadtrip，agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmilesdowntheroad，Macpulledoverandburstintotears.“Therestofthetripwasamazing，butIhadtolettheformeremotionout.”参照范文三：Para1: Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus. Mom insistedthatwemustmakefulluseofitsincewehadbroughtit. David andIlookedat Dad，hopinghecouldstophercrazyidea.Toourgreatdisappointment，heagreed.Wespentawholeafternoonseekinga nicecamping placeandsetupour tent beforethenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtmomcouldbewiseasIadmiringourstunningtent.“Oh，Iforgotthepillows!”whatamisconception.Despitetheacheofmyneck，wehadsomegreatnights.Para1: Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway. Thebrightbluesky，thelimitlessgreengrass，thegroupofsheep，thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery，wealsomanagedtoconsidermom’sscandalsasakindoffun.IreallylovemyMum. Toourrelief，wearrivedatgrandparents’placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.Itwassofortunatetoseemyfriendsagain.范文四：Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse. Instinctively，Iyelledoutloud，pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident，thehorsespedoffthetrack intoanotherdirection. Dad followedcloselybehind，callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseand Ididastold.Finally，thehorsecalmeddown，butweseemedto getlost，unableto gobacktothemountainroad. Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark. Wanderingaround，wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight，thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongthe river whichmayleadustothe farmhouse andnothingseemedbetterthanthat.Timeappearedtobemerrierandshorter whenIstayed togetherwith Dad andbeforelong，thefarmhousecameinto sight.Whatathrillingbutmemorableexperienceitwas! Version2Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Iimmediatelygrewfondofthefurryrabbitandcalledoutexcitedly，“Dad！Look!”Alarmed，therabbitranawayinaflash.Ifollowediteagerly，hopingtocatchitasmytrophyforthetrip.Mydadjustfollowedme，knowingitwasimpossibletostopme.Wetrackedtherabbitforabouttenminutesuntilitgotcompletelyoutofsight.Depressedandtired，Isuggestedgoingback.Butapparently，wehaddivergedfromthetrackUnclePaulwarnedustokeep.(86words)Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Thethoughtthatwemighthavegotlostinsuchdarknesssentshiversdownmyspine.Tearsoffearandregretfilledmyeyes.Fortunately，DadwasnotsopanickedasIwas.Hekeptsilentandlistenedverycarefullyashetookmyhorsereinandledtheway.Wehadwanderedforwhatseemedlikeageswhensuddenlyarivercameintosight.Hopefully，wecouldfindourwaybacktothefarmhouseifwefollowedtheriver.Finally，wearrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper，butwhatanexperience！Itturnsoutthere’salwaysawayoutofanyplight(困境）aslongaswestaycalm.(114words)