【课件】高中英语续后续写之环湖赛跑

续写之环湖赛跑续写中的学、思、辨、达读原文，学内容和语言01PART011.Forme,itwasnormaltofeellostattheinter-camptrack.Fourcampsofkidswerereadytoleadtheirteamstoablueribbonandwintheday.Notme.Iwastoolittletobetheleaderandtooskinnytobeanathlete.IknewthisbythetimeIwastwelve,becausemycampcounselors（辅导员）andtheotherkidsremindedmeofiteverychancetheygot.Sowhenourcampneededafourthrunnerinthetwo-mileracearoundthelake,IknewIwasnoone’sfirstchoice. 2.Ihidintheshadeofamapletreeastheycalledthenamesoftherunners,mybodytensedasIheardacounselorcall,“Fred!WhereisFred!Heisinthisrace!”ItwasBarry.Hespottedmeunderthetree.“Fred!Weneeda12-year-oldwhohasn’tbeeninothereventstorunthetwo-mile!” 3.Hegavemeapushtowardsthestartingline.Havingnoconfidenceandtryingtosavemyselffromtheshameoftakingthelastplaceasfourcampswatched,Ipleadedwithhim. 4.“ButIdon’tknowthewayaroundthelake!” 5.“You’rein.JustfollowBill!”Barrysmiled. 6.Billwasmyfriendandthefastestrunnerinourcamp.AndthenBarrysaid,“Whenyoumakeittothelaststretch（最后一程）onthefield,justthrowyourheadbackandrun.” 7.Atthestartingline,IstoodnexttoBillandtrembled. 8.“Onyourmark…Getset...”Theguncrackedandsixteenofustookoff.IstayedcloseonBill’sheels,alittletoocloseforBill,Iguess.Heshoutedatme,“Backoff!” 9.Idid.Twoguyspassedme,butIkeptmyeyesonBill. 10.Itwastiring.ThedistancewaswideningbetweenBillandme.Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.Throughthetrees,IsawBilltripoveratreerootandfall.Arunnerfromanothercamppassedhim. Paragraph1 Inamoment,Billwasupagainandrunning.____________________________________________ Paragraph2 Ididn’tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline._____________________________________________A.学内容(Getthemainidea)WhenplacetimepeopleeventFred(I),Barry(counselor),Bill(bestfriend)thetwo-mileracearoundthelakeatcampBarryaskedmetoparticipateinthetwo-mileracearoundthelakewithBill.Theracebeganbutunfortunately,wewerebehindandBilltrippedoveratreeroot..B.学语言(learnthelanguage)1.Forme,itwasnormaltofeellostattheinter-camptrack.Fourcampsofkidswerereadytoleadtheirteamstoablueribbonandwintheday.Notme.Iwastoolittletobetheleaderandtooskinnytobeanathlete.IknewthisbythetimeIwastwelve,becausemycampcounselors(辅导员)andtheotherkidsremindedmeofiteverychancetheygot.Sowhenourcampneededafourthrunnerinthetwo-mileracearoundthelake,IknewIwasnoone’sfirstchoice. 2.Ihidintheshadeofamapletreeastheycalledthenamesoftherunners,mybodytensedasIheardacounselorcall,“Fred!WhereisFred!Heisinthisrace!”ItwasBarry.Hespottedmeunderthetree.“Fred!Weneeda12-year-oldwhohasn’tbeeninothereventstorunthetwo-mile!”ablueribbon优秀wintheday获胜tensev.(limbs)becometightandstiff紧绷定语从句3.Hegavemeapushtowardsthestartingline.Havingnoconfidenceandtryingtosavemyselffromtheshameoftakingthelastplaceasfourcampswatched,Ipleadedwithhim.4.“ButIdon’tknowthewayaroundthelake!” 5.“You’rein.JustfollowBill!”Barrysmiled. 6.Billwasmyfriendandthefastestrunnerinourcamp.AndthenBarrysaid,“Whenyoumakeittothelaststretch（最后一程）onthefield,justthrowyourheadbackandrun.” 7.Atthestartingline,IstoodnexttoBillandtrembled.8.“Onyourmark…Getset...”Theguncrackedandsixteenofustookoff.IstayedcloseonBill’sheels,alittletoocloseforBill,Iguess.Heshoutedatme,“Backoff!”givesbapush推了某人一把thestartingline起跑线pleadv.乞求throwone’sheadback身体向前倾theguncracked.枪响了staycloseonone’sheels跟紧某人的脚步非谓语B.学语言(learnthelanguage)B.学语言(learnthelanguage)9.Idid.Twoguyspassedme,butIkeptmyeyesonBill. 10.Itwastiring.ThedistancewaswideningbetweenBillandme.Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.Throughthetrees,IsawBilltripoveratreerootandfall.Arunnerfromanothercamppassedhim.woodedtrailtrailcoveredwithtrees树木繁茂的小路tripover(trippedtripped)绊倒读原文首句、思情节和情感02PART02beginningclimaxending1.______2.______3.______4.______5.______A.Billgotupandrestarted.B.Icrossedthefinishline.C.BarryaskedmetojointherunnersandfollowBill.D.TheracestartedbutBilltrippedover.E.Atwo-mileracearoundthelakewastobeheld.F.Ourcampneededafourthrunner.6.______EFCDABBeforethegame:Ifelt_________clues____________________________________unconfidentNotme;toolittleto...tooskinnyto...;noone’sfirstchoice;hid;tensed;trembledDuringthegame:Ifelt_________clues____________________________________tiredstayedcloseonBill’sheels;keptmyeyesonBill;passed;tiring;widening;Afterthegame:Ifelt_______________clues_______________??读情节、情感变化，辨主 题 快递公司问题件快递公司问题件货款处理关于圆的周长面积重点题型关于解方程组的题及答案关于南海问题 、续文方向03PART03How?BeforethegameDuringthegameAfterthegameunconfidenttiredconfidentthemelovefriendshipchangeofmyattitudefiercecompetition构思语言，传情达意04PART04Para.1Inamoment,Billwasupagainandrunning.Para.2Ididn’tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline.Howwashiscondition?HowdidIfeelatthesightofBill’spersistence?WhatdidIdo?Bill带伤跑步--我受到激励--我奋起直追WhatdidIdoandhowdidIfeelafterreachingthefinishline?WhatdidBarryandBillsay?WhatdidIthinkoftheexperience?（我)到达--(别人)祝贺--(我)感悟比赛中受激励l来自比尔的感动1.一看到比尔跌跌撞撞地前行着，膝盖仍在流血，我无比动容。（on+doing一...就...）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.DespitethehugepainIcouldtellfromhisextremelypaleface,Billdidn’tstop._____________________________________________________________________________________________(正是他钢铁般的坚持和坚定的决心给了我额外的能量。强调句)OnseeingBillstumbleforwardwithhiskneesstillbleeding,Iwasdeeplymoved.Itwashisironpersistenceandresolutedeterminationthatgavemeanextraburstofenergy.比赛中受激励l来自巴里的提醒、激励我突然想起巴里的话。ThenBarry’swords______________________.(闪过我脑袋)_______________________.(在我脑袋回响)flashedintomyhead.echoedinmyhead.Ø加速1.快速跑v._________________比赛中坚持和努力raceeg.Iracedforward.快速移动eg.Irushedforward.迅速移动rushdarteg.Idartedtowardsthefinishline.飞奔zoomeg.IzoomedpassedBill.快速移动whizeg.BarrycheeredasIwhizzedby.嗖嗖地快速移动Ø加速1.快速跑v._________________比赛中坚持和努力eg.Ichargedoff,headingstraightforthefinishline.猛冲eg.Izippedacrossthewoodedtrail.呼啸而过zipsprintshootchargeeg.Isprintedforthefinishingline.冲刺Itookadeepbreathandshotforward.冲Ø加速2.加速____________(vt)____________(短语)3.我全速往前冲。Idashedforward___________________.4.我以惊人的速度向终点冲去。Ichargedtowardsthefinishline________________.5.我以闪电般的速度向终点冲去。(比喻)Idartedtowardthefinishline___________________. I...________________(像箭般)I..._________________(像正在加速的火车般)6.Iranasfastasmylegscouldcarryme.__________________________________比赛中坚持和努力acceleratespeedup/pickupspeedattop/fullspeedatanamazingspeedinlightningspeedlikeanarrowlikeaspeedingtrain我飞快地跑着。比赛中坚持和努力Ø坚持与努力1.咬紧牙关___________________(短语)2.拼尽全力___________________(短语)3.鼓起勇气___________________(短语)4.不遗余力做__________________(短语)5.Mythroatwasdry,chestwasburning,andIwas____________(喘气)butIdidn'tstop.6.Tough__________________(气喘吁吁),Ipushedon.(非谓语)7.Thelastfewmileswasablur.But____________(倒装)最后几公里我感觉一片模糊，但我一直跑着。8.我深吸一口气，大喊一声，往前冲去。(三连动)I______________,_____________and_______________.puffingandpantingworkupmycourage/summonupmycourage/pluckupmycourage/musterupmycouragewithallone’smightgritone’steeth(-tt)sparenoefforttodosthonIrangaspingforbreathtookadeepbreathletoutashoutsprintedforward9.环境+身体的阻力也没使我放弃Thescorchingsun(炙热的太阳)_________myface,andbeadsofsweats__________myvision,Iwasnearly_______________,yetIploughedon.ploughon:tocontinuedoingsththatisdifficultorboring.坚持做某事；苦撑bakingblurredsuffocated比赛中坚持和努力比赛后的如释重负1.我如释重负地舒了一口气。_______________________________________Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverme.welledupinsideme._______________________________________（无灵主语）Iletoutadeepsigh./Iheavedasighofrelief./Ifeltrelievedandsighed.heave:tomakeasoundslowly缓慢发出(声音)比赛后的喜悦鼓掌v.__________n.__________拍肩膀_____________________(短语)Thewholeteamwas_____________(非常高兴),especiallyBill.Thewholeplace__________________.(爆发出掌声和欢呼声)Thefield_____________________________.(爆发出难以置信的欢呼)ThencameBill,whoslightlyquivered____________(高兴地),tookunsteadystepsforwardand______________________(热情地拥抱我)wildwithjoyburstoutclappingandcheeringexplodedwithyellsofdisbeliefinexcitementhuggedmewarmly/gavemeawarmhugpatone’sshoulder(-tt)clap(-pp)/applaudapplause(U)比赛后内心反思没有想到______________________________didIeverexpectmyselftocompletethewholeraceasarunner.要不是比尔我不可能完成两公里的绕湖赛并且找到我的勇气的。(虚拟语气)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________突然意识到_________________________thatthereisalwaysstrengthandconfidenceinsideus,andaslongaswepersevere,maintainhopeandpushforward,wecanfinallyreachthem.NeverinmywildestimaginationHadn’titbeenforBill/ButforBill,Iwouldn’thavemadethetwo-mileracearoundthelakeandfoundmyconfidence.Itsuddenlydawnedonme=itoccurredto/struck/hitsb=ItwasexactlyatthatmomentthatIcameintotheenlightenmentthat...用虚拟语气引出感悟：self-doubt学生作品1生动的小词engulf:tosurround/coversb/sthcompletely包围/吞没(+by/in)bracesbforsth:topreparesbforsthdifficult为困难做好准备OnepossibleversionInamoment,hewasupagainandrunning.Heyelledtome,“Watchtheroots!”Strugglingtokeepmylegsmoving,Ilookeddownandsawthetreeroot.Ipuffedoverit.Twohundredmetreslater,Iscrambledupthehill,readytoseetherestofthepackcrossingthefinishlinewhenIsawnotthefifteenguys,butthree.Thecrowdwasroaring,butIcouldhearBarryovertherestofthem,yelling“Run!”IthrewmyheadbackandtoldmylegstogoandIknewIwaswinning.Ididn'tknowwhenIcrossedthefinishline.BarrycaughtmeandIcollapsed.“Youflew!Youflew,man!Second!Youpassedtwoguys!”Therewasacrowdofkidsaroundme,pattingmeontheback,givingmehighfives.Ihadcomeinsecond.Billhadfinishedfirst.Withthatandallthehighfivesandthecheersoftheday,thebestprizethatIwalkedawaywith(轻易赢得)wasmyconfidence.ThatyearIdiscoveredIcoulddoalotofthingsifIputmyenergyintothem.Mikelickedthelastofthemintchocolatechipicecream.Itwasalmosttimetoleave.HejumpedintothecarwithhisparentsandheadedofftotheOlympic-sizedpoolforthebigswimmeet.Whenhisracecameup,Mikewasconfident.Hewasstrongandswift.Mikeclimbedoutthepool,smiling.Hehadjustwonfirstplace,makinghimthefastestboyinhisagegroup."Congratulations,son,"hisfathersaid.Hismomgavehimahug,eventhoughhewassoakingwet.Aweeklater,itwastimeforanotherswimmeet.Likebefore,Mikedecidedtoenjoyhisfavoriteicecreamflavor.Mikerememberedthatthelasttimehehadwonarace,healsoatemintchocolatechipicecreamfirst.Maybehe'dwinagain.He’stakenfirstplaceagaininhisrace.Mikewasfeelingprettygood.Asitturnedout,MikedecidedtohavesomemintchocolatechipIcecreambeforeeveryoneofthenextfewswimmeets.Hebegantothinkofitashisluckycharm.Afterseveralmonthsofplacinginthetoppositionsofeveryraceheswam,Mikewasfeelingunbeatable.Andhewouldn’tadmitit,butallthaticecreamwasaddingafewpoundstohisathleticswimmer'sbuild.Itdidn’ttakelongafterthatforMiketostartcominginsecondplace-andthenthird-andthenlastplaceinhisraces.Theluckymintchocolatechipicecreamhadlostitsmagic.Onthedayofhisnextswimmeet,hismothersatdownatthetablewithhim.“Mike,weallloveicecream,butit'snothealthyforyourbodytoeatsomuchofit.Maybeit'stimetoquitthesweettreatsforawhile,especiallybeforeyougoswimming.Mikeunwillinglyagreed.Hewenttotheswimmeet,anddidn’tperformwell.Hisfatherofferedtogorunningwithhimafewdaysaweektohelphimfeelbetterandstrengthenhismuscles.Theextraweightsoondisappeared,andMikefoundhimselfbreathingeasieratswimpractices.Paragraph1:Itwasthelastmeetoftheseason,andMikewasn'tsurewhattoexpect.________________________Paragraph2:Finallycametheendoftherace._______________________________________比赛话题练习2020暨阳联考梦想从脚下开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