高中英语Unit1LifestylesSectionⅦWriting__私人信件课件北师大版

Section Ⅶ　Writing——私人信件 Unit 1　Lifestyles * [写作技法指导] eq \o([文体指导]) 书信体写作需要注意三点，把握三步，掌握书信用语： 一、注意三点 1．开头、主体、结束三部分格式，所用语言符合书信体用语； 2．人称、时态使用正确； 3．要点齐全，句式多样，亮点丰富。 * 二、把握三步 写私人信件的 步骤 新产品开发流程的步骤课题研究的五个步骤成本核算步骤微型课题研究步骤数控铣床操作步骤 第一步： 1．格式要正确。 2．时态：一般现在时；人称：第一人称。 第二步： 整理内容要点：首先对来信进行简短评论，接着提出几条建议。 第三步： 连句成文：要选用恰当的词语及合适的句型，并注意使用过渡词。 * eq \o([亮点句式]) 1．开头语： (1)Thank you very much for your letter! (2)Glad to receive your letter of July 3rd. (3)I'm glad to receive your letter. (4)Thank you for your letter. (5)I'm writing to express... (6)I'm writing to ask about... 三、掌握书信用语 注意掌握一些常见的开头语及结尾用语。 * 2．正文中可能出现的表达语： (1)I suggest you do... (2)I think you should... (3)I'm sure you will... 3．结尾常用语： (1)I have to stop now. (2)I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. (3)Please give/send my regards/best wishes to... (4)Please remember me to... * [满分佳作构建] eq \o([写作任务]) 假如你是李华，近期，雾霾(dust­haze)天气频频发生，环境保护越来越受到人们的关注。作为一名青少年，我们如何尽自己的微薄之力来保护环境，请给报社写一封信。 要点： 1．环保受到人们更多的关注； 2．环境的现状； 3．应采取的 措施 《全国民用建筑工程设计技术措施》规划•建筑•景观全国民用建筑工程设计技术措施》规划•建筑•景观软件质量保证措施下载工地伤害及预防措施下载关于贯彻落实的具体措施 。 注意：词数 100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 词汇提示：过低碳生活 live a low­carbon life * eq \o([审 题 快递公司问题件快递公司问题件货款处理关于圆的周长面积重点题型关于解方程组的题及答案关于南海问题 谋篇]) 体裁 书信 时态 一般现在时为主 主题 环境保护 人称 第一人称为主 结构 首段：分析写信的原因；第二段：给出建议；第三段：阐述自己的观点。 * eq \o([遣词造句]) Ⅰ.对接单元词汇 1．urgent adj.　　　　 紧急的；急迫的 2．stress vt. 强调 3．as a result 结果 4．make a difference 起作用；产生重大影响 5．take measures 采取措施 * Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法 (一)完成句子 1．近来雾霾天气多次侵袭中国北部。 Recently，the dust­haze weather hit the north of China over and over again. 2．雾霾天气对人们的生活和健康产生重大影响。 The dust­haze weather had a great effect on people's life and health. 3．我认为急需我们采取措施保护环境。 I think it is urgent that we should take some measures to protect our environment. * 4．做我们能做的来影响我们周围的人步行或骑自行车上班或上学。 Do what we can to influence people around us to go to work or school on foot or by bike. 5．就我而言，我们采取的每一小步都很重要。 As far as I'm concerned，every small step we take really counts. * (二)句式升级 1．The development of industry and heavy traffic jams have caused air pollution.(改为强调句) It is the development of industry and heavy traffic jams that have caused air pollution. 2．That we should take some measures to protect our environment is urgent.(it作形式主语) It is urgent that we should take some measures to protect our environment. * 3．Do all that we can to influence people around us to go to work or school on foot or by bike.(用what改写句子) Do what we can to influence people around us to go to work or school on foot or by bike. * eq \o([妙笔成篇]) * 【参考范文】 Dear Editor， Recently，the dust­haze weather hit the north of China over and over again，which had a great effect on people's life and health.As a result，people are becoming more and more concerned about our environment. * As we all know，it's the development of industry and heavy traffic jams that have caused air pollution.So as a teenager，I think it is urgent that we should take some measures to protect our environment.On one hand，we'd better launch a campaign to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.Also we can hold a speech contest about protecting environment to stress the importance of living a low­carbon life.On the other hand，do what we can to influence people around us to go to work or school on foot or by bike. * As far as I'm concerned，every small step we take really counts.So please remember：together，individuals can make a difference. Yours， Li Hua * 谢谢观看 * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *