浙江省2020年1月高考英语读后续写范文及高分赏析

浙江省2020年1月高考英语读后续写范文及高分赏析版权所有仅供交流（浙北教学整理）浙江省2020年1月高考英语读后续写参考范文及高分赏析阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,”saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotionsgetthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.“Iguessthisisit.”hesaid.“I’llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit,Poppydidn’t.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried,“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”askedDad.“We’vetriedeverything.”“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”smiledMom.“Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.”1Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigbox.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwaggingeversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文1】Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Itliftedandlowereditsheadalternatelywithcaution,itseyesshiningoutofcuriosity.“Sayhellotoyournewfriend,Poppy.”Dadsaidinanencouragingvoice.Poppygavehimaseeminglyknowinglook,scratchingtheboxwithitsfrontpaw.Thelittlecreatureslowlystoodup,jumpedoutwithpains-takingeffortsandyappedaroundPoppy.Theysniffedeachotherlikeoldfriends.Theparentsgaspedinsurpriseevenwithkindofenvy.Theycannotimaginethetwodogsenjoyedeachother’scompanyinablinkofaneye.Afewweekslatertheboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Hecannotwaittotellhisparentsabouthisnewfriendsintheuniversity.Strangely,hewasn’tgreetedwithPoppy’seagerbarkingbutanunbelievablescene.Thetwodogsweretumblingaboutonthefloor.Thehousewaspulsatingwithlife.Parentscameup,hugginghisson.“Onehastogrowupinhisnewfriends’company.Weshouldgetusedtoit.”Momsaidhalf-jokingly,strokinghisthinbutdeterminedface.Itcan’tbesureenough.【参考范文2】Dadopenedthatboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Beingabitshockedatfirst,Poppytookabigstepback.However,thelovelycreaturestaredatherwithsuchcuriosityandinnocenteyes,whichmeltedthegrievedandsorrowfulheartoftheoldgirl.ThelittledogwassosweetthatPoppycouldn'thelpapproachinghimandkissinghimtenderly.Then,sheassistedhernewfriendingettingoutofthebox.Itwasnotforawhilethatthetwogetfamiliarwitheachother.WatchingPoppygettingridofthegloomystate,theboy'sparentssmiledrelievedly,puttingdowntheirhanginghearts.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Assoonasheopenedthedoor,outrushedexcitedPoppywhohadalreadysensedthespecialsmellofhim.Hugginghisbelovedfriend,theboyenjoyedthewarmthofalongabsence.Suddenly,astrangestickyfeelingfromhandalarmedhim.Lookingdown,hesurprisedlyfoundalovelydog.Asifwantingtointroducehernewcompanion,theoldgirlpushedthepuppytowardshermasterwithherpaws.Understandinginstantly,theboyembracedtwodogstightlyandshedhottears.Theburdenoftheuniversityoverwhelmedhim,thankfullyhehadthesweetfriendstosharehishappinessandsorrow.【参考范文3】Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Apparentlytakenbysurprise,Poppystaredattheadorablelittledogaffectionally.SeeingPoppy’seyesglitteringwithrapture,theworriedparentssighedwithrelief.Thelittledogwatchedaroundcuriouslyexploringeveryinchofthehousewithhissparkingeyes.Poppyseemedtobeoverwhelmedbypleasure,asshecouldn’thelplickingthelittledog.Eversincethen,theemptyhousehadnolongerbeenruledbydeadsilencebutfulfilledwithlaughter,theatmosphereofsheerdelightenvelopingthewholefamily.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Hewasquiteastonishedtobewarmlygreetedbytwolovelydogs.Sensinghisconfusion,theparentsexplainedwhathadhappenedtopoorPoppyandhowtheyfiguredoutsuchasplendidsolution.Agiantsmilebloomedonhisface,theboyhugginghisparentstightly.Withtheireyesblurring,thefamilychattedjoyfullyaboutwhattheyhadgonethroughduringthelastmonth.Ultimately,theboysighed,“It’ssonicetoseeyoubathinginloveandharmony.I’vebeensupportedbyyourlong-lastinglovewhichalwaysexertedadramaticpositiveimpactonmealongthelearningpath.”Justatthemoment,poppyandthelittledogbarked,asiftheyhadtakeninwhattheboysaid.【参考范文4】Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Spottingtheunacquaintedlittledog,Poppyseemedtobereluctanttoapproachitandcomebacktoitslittledamphouse.Weretheboyinhome,Poppywouldhavebeenmorecheerful,deeplysighedparents.ForthepurposeofarousingPoppy’sexhaustedemotionandinthemeantime,seekingadynamiclifestylewithouttheboy’sexistence,parentsintendedtoarrangeawanderingwithPoppyandthelittledog.However,itabsolutelymadenosensetopersuadePoppytogoout.Poppyscratchedthelittledogoccasionallyandbarkedatit.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.ImaginingthatparentsandPoppyhavewaitedforhimforawholeterm,itwasmorethanhecouldbeartoseethemagain.Asamatteroffact,theboynoticedwithdismaythathishomewasfullofanegativeatmosphere.Swiftlyknowingdisgustingeventsamongthem,theboygatheredthetwodogs.Withafamiliarfigurecatchinghiseyes,theboymercifullycalledthedog’sname,“I’m,here,Poppy.”Notuntiltheboygentlystrokedthedogsdidtheybecomeharmoniousonceagain.Atouchingspectacleslowlydriftedineveryone’sheart.【参考范文5】Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Obviously,thesmallonewasscaredofthenewsurroundings,tremblinghislittlebody.Afteramomentofsilence,Poppywalkedclosetothesmallone.Theywereallstaringattheireyes,seeingthemselvesinother’seyes.Gradually,theybecametheclosefriends.Parentssmiled,watchingeachother.However,theylookeddownuponPoppy’slovetotheboy.Finally,poppywasgoneforever.Thesmalldoggotverydown.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Heexcitedlyopenedthedoor,lookingforwardtogatheringwithhisfamily,onlytofindastrangedoginhishome.Hisfamilyhuggedforhisback.AsMomcouldreadboy’sheart,sheexplainedtohim,“Poppywasalwaysmissinghim,wepurchasedasmallonetoherforcompany.Butshediedseveralweeksago,leavinghernewfriendalone.”Theboywaslostinsilenceforawhile.Heregrettedthathehasnotbroughthisoldfriendwithhim.Theboyaskedifhecouldbringthesmalldogtotheuniversityandparentsallowed.Theboyliftedthelonelyboyup,saying“Smallguy,youwillnotbealoneagain,Ipromised.”Hearinghiswords,thelittledoggothappier.【参考范文6】Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Poppy’stailwaggedevenfaster.Meanwhile,awarmglowofsatisfactionappearedonPoppy’sface.Gradually,Poppycalmeddownandwatchedthelittledogwithsoft,asifshewereadedicatedmother.ThelittledogreturnedPoppy’slovewithaffectionofhisown,walkingslowlyandleaningonher.Theparentsweremovedtotearsbythesweetnessofthedogsmixed,withtheiryearningfortheirsons’return.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Hedartedinto6thehouselikeanarrowandshoutedinacheerfulvoice:“Mom,Dad,Poppy!”Naturally,hethrewhimselfintohisparents'armsandhuggedthemtightly.Withresoundingbark,Poppytwistedherbodydramatically,bouncinguptotheheightoftheboy’sknees,constantlylickinghishand.Strangeitmightseem,shesuddenlyturnedaroundandranaway.Theboycuriouslyfollowedandsawthesweetlittledogcurledinakennel.Asapreciousgift,thesweetwarmedthecocklesoftheirheart.7