parallelismnullParallelismParallelismCorrection Symbol: ══null1. We judge our friends both by what they say and actions.
2. I enjoy watering the grass and to work in the garden.
3. Whether drunk or when he was sober, he liked to pick a fight.
4.The boy denied that he had...
nullParallelismParallelismCorrection Symbol: ══null1. We judge our friends both by what they say and actions.
2. I enjoy watering the grass and to work in the garden.
3. Whether drunk or when he was sober, he liked to pick a fight.
4.The boy denied that he had entered the house and he had taken the money.
Revised:Revised:1. We judge our friends both by what they say and by their actions.
2. I enjoy watering the grass and working in the garden.
3. Whether drunk or sober, he liked to pick a fight.
4.The boy denied that he had entered the house and that he had taken the money.
Parallelism ParallelismIn grammar, parallelism is a balance of two or more similar words, phrases, or clauses.
The application of parallelism in sentence construction can sometimes improve writing style clearness and readability.
Parallelism may also be known as parallel structure or parallel construction.
Faulty Parallelism Faulty Parallelism Parallelism means that two or more similar ideas are expressed by similar grammatical forms. If these similar ideas are not expressed in identical grammatical forms, they are regarded as faulty parallelism.nullparallel sentence:
Knowing how to study and learning how to budget time are important for college students.
unparallel sentence:
Knowing how to study and to learn how to budget time are important for college students.
Types of Parallel Structures Types of Parallel Structures phrasesentence wordclause Types of Parallel Structures Types of Parallel Structures1. Parallel words
The fans clapped and screamed for more.
China, Egypt and India are my favorite traveling destinations.
His friend was witty, intelligent and experienced.
null2. Parallel Phrases
To walk in the rain and to smell bread baking are two of my greatest pleasure.
She has traveled by land, by sea, and by air.
Buying a car and beginning her job were the next steps in her life.null3. Parallel Clauses
What we say and what we do somehow seem out of point.
A father who spends time with his son and who thoughtfully answers his son's questions will be respected and loved.
null 4. Paralle Sentences
I came; I saw; I conquered.
We counted our losses;
we cared for our woundded;
and we advanced once again.
PracticePractice Faulty Parallelism:
1.Jane Eyre wants financial independence and to find love.
Revised:
Jane Eyre wants financial independence and love.
null2. The ideal student is attentive, studious, and asks questions.
Revised:
The ideal student is attentive , studious, and inquisitive.null 3. I love you as much as the mouse loved rice.Revised:
I love you as much as the mouse loves rice.null4.Doctors advise brushing your
teeth after every meal and to avoid sugar in your diet.
Revised:
Doctors advise brushing your teeth after every meal and avoiding sugar in your diet.
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