四级漫画作文写作

漫画作文写作描述漫画describethepicture2.解析意图（联系生活）interpretitsmeaning3.总结观点giveyouropinions谋篇Asisshown/depicted/portrayedinthepicture/cartoon,....Thepictureabovevividlydescribe....Thedrawingabovedoesdemonstratecertainthought-provokingsocialphenomenon.Whatdoestheauthorintendtoconveybydescribing...isthat....6、作文类型：（1）expositorywriting第一段：描述漫画+揭示漫画本质/内涵描述漫画套句：Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoongivenabove,…或Asisvividlyshown/depicted/portrayedinthepicture/cartoon,....或Aswecanseefromthepicture,…Thepictureabovevividlydescribe....揭示漫画本质/内涵套句Apparently,thepicturereflects/revealsthat……或Thecartooninformsusofthephenomenonthat……Thedrawingabovedoesdemonstratecertainthought-provokingsocialphenomenon.Whatdoestheauthorintendtoconveybydescribinginthecartoonisthat....第二段：出现的问题或现象的原因或分析利弊Webelievethatthreereasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.First,____.Second,____.Third,_____.或Whatcontributedtothesechanges?Ithinkthereasonsareasfollows.Tostartwith,④______.Secondly,⑤______.What’smore,⑥_______.Lastbutnotleast,⑦________.Reasonsfor……areinabundance.或Thereasonsforthisphenomenonareasfollows.Firstly,____.Secondly,____.Thirdly,_____.或Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor______.Ontheonehand,________.Ontheotherhand,_______isduetothefactthat________.第三段：总结句+提出措施/建议总结句Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat...或Inconclusion,itisimperativethat...或Withtheeffortsofallpartsconcerned,theproblemwillbesolvedthoroughly.或Takingalltheseintoaccount,we...或Whetheritisgoodornot/positiveornegative,onethingiscertain/clearthat...或Givenalltheabovefactors,itissafetoreachtheconclusionthat…或Takingintoaccountalltheabovefactors,itisreasonabletoreachtheconclusionthat…提出措施/建议Therefore,immediatemeasuresshouldbetakento….Tobeginwith,……..What’smore,…….Lastbutnotleast,……或Itishightimethatstrictmeasuresweretakentostop...或Itisnecessarythatstepsshouldbetakento...或Tosolvetheabove-mentionedproblem,wemustTheRapidTechnologicalDevelopmentInthepicture,ateachermakesanannouncementtoherstudentsthatduetorecenttechnologicaladvances,everythingshetaughtthemaboutcomputersisnolongervalid(有效的）.Fromthepicture,wecanseehowrapidtechnologicaldevelopmentis.Asweallknow,21stcenturyisconsideredasadigitalage.Therapiddevelopmentofhightechnologywillinevitablyleadtosignificantchangeineveryaspectofourlife.Foronething,ithasahugeimpactonourlifestyle.Forexample,yearsago,girlslikedgoingshoppingonfootandlookingforbeautifulclothesfromdoortodoor.Butnowadays,fewofthemgooutforshoppingbecausetheycanbuyalmosteverythingonline.Foranother,therapidtechnologicaldevelopmenthasresultedinthechangeofourthinking.Theideathatwecanrelyonwhatwehavelearntfortherestofourlivesistotallyoutdated.Personally,Ithinkweshouldneveroverlooktheimportanceoflearning.Onlythroughconstantlearningcanwekeepupwiththisrapiddevelopingera.Undoubtedly,thedrawinghassymbolicallyrevealedaseriousprobleminourdailylife,educationdoesn’tsimplymeanlearningtoobtaininformation.（主题句）Severalfactorscouldaccountforthephenomenon.（过渡句）找原因1+2教育不仅仅是信息的获得，还包括实验技能，性格的发展，和同辈的交流等。1.过度使用手机影响健康。（走路使用手机过马路危险，举例。或导致近视）2.降低人与人之间交流的能力。3.影响文化水平。（汉字不会写）作文第二段参考Thepurposeofthepictureistoremindusofthefactthatweshouldnotneglecttheconsequenceofoverusingmobilephone.Theinfluenceforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated。Tobeginwith,itleadstocountlesshealthproblemsincludingshortsight,especiallyforchildren.What’smore,theoverusingmobilephonecanchangeourlivespatternsandundercuttheabilityofcommunicationbetweenpeople.Lastbutnotleast,havingaccesstothemobilephoneinanearlyagecandirectlyaffectliterarycompetenceofChinesenewgeneration,whocan’tevenwriteacompletecompositionwithoutconsultingtheirphones.参考范文：TheOverusingofCellPhonesTheexaggeratingpicturetellsustheoverusingofthecellphoneinpeople’slife.Fromthecartoongivenabove,wecanobservethattherearemanypeoplecrossingthestreet.Insteadoflookingattheway,theyarestaringattheircellphonesandusingwalkingstickstosee.Itisobviousthattheyaresofascinatedwithcellphonesthattheyignoretheirsecurity.Thereisnodoubtthatthewidespreadcellphonesprovidegreatconvenience.However,overusingexertsanegativeimpactonourlife.Firstofall,overusingcellphoneswillmakepeoplenear-sightedsincefontsofwordsonthephonearesmall.What’smore,overusingcellphonescouldcauseaccidents.Itwasreportedthatagirlfellintoaseweranddrownedwhenreadingtextsonhercellphone.Lastbutnotleast,overusingcellphoneswillestrangeusfromourfamilymembersandfriends.Therefore,weshouldusecellphoneinaproperway.Cellphonesbringusconveniencebuttheyarepartofourlife,notthewholeofourlife.