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Part One Part One Writing 1、​ S V O Personal Life：family and friends; work and study; health and wealth. Social Environment：technology and economy; morality and education; country and environment. 1. Energy-saving, emission-reduction and low-carbon urbanization way will improve poeple’s health and the quality of their lives. 节能，减排和低碳城市化道路将改善个人健康与生活质量； 2. enhance the sense of social responsibility and the awareness of social morality增强社会责任感和社会道德意识； 3. promote communication and friendship between friends促进朋友之间的交流和友谊； 4. help the understanding of 帮助理解； 5. enrich ones knowledge and broaden our horizon丰富知识和开阔眼见； 6. boost the economic development 推进经济发展 7. raise the efficiency and quality 提高效率和质量 8. meet the growing consumer’s demands满足消费者的日益增长的需求 9. Satisfy the diverse tastes. 满足不同的口味 10. facilitate work and study方便工作和学习； 11. benefit from sth从…中受益； 12. be beneficial to the growth of the young对年轻人的成长有益； 13. teach us to see things in the right perspective 教会我们有正确的观点看待事物。 14. enable us to enjoy a better and life使我们能享受更好的生活； 15. provide us with more opportunities and convenience提供给我们更多机会和方便； 16. acquire work skills and experience 学习工作技能和经验； 17. take the advantage of/ make good use of 充分利用 18. build up one’s confidence in 建立对……的信心： 1. ruin ones health and spoil ones life 毁掉个人健康和生活 2. affect the ones emotion and attitude 影响个人的情感态度 3. be harmful to ones growth both physically and mentally. 对与个人成长从身体上和精神上都是有害的 4. do more harm than good to 弊大于利 5. endanger ones life and possession 危及个人生命财产 6. pose a threat to the social harmony 破坏了社会和谐 7. lead to the decline of social morality 导致社会道德的下降 8. contribute to 导致 9. be attributed to 归因于 10. destroy the forests and pollute the ocean 毁坏森林和污染海洋 11. wildlife and rare species are dying out rapidly 野生动物和稀有物种正在迅速灭绝 12. reduce greenhouse gas emissions and protect our environment 减少温室气体排放和保护我们的环境 13. slow down the development of economy 减缓经济发展 14. decrease ones income 减少个人收入 15. deteriorate：make sth go from bad to worse 使…形势恶化 16. aggravate the situation: 使形势恶化 17. prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做某事 18. cause serious concequence：导致严重后果 2、​ T D C 一、HEAD 1、 例文 Recently, free admission to museums has been brought to focus across the country. Indeed, along with the rapid development of the economy and culture of China in past decades, it is admitted beyond any question that museums has provided much convenience for the public. According to the recent survey, based on ten key universities on the Internet, an overwhelming majority of students express that they benefit much from it. As a result, people in growing number have come to realize its far-reaching influence on both science and history study in the days to come. 例文 Recently, white pollution can be seen virtually everywhere in our society, which has brought about serious consequence. As a matter of fact, alone with the rapid development of the industry and economy in the past decades, there is no denying that plastic pollution has never been more serious in the past than today. According to a recent survey, based on ten key universities on the Internet, an overwhelming majority of students express that our life is affected and ruined by the plastic bags. Consequently, there arises widespread concern regarding the issue, which poses a threat to both our health and environment. 2、 例文： It is of utmost importance that everyone need love and should give love to others. As the ancient Arab proverb goes, “Love makes the world go round.” It is the wisdom proved by our forefathers. Yet, it is still widely accepted as the motto among many people. Indeed, nothing carries more significance than love in prompting a harmonious society. 3、 例文： As is shown obviously in the graph, the number of fishes in the ocean decreased sharply in the past decades. To be specific/exact, the figure shows in the chart that there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. By contrast, it is quite evident that there was only one fish, with many fishing-boats in 1995. As a consequence, the trend has aroused widespread concern and posed a major threat to ocean resources. 4、 It was 8:05 in the morning of July 8th, 2002 that the accident took place at the intersection of [in the middle of the road near the gate of Beijing University of Science and technology. Indeed, it was so impressive that the mere thought of the experience would bring me back to the situation with vivid memory. /make me tremble all over. To everyone’s surprise/delight, the terrible accidents occurred unexpectedly as follows. That morning I was riding bicycle on the way to my class as it was raining with heavy fog. Arriving at the gate of the university, I noticed a very old lady crossing the road with a dog. Suddenly, a truck was racing at lighting/full speed toward her. Not until the truck knocked down the elder woman did the driver realize what had happened. Fortunately, the lady was just slightly injured with the help her dog which was killed. As soon as possible, I called the police and held up the traffic. It was not long before the ambulance car came and took the lady to the hospital. Finally, with everything settled，I left to school. 二、 Not only is honesty beneficial to others but also to oneself. Indeed, it is of such importance that honesty is the best policy. Firstly, no one could deny its significance in friendship. A case in point is that if you are candid to your friends, you will win the trust and respect from them. Secondly, it is always a must that a good student should work hard to get the scores he or she truly deserve. The point lies in the fact that if a student attempt to cheats in a examination, he will eventually regret and suffer the consequences. Still, honesty is vital for a doctor. Just as Professor Yudan once said that if he sell fake drug to patients in order to obtain more profits, he can kill someone while no one will realize it. To sum up, all the evidence illustrated the point that honesty is a must for everyone in our life. ★ Taking into consideration all the factors, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that… 2、 Recently, there arises a widespread controversy over the necessity of holding the Spring Festival Gala on CCTV. Indeed, opinions vary widely from person to person. Those who support the program advocate that it should undoubtedly be held every year. To begin with, they claim that it is one of the most significant and meaningful programs for Chinese people home and abroad to communicate and think of our relatives and country. In addition, they hold firmly that it is their indispensable entertainment and cheerful moment that they enjoy and spend with their family. Still, they assume that our Spring Festival was spoiled without it. Other authorities, however, maintain a different point of view that it should be canceled. Firstly, they assert with convincing evidence that it tedious and boring. Moreover, they insist that it is becoming less and less interesting. Last but not least, if no improvement about it is made immediately, it is bound to lose the interest of the viewers in the foreseeable future. In conclusion, their perspective is absolutely forceful and reasonable. ⑴ When it comes to weather…, opinions vary from person to person. ⑵ Opinions are divided widely among people over the issue of 主题词。 ⑶ There no consensus about whether…. 3、 What factors have possibly caused/contributed to the present phenomenon? Each aspect taken into account, the current situation can be attributed to several causes. Firstly, it is generally accepted that SVO. Secondly, the small but fundamental cause is that SVO. Above all, C has played an indispensable role in the past decades. Apart from these factors, there might be other factors that can be quoted, but the above-mentioned ones are sufficient in accounting for this trend. 三、Ending 1、 ① For my part, I am inclined to be in favor of the latter to some extent after careful consideration of each aspect involved with xxx. ② On the one hand, it is true that xxx has its disadvantages which should not be neglected; it is equally true that its overall benefits can definitely outweigh its drawbacks in the long run. ③ On the other hand, despite of the huge benefits from …, an increasing number of people come to realize that xxx has brought about serious problems. What is worse, some experts assume that we are on the verge of a widespread xxx in the foreseeable future. ④ To sum up, there are some truth in both sides to certain extent. When it comes to such an issue, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems and then make the right decision. 2、 Solutions to the present situation can be listed as follows. Firstly, it is suggested that drastic rules and regulations be set up to prohibit/ban the phenomenon from spreading. Secondly, a feasible measure is to launch a campaign to call for public awareness of its seriousness/significance. Last but not least, as a college student, I am determined to set an initiative example for others to follow. Only in this way can we solve this poblem successfully. Any country which turns a blind eye to it will have to suffer a greater loss. Overwhelming as it may seem, this current situation can be relieved if due attention is attached to it. With joint efforts and collaboration among citizens across the country, we have every reason to believe that its prospect will be promising and brilliant. 书信 1)建议信 1．建议报考的专业及理由 2．报考该专业的基本条件 3．应当如何备考 a letter in reply to a friend's inquiry about applying for admission to your college A Letter in Reply to a Friend December 27th, 2003 Dear Jim, In reply to your letter of July 8th, I am writing this letter to recommend you studying English. You can consider this major from two aspects. On the hand, English is widely used in our work and life. If you have a good command of English and you are abound to get good job. On the other hand, English is a must for admission to the international universities. So, it will do good to your further education when you go working and studying abroad. There are some requirements for the major. To begin with, you should have a vocabulary of 6000 basic words. What is more, you have to take part in national entrance examination. Last but not least, a good command of both oral and written English are indispensable. Each aspect considered, the following steps ensure you will accomplish you goal. First and utmost, it is of importance that you should enlarge your vocabulary though extensive reading. Secondly, the feasible method is study the examination with depth so that you can be familiar with your own problems. Still, the common but effective way is to read English in the morning everyday to enhance your sense of this language. Your sincerely, xxx 2）询问信： Dec.24th, 2005 Dear Sir or Madam <或者提纲规定Dear Prof. Smith>, I am a Chinese student who will graduate from college in the coming July and wishes to study for M.A degree at your University. My plan is to start my course next semester, and I would be grateful if you could supply me with the information regarding my application for the admission to your distinguished Nuclear Department. Firstly，what qualifications do I need to study as a graduate student at your college. As a senior majoring in Applied Physics，I am going to receive a bachelor’s degree from Tianjin University. I wonder if there are any further academic requirements such as TOEFL, GMAT, IELTS or GRE? Secondly, how much are the tuition fees for one year? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to inquire if there are some scholarships (Fellow ships) available for overseas students. Thirdly, what is the condition as regards accommodation? I would prefer a single room, which will ensure me a peaceful environment to concentrate on my study , but if single rooms are expensive, I would be willing to share. Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. Thank you so much for your time and consideration. I can be reached both through/ by telephone and E-mail, respectively 010-12345678 and liming@eyou.com. I am expecting you reply. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 3. 通知 An Announcement Jan. 9, 2010 International Conference on Globalization, from March 3th to 10th, will be held at Tsinghua University. We, the Postgraduates’ Association, are entitled to organize this conference. Thus, we are in need of volunteers to assist us in organizing the relevant affairs, including reception, distribution of documents, technical support, etc. Students who have previous experience as volunteers are preferred. Basic knowledge in computer, fluent oral English and an amicable personality are some of the qualities we desire. Volunteers shall be available for at least 3 days without absence during the conference. If you are interested and willing to have a whole new experience in this semester, please do not hesitate to send your resume toliming@hotmail.combefore Jan. 20th. Your applications are welcome。 Postgraduates’ Association