英语写作指导--Scratch-an-outline-and-first-draftPPT课件

What’dwedolastweek?Thefourtypesofprewritingwediscussedwere…FreewritingQuestioningMakingaListClustering(Diagramming)Andthefouraspectsofaperfectpieceofwritingare…UnitySupportCoherenceSentenceSkillsEVIDENCETHESISPROOF-READINGORGANIZATIONTheFinalPrewritingTechniqueScratchOutlineAScratchOutlineisagreatfollow-uptotheotherprewritingtechniquesItcanalsobeausefulmethodtoseeifmoreprewritingisnecessaryItoftenlookslikethis…MP-I.A.B.II.A.B.III.A.B.TheFinalPrewritingTechniqueScratchOutlineMP-I.A.B.II.A.B.III.A.B.MainpointofthewritingSupportfortheMainpointNowtopracticeournewmethod!First–We’regoingtousetheprewritingtechniqueMakingaListSoforthenext10minutesmakealistofallthethingsyoucanthinkof(nothingistoobigorsmall)relatedtothetopic:WomenaresuperiortomenMenaresuperiortowomenORScratchOutlineNowgothroughthelistthatyouhavemade.FindtheinformationthatseemslikeitcouldbethemainpointofyouressayAndTheinformationthatcouldbeyoursupportforthatmainpointGreat!ScratchOutlineNowmakeyouroutlineMP-I.A.B.II.A.B.III.A.B.WritingtheFirstDraftWhenwritingthefirstdraftyouwillbeabletoaddthedetailsyouleftoutduringprewriting/outliningIfyougetstuck…Aboutgrammar,punctuation,andspellingatthisstage…DOLATERYOU’LLHAVETIMELATERWritingtheFirstDraftWhatisimportantinthefirstdraft…EVIDENCETHESISLet’stryit!RevisingandEditingRevisingandediting,orPROOF-READING,canbedonemultipledifferentways:Ifyouhavemorethanadaytofinishyourpaper…Onatimedtest(TEM,CET,IELTS,GRE,TOEFL)…RevisingandEditingTherearethreestagestoProof-readingRevisingContentRevisingSentencesEditingRevisingContentTorevisethecontentofyourwritingyoumustensurethatyouhavesuccessfullyusedUnity,Support,andCoherenceTomakesurethatyouhaveyoumustaskyourselfthefollowingquestionsIsmywritingunified?Ismypointsupported?Ismywritingorganized?RevisingContentPASSYOURPAPERTOSOMEONEELSEEveryoneelsemusthavesomeoneelse’spaper(Youcan’thaveyourownpaper)Answerthefollowingquestionsontheotherperson’spaper:RevisingContentIsthispaperunifiedaroundonemainpoint?IsthereaclearlystatedThesis?DoeseveryparagraphsupportthethesisIsthemainpointsupported?Arethereatleastthreeseparatesupportingpointsforthethese?Doesthepaperhavespecificevidence(examples)foreachofthethreesupportingpoints?IsthereALOTofspecificevidenceineachsupportingpoint?Isthepaperorganized?Doesthepaperhaveaninterestingintroduction,asolidconclusion,andanaccuratetitleAretransitionwordsandphrasesused?UnderlinethethesisPutparentheses()AroundthethreeseparatesupportingpointsWriteanIbythefirstandlastwordoftheintro,a“C”bythefirstandlastoftheconclusion,anda“T”bythetitleRevisingSentencesTorevisethesentencesinthepaperaskyourself:Doesithaveaconsistentpointofview?Doesitusespecificwords?Doesituseactivewords?Doesitavoidslang,cliches,andwordiness?Arethesentencesvaried?Explanationofthequestions…EditingONEOFTHEMOSTIMPORTANTANDOFTENOVER-LOOKEDASPECTOFWRITINGAPAPER!!!AfterwritingthefirstdraftandrevisingyoubegineditingToomanystudentswasteHUGEamountsoftimeeditinginthemiddleofwritingthepaper.Generallyitisbetterto…JustWait!EditingWewilldiscussSentenceSkillsinmoredetaillaterinthesemester,butfornowcheckthepaperfor…SentenceFragmentsRun-onSentencesSubject-VerbAgreement