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雅思作文考官答案Thegraphillustrateschangesintheamountsofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.2.In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedperpersonperweek.Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarquantities(around150grams),whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed(justover50grams).3.However,duringthis25-yearperiodtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximately100gramsand55gramsrespectively.Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50grams,soalthoughitremainedtheleastpopularfood,consumptionlevelswerethemoststable.4.Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.By2004ithadsoaredtoalmost250gramsperpersonperweek.5.Overall,thegraphshowshowtheconsumptionofchickenincreaseddramaticallywhilethepopularityoftheseotherfoodsdecreasedovertheperiod.分析：第一段：1Thegraphillustrateschangesintheamountsofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.Thegraphillustrateschanges描述变化的常用句式。intheamountsof在---数量上。Consumed是过去分词作后置定语， 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示“被消费”。相当于whichwereconsumed的定语从句。第二段：1In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedperpersonperweek.Byfar是在那时，是常用的时间状语；themostpopular最高级，of后面加“总体”，最高级的整体。With后面加数字；consumed是过去分词做后置定语，相当于whichwereconsumed。2Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarquantities(around150grams),whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed(justover50grams).Insimilarquantities是“相似的数量”的意思，括弧里面加入具体的数字，是常用的数据引出方式。Muchless是“更少”，much修饰比较级less；(justover50grams)同样也是用括号引出数据。第三段：1However,duringthis25-yearperiodtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximately100gramsand55gramsrespectively.However连接前后两个段落，两个数据。第二段属于静止描述起始点的数值，接下来描述以后的数据变化，就可以用however来连接。Duringthis25-yearperiod在这25年的阶段里。Respectively是副词“分别地”的意思，通常用于修饰两个数据，分别是某两个数字。2Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50gramsAlso---but，描述相同的趋势但不同的变化程度。Lesssignificantly是与之前的变化相比较得出的结论，前面也是“巨大”，但这个变化速度不如之前“巨大”。第四段：1Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.Ontheotherhand另一方面。Showanupwardtrend，“展示了一个上升的趋势”，属于固定表达。Overtaking是doing现在分词作伴随状语的用法，它是定语从句变化而来，相当于whichovertakes，如果动词和关系代词的关系是主动，则把动词改成doing即可。Thatofbeef的that相当于consumption，因为与前面短语格式一模一样，所以为避免重复，用that代替。第五段：1Overall,thegraphshowshowtheconsumptionofchickenincreaseddramaticallywhilethepopularityoftheseotherfoodsdecreasedovertheperiod.Overall是“总体来说”的意思，通常是小作文的最后总阶段用词。thegraphshowshow改图展示了如何---，while连接两个趋势。这个重复描述图形的整体变化趋势的句子是常用的总阶段写法。1.Thedatashowsthedifferencesbetweendevelopingandindustrializedcountries’participationineducationandscience.2.Intermsofthenumberofyearsofschoolingreceived,weseethatthelengthoftimepeoplespendatschoolinindustrializedcountrieswasmuchgreaterat8.5yearsin1980,comparedto2.5yearsindevelopingcountries.Thegapwasincreasedfurtherin1900whenthefiguresroseto10.5yearsand3.5yearsrespectively.3.Wecanseeasimilarpatterninthesecondgraph,whichshowsthatthenumberofpeopleworkingasscientistsandtechniciansinindustrializedcountriesincreasedfrom55to85per1,000peoplebetween1980and1990,whilethenumberindevelopingcountrieswentfrom12to20.4.Finally,thefiguresforspendingonresearchanddevelopmentshowthatindustrializedcountriesmorethandoubledtheirspending,from$200bnto$420bn,whiledevelopingcountriesdecreasedtheirs,from$75bndownto$25bn.5.Overallwecanseethatnotonlyarethereverylargedifferencesbetweenthetwoeconomiesbutthattheregapsarewidening.分析第一段：1Thedatashowsthedifferencesbetweendevelopingandindustrializedcountries’participationineducationandscience.本句话依旧是对 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干进行改写。Data是“数据”，相当于figure，number，percentage，proportion等。第二段：1Intermsofthenumberofyearsofschoolingreceived,weseethatthelengthoftimepeoplespendatschoolinindustrializedcountrieswasmuchgreaterat8.5yearsin1980,comparedto2.5yearsindevelopingcountries.这一段讨论第一组图，intermsof“在---方面”，引出所要讨论的东西。Received是过去分词做后置定语，weseethat是常用句式。Comparedto这里等同于comparedwith，与---比起来，相当于than。2Thegapwasincreasedfurtherin1900whenthefiguresroseto10.5yearsand3.5yearsrespectively.本句讨论两个柱状之间的差距。When引导状语从句，respectively是“分别地”，引出两组数据。第三段：1Wecanseeasimilarpatterninthesecondgraph,whichshowsthatthenumberofpeopleworkingasscientistsandtechniciansinindustrializedcountriesincreasedfrom55to85per1,000peoplebetween1980and1990,whilethenumberindevelopingcountrieswentfrom12to20.Wecanseeasimilarpatterninthesecondgraph是常用句型，which引导定语从句，which代替上文的整个句子或pattern这个名词，working是现在分词做后置定语，相当于whowork。While连接两个变化趋势相反的句子，作对比。第五段：1Overallwecanseethatnotonlyarethereverylargedifferencesbetweenthetwoeconomiesbutthattheregapsarewidening.本句依然是对总体趋势进行 总结 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。That后面引导宾语从句。Notonly---butalso不但而且。但同时作为that的宾语从句，又因为notonly位于句首，而采用的倒装形式。Notonly部分倒装arethere，butalso部分不倒装。大作文素材CompetitionsItisaplainfactthatweareinaworldwherecompetitionisgoingoninallareasandatalllevels.Thisisexciting.Yet,ontheotherhand,competitionbreedsapragmaticattitude.Peoplechoosetolearnthingsthatareuseful,anddothingsthatareprofitable.Today’scollegeeducationisalsoaffectedbythisgeneralsenseofutilitarianism.Manycollegestudentschoosebusinesslaworcomputerprogrammingastheirmajorsconvincedthattheseprofessionsarewherethebigmoneyis.Itisnotunusualtoseecollegestudentstakingpart-timejobsasawarming-upfortherealbattle.IoftenseemyfriendstakingGREtests,workingonEnglishorcomputercertificatesandtakingthedrivinglessonstogetalicense.Well,Ihavenothingagainstbeingpractical.Asthecompetitioninthejobmarketgetsmoreandmoreintense,studentsdohavereasonstobepractical.However,weshouldneverforgetthatcollegeeducationismuchmorethanskilltraining.Justimagineifyourutilitarianismprevailsoncampus,livingnospaceforthecultivationofstudents'minds,orthenurturingoftheirsoul.Wewillseeuniversitieschurningoutwell-trainedyetspiritlessworkingmachines.Ifutilitarianismprevailsinsociety,wewillseepeopleboundbymind-forgedmedicalslostinthemoneymakingventures;wewillseehumilitylosingitsgraceanddignity.Andthatwouldbedisastrous.I'dliketothinkofsocietyasacarriageandpeople’spursuitforprofitorfameasthehorsethatpullsthecarriage.Yetwithoutthedrivertakingdirection,thecarriagewouldgostraightandmayevenendoutinaprecarioussituation.Acertificatemaygiveyousomeadvantage,butbroadhorizons,positiveattitudesandpersonalintegrities.Theseareassetsyoucannotacquirethroughanyquickfixedway.Intoday'sworld,wherethehighestlevelofcompetitionisnotofskillsorexpertise,butofvisionandstrategy,yourintellectualqualitylargelydetermineshowfaryoucangoinyourcareer.1.ThechartscomparethesourcesofelectricityinAustraliaandFranceintheyears1980and2000.Betweentheseyears,electricityproductionalmostdoubled,risingfrom100unitsto170inAustralia,andfrom90to180unitsinFrance.2.In1980Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource(50units)andtheremainderwasproducedfromnaturalgas,hydropower(eachproducing20units)andoil(whichproducedonly10units).By2000,coalhadbecomethefuelformorethan75%ofelectricityproducedandonlyhydrocontinuedtobeanothersignificantsourcesupplyingapproximately20%.3.Incontrast,Franceusedcoalasasourceforonly25unitsofelectricityin1980,whichwasmatchedbynaturalgas.Theremaining40unitswereproducedlargelyfromoilandnuclearpower,withhydrocontributingonly5units.Butby2000,nuclearpower,whichwasnotusedatallinAustralia,haddevelopedintothemainsource,producingalmost75%ofelectricity,at126units,whilecoalandoiltogetherproducedonly50units.Othersourceswerenolongersignificant.4.Overall,itisclearthatby2000thesetwocountriesreliedondifferentprincipalfuelsources:AustraliareliedoncoalandFranceonnuclearpower.分析：第一段：1ThechartscomparethesourcesofelectricityinAustraliaandFranceintheyears1980and2000Compare是“对比”，因为本文有两个国家四幅图，所以用compare就比较合适。这一句同样是对题干进行改写，交代一下这是什么图。2Betweentheseyears,electricityproductionalmostdoubled,risingfrom100unitsto170inAustralia,andfrom90to180unitsinFrance.Double是动词“翻倍”的意思，这里主要讨论数据的整体变化趋势，rising是rise的现在分词形式，相当于whichrises或whichrose。第二段：1In1980Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource(50units)andtheremainderwasproducedfromnaturalgas,hydropower(eachproducing20units)andoil(whichproducedonly10units).这个句子主要写澳大利亚1980年的最大能源比例，属于特殊值或特征值。Andtheremainder是“其余的电”，remainder相当于代词。这样通过一个句子将其他不重要或不是特征的数值全部说出。2By2000,coalhadbecomethefuelformorethan75%ofelectricityproducedandonlyhydrocontinuedtobeanothersignificantsourcesupplyingapproximately20%.By2000，到了200年。是引出数据对比。Morethan75%，多于75%。Andonlyhydro引出另外一个特殊值，即水能。第三段：1Incontrast,Franceusedcoalasasourceforonly25unitsofelectricityin1980,whichwasmatchedbynaturalgas.Incontrast，相反。引出法国情况，作为一种对比。Which引导定语从句，whichwasmatchedby连接另外一个成分coal，两者数量相等。用match这个动词。2Theremaining40unitswereproducedlargelyfromoilandnuclearpower,withhydrocontributingonly5units.Beproducedby被---生产的。With引出复合结构。Withshtdoing。Contribute是“贡献”。因为hydro与contribute是主动关系，所以用Contributing，如果逻辑关系式被动，就用contributed。3Butby2000,nuclearpower,whichwasnotusedatallinAustralia,haddevelopedintothemainsource,producingalmost75%ofelectricity,at126units,whilecoalandoiltogetherproducedonly50units.But引出两个不同情况的对比，by2000引出时间。Which引出定语从句。Notatall，根本不。Haddeveloped是主语nuclearpower的谓语动词。Producing是现在分词做伴随状语，相当于定语从句whichproduces。While是连词“而”，连接另外两个对比的东西。Only起强调作用，表示“少”。上升：increase,rise, v:grow,n:growth.Ascend,levelup  Increaseto到    increaseby了下降：decrease,drop,fall,decline,leveldown波动：goupanddown,riseandfall保持平稳：remainstable(remainconstant)明显的：dramatic–dramatically     V+adv  adj+n剧烈的：Sharp  -sharply变化快的Steep  -steeplyRapid  -rapidly变化慢的slight–slightly微弱的：modest-modestly不明显：slow-  slowlyMarginal- marginallySteady - steadily到达顶峰：Reachapeak,top到达低估（最小值）ReachthelowestpointPs:generally,bodytemperaturedropstothelowestpointbetween4to6A.M.whenthebodyismostatrest.大约：approximately nearly about almostLessthan=justunder   morethan=justover逻辑关系词：递进（从缓慢到剧烈）Furthermore moreover inaddition  whatismore对比（剧烈上升-剧烈下降）Onthecontrary  incomparison conversely转折（缓慢上-下）Nevertheless   nonetheless    however yet but相似Similarly  inthemeantime举例子Tobespecific   suchas  forexample特别是：Especially  particularly分别：respectively  individually  separately出现：appear  cometo liein平均：onaverage结尾：Tosumup,wehavegainedsomeinformationofsth.动态的到达Startat   amountto  arriveat  achieve  approach静态的占据makeup takeup  accountfor  composeofcompriseof   consistof  constituteoftheprofitofcompanyAdeclinedslowly1:whichamountedtoXX in1995.2:amountingtoXXin1995.今天推送的是第四篇【表格图】Thetakebelowgivesinformationabouttheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.Thetableshowsthedetailedinformationregardingtheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities,namely,London,Paris,Tokyo,WashingtonDC,KyotoandLosAngeles.Londonhastheoldestundergroundrailwaysystemamongthesixcitieswhichwasopenedin1863.AndParisisthesecondoldest,anditwasopenedin1900.Thiswasthenfollowedbyotherfourcities,namely,Tokyo,WashingtonDCandKyotowiththeopeningdateof1927,1976,and1981respectively.AsforLosAngeles,itisthelastoneinthistabletohaveitsownundergroundrailwaysystem(openedin2001).Intermsofthesizeoftherailwaysystem,Londonenjoysthelargestundergroundrailwaysystems,with394kilometresofrouteintotal,whichisnearlytwiceaslargeasthatinParis(199kilometres).Kyoto,incontrast,hasthesmallestsystem,foritonlyhas11kilometresofroute,whichisnearly1/36oftherouteofLondon.Theotherthreecities(Tokyo,WashingtonDC,andLosAngeles)have155,126and28kilometresrespectivelyInterestingly,Tokyo,whichonlyhas155kilometresofroute,enjoysthegreatestnumberofpassengersperyear,at1927millionpassengers.ThesysteminParishasthesecondgreatestnumberofpassengers,at1191millionspassengersperyear.Thesmallestundergroundrailwaysystem,Kyoto,servesthesmallestnumber(only45people).Inconclusion,theundergroundrailwaysystemsindifferentcitiesvaryalotintheopeningdate,thesizeaswellasthenumberofpassengersservedperyear.第五篇【地图】Thefollowingtwomapsshowthedevelopmentofacoastalcityfrom1950to2007.Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Thetwomapsillustratethechangesofacoastalcitybetween1950and2007.Wecanseeclearlythatthecitybecamemoreandmoremodern.1n1950,thecitywaslikeasmallvillage,withvastgrasslandareasalloverthecity.Therewasaseainthenorthofthiscity,withaparktothewest.Infrontofthepark,therewasabigbuildingareawherethingswereunderconstruction.Bythattime,threelargeareaswereallgrasslands,withacrossroaddividingthem.However,whenitcomesto2007,thingsexperiencedsignificantchanges.Anewapartmenthadbeenbuiltwheretheparkwas,andtheoriginalbuildingareaswereconvertedintoindustrybuildingssuchasparks,parkinglotsandswimmingpools.Themostobviouschangeswerethattheformergrasslandsdisappeared,becomingcinemasinthesouthwest,shopsinthesoutheast,andhousesinthenortheast.Onthenorthside,althoughtheseawasstillthere,awharfwasbuiltinitsopeoplecouldtravelmoreeasilybysea.Finally,althoughtherewasstillacrossroadinthecity,thehorizontalroadwasmovedtothesouth.Bydoingso,industrybuildingsandhousescouldbeleftmoreplacestodevelop.Anyway,thecityhadexperiencedtremendouschangesthroughoutthe57-yearperiod.【 流程 快递问题件怎么处理流程河南自建厂房流程下载关于规范招聘需求审批流程制作流程表下载邮件下载流程设计 图】Thefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthesilkworm.Firstofall,eggsareproducedbythemothandittakestendaysforeacheggtobecomeasilkwormlarvathatfeedsonmulberryleaves.Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilkthreadarounditself.Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemergefromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsagain.Thecocoonsaretherawmaterialusedfortheproductionofsilkcloth.Onceselected,theyareboiledinwaterandthethreadscanbeseparatedintheunwindingstage.Eachthreadisbetween300and900metreslong,whichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavingstage.Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess.分析第一段：1Thefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthesilkworm.本句话的作用是 说明 关于失联党员情况说明岗位说明总经理岗位说明书会计岗位说明书行政主管岗位说明书 这个流程图分为几个步骤。总起全文。第二段：流程图并无习惯性或常用性表达。一定要看好事物发展过程，然后一个阶段一个阶段逐步去描述。第三段：1Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess.这句话的作用是再次对这个流程图进行简要概括，“通过一个简单的过程就能完成”