2020年7月浙江卷（拍照北极熊遇险）读后续写高分作文4则

读后续写高分作文4则—2022届高考英语备考写作专练Onefall,mywife Elli andIhadasinglegoal:to photograph polarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcamp outside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.    Taking pictures ofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbe photographedfroma safe distance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethrougha camera witha telephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.   AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelled ourgarlic bread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwire fence.Hepulledandbit thewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts. Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfired blankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloud noises likethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子). Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutes beforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.  ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.Thecampmanager suggestedIusepepper spray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes.butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvited guestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebear ran tothelaketo washhiseyes.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1. Afewminuteslater，thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Para2. Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.范文1Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.  Inahuff,thebearpoundedatthe fence violently.Frozenwithterror,Icouldmakenoactionbut trembledhelplessly withtearsrollingdownmyface.Atthatverymoment, Elli rushed outofthecabinwithabagofgarlic bread embracedinherarms.BeforeIrealized,she had castthebagtoalonghaul,whicheventuallylandedinabush.Atthissight,thebear turnedaround fromthefenceand headed tantivy forthebush.Havingfinishedthebread,thebearpacedtowardsourcampagain,likelytogiveourfenceanother fierceimpact.Nothingleft, wecouldbutawaitourdoom,withfearengulfingbothofus.Paragraph2：Atthatmoment,thehelicopterarrived. Twowildlifecontrolworkerslookedoutfromtheaircraftwearingcounter-assaultoverallsandtheyfiredawarningshottodeterthebear.Astonishedbythe noises ofthehelicopterandtheshot,thebearwasstartledtoleapintothebushand galloped towardtheforestlikeashot.Immediately,I forced myselftocalmdownandmanagedtophotosome pictures beforethebeardisappearedintotheforest.Theworkersleftuswithsomepine-baseddetergent,foritssmellissupposedtodeterbears.Whatathrillingexperience!范文2 Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp. Withgreaterrage,thebearroaredandtriedto teardown the fence withallhismight.I gatheredupmycourage andtriedtosprayhimagain.Unfortunately,hemanagedtoescapeandmyheartfrozeinmychest.Atthismoment, Elli cameupwithacrazyideaandthrewourgarlic bread atthebear.Tomygreatsurprise, thebearstoppedandboweddowntoeatthebread.Seeingthis,allofusletoutasighofrelief.Beforelonghowever,thehungrybearfinishedeatingandpushedthefenceagain.Thefencewasabouttofalldown!Paragraph2：Atthatverymomentthehelicopterarrived. Shockedbythe noises, thebearstoppedandturnedaround.Seeingthepeopleequippedwithguns,heranawayanddisappearedinthewoodsasifheknewwhotheywerewefinallygotourbreathandElliandIembracedtightly withstillracinghearts.Afterwecalmeddown,thelocalstoldusthatthebearswerelosingtheirhomesandfoodbecauseofhumanactivitiesandclimatechanges.Onthewaybackhome, Icheckedtheprecious pictures inthe camera,lostinthought.Thisexperiencewouldberemembered,forever.  范文3Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp. Roarsandscreams piercedthesilence with needle-likeshrillness.The noises turned Elli andI palewithhorror.Ifearedthatthegiantwoulddestroyourwhole fence.Heroaredrepeatedly, shattering whatwasleftofthesilence.Elliseizedthisopportunitytotakesome pictures ofthebear.Theanimal’snoises echoed allaroundus.We betrayed ourfeelingsby huddling together,shiveringwithfear.Afterthoroughly scrutinizing thearea,he trotted forwardafewsteps.Paragraph2：Atthatverymomentthehelicopterarrived. Myheart leapedwithjoy asIknewwewere likelytobesaved.Elli usedpepper spray againtobuyusenoughtime.Butthistimethebearbecamemorealert.He regarded uswith themercilessnecessityofhunger,sowethrowallthefoodwehave.Hethenturnedawayandstarted devouring.Aswewereclimbingtheropeladder,Elliprayedlikeathousandtimestoshowthankfulnessofbeing safe andsound.范文4Paragraph1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp. Hecouldnot resistthetemptationof thebread.Thepepper spray hadslowedthebearbutwasn’tenoughto stopthebeast.Onthecontrary,it provoked thebearandmadehimeven morefurious.MuchasIwantedto photograph theapproachingbear,my survivalinstinct overtookmydesiretocapturetheperfectphoto.Inamomentofpanic, Elli andIdecidedtogivehimwhathewanted—thegarlic bread.While itwas looming like adarkcloud,wethrewthebreadatthebearalittlebitatatimeuntilithad run out.Paragraph2：Atthatverymomentthehelicopterarrived. Butthe irritated bearhasalreadystartedto whack the fence.Ifearedthatthebearwouldteardownthefenceatanyminute.Luckily,therangerscametoourrescue.Theymanagedtocalmthebeardownanddistracthimwithsomesortof acoustics.Eventhoughmyheartwasstill thumping wildlyinsidemychest,I snatched my camera andsnappedonelastshotofthebear,aphotothatIhadalwayslongedtocapture.Thoughriskingmylife,I’vegotthebestpictureeverandit’sallworthit.