高考读后续写 a vacation with my mother课件(共20张PPT)

AVacationwithMyMotherContinuationwriting读后续写:提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）新高考考试说明ReadWrite＋ReadforbasicinformationAVacationwithMyMotherwhowhenwherewhyhowDadMombrothermewhenIwaselevendrivefromColoradotoNorthDakotatovisitgrandparentsandseethesights Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother--loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.waseleventellsalotabouther.para1Readforplotlovingsweetabsent-mindedforgetulOnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIpara2para3para4strangetrip?Readforplotabsent-mindedpara2para3alittlenervous;playlookout;terriblepicturesinmindpara4gotagreatideabecamenervous;turneddownshethinkseveryoneisasniceassheis.forgot...forgetfulsweet/lovingshowfeelingsactionsmentalactivitieswords/commentsdirectdescriptionsidedescriptionReadfortone(情感基调) Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother--loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.Itisastrangetripfullofsometing________withmy_________________________mother.interesting/surprising/amusingloving,sweetandforgetfulPara1: Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.□Absent-minded□forgetful□trip□David□camping□tent□Mom□Dad□trouble□nicetone:interesting/surprising/amusingforgetfulsweetlovingforgetthetentinthehotelforgetsomecampingequipmentinvitedotherstojointhecampingandhadagoodtimemadedeliciousfoodandtookgoodcareofDavidandIwhenwhatReadforclues(线索)□Absent-minded□forgetful□trip□David□camping□tent□Mom□Dad□trouble□nicetone:interesting/surprising/amusinghighmountains,grandvalley,grassland,runningrivers,groupsofsheepandcattles,specularsunriseandsettingsun,bluesky,singingofbirds,moonlight.Para2: Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.avtivitiesWhatdidtheytake?motherbooks,gamesreadstoriestoDavidandI(loving)grandparents'home?sharetheinterestingstoriesaboutmother'sforgetfulnesswherewhatReadforclues(线索)Iwonderifit'sbecauseIhaven'tbeenabletobeoutsideforsolongthatI'vegrownsocrazyabouteverythingtodowithnature.Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound（M1U1）...Inthevalleyscolourfulbutterfliesflewaroundusandwesawmanyyaksandsheepeatinggreengrass.Atmidnighttheskybecameclearerandthestarsgrewbrighter.Therewasalmostnowind-onlytheflamesofourfireforcompany.AsIlaybeneaththestarsIthoughtabouthowfarwehadalreadytravelled.(M1U3)Ourstoryshouldbeconsistent(一致连贯)withtoneplotopeningsentencesatleast5underlinedwordsRequirementsPara1: Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.□Absent-minded□forgetful□trip□David□camping□tent□Mom□Dad□trouble□nicetone:interesting/surprising/amusingplot:forgetful?sweet?loving?workingroupsof4andfinishthestoryWriteyourstoryshareyourstoryPara1: Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwebroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriverthroughoutthetown.Theviewsthereweresurpassinglybeautiful--thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,thecleanwater.Wesatonthegrass,hookedbythesplendidnature.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupourtent,itsuddenlyhithimthatMomagain,hadleftitcompletely,aswellasthecampingequipmentinthehotel.Speechlessly,Dadhadtogobacktofetchthemtocontinueourcamping.Possibleversion1:Para2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild.Callingout David andI,shegotoffthe car,laughedanddancedaround.Sheheldourhandsinherhands,leadingusaroundthebigcity,thesmalltownandthe nice nature.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,shewouldhugusandkissusonourfaces.Howsweetshewas!Absent-mindedandforgetfulasshewas,sheneverforgottoexpressherlovetous. Possibleversion1:Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatwemustmakefulluseofitsincewehadbroughtit.DavidandIlookedatDad,hopinghecouldstophercrazyidea.Toourgreatdisappointment,heagreed.Wespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandsetupourtentbeforethenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtmomcouldbewiseasIadmiredourstunningtent.“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”whatamisconception.Despitetheacheofmyneck,wehadsomegreatnights.Possibleversion2:Para2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway. Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thegroupofsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery,wealsomanagedtoconsidermom'sscandalsasakindoffun.IreallylovemyMom. Toourrelief,wearrivedatgrandparents'placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.Itwassofortunatetoseemyfriendsagain. Possibleversion2:stepstocontinueastoryStep1:Readforthebasicinformation(when,where,who,what,how,why)Step2:ReadfortheplotStep3:ReadfortoneStep4:Readforclues(theunderlinedwords,twogivensentences)Step5:ContinuethestoryStep6:Polishyourwriting(refertotheCriteriaforAssessment)第五档（21-25分）1.与所给短文融合度高，与所提供的各段落开头衔接合理。2.内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。3.所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意思表达。4.有效地使用了词语间的连接成分，所续写短文结构紧凑。ScoringstandardsContinuationwriting1.Ifpossible,makefulluseofthetitletogetthegeneralideaofthepassage.2.Keepthestorysimple.Donotaddextracharactersorthingsandovercomplicateit.3.BeingCreativeisgoodbutdonotoverdoit.Justmakeeverythinggonaturally.4.Payattentiontoyourhandwriting.TipsHomework1.Finishthesecondpartofthestoryafterclass.2.Polishyourwriting从这张起是另外一个幻灯片。但是没有找到下载途径。