英语作文中的高级词汇如何使用

厂—————～—————I、．，、，、、，、．，、，、．，、、，、、，、—，、．，、—，、—，、一⋯^^^．一⋯fOseolaMcCarty，thoughlivingasimpleandthriftylife，donatesallhersavingstoauniversity,whichhas(arousedpublicconcernandbroughtherwidespreadsociaIrecognition．WhatOseolaMcCartyhasdonewelIprovesher(3)virtuousandwarm-hearted．Beinghelpfultothecollegestudentswithfinancialdificulties，shehasmadeherselfagoodexampleto④motivateotherpeopletoparticipateinthesimilaractivities．⑧Frommyperspective，thelady’Sgenerosityisnotonlyameansofassistancetothosestudentsshortofmoney．⑥Undoubtedly，itwill⑦strengthentheirfaithinfuturelife，leadingthemtoworkharderandofferhelptowhoeverneedshelpinthefuture．Giventhechoice，1wouldmakeadonationtothosewhoaredisabled．Foronething，they~deserveacertainstandardofliving．Foranothe~the⑨essenceforthesocietytohelpthe36NewUniversityEntranceExaminationdisadvantagedgroup，includingthedisabled，canneverbe⑩overemphasized．Onlywheneveryonesharesthewilltohelpothers，necessaryandimmediatehelpwillmakeagreatdifferencetoourworld．本篇文章介绍了美国75岁的OseolaMcCarty用一辈子积攒下来的钱捐赠给大学生以及以后如何做的决心。文章精彩之处在于高级词汇层出不穷，妙语连珠，非常具有可读眭。①liveasimpleandthriftylife中I~thrifty(节约的)。②arousedpublicconcern中的arouse(引起)。③virtuousandwarm—hearted中1~gvirtuous(有良心的)。④motivateotherpeopletoparticipate中I~motivate(激发)。⑤Frommyperspective短语表示“依我看来”。⑥Undoubtedly“毫不怀疑”。⑦strengthentheirfaith中l~gstrengthen“强化”。⑧deserveacertainstandardofliving中~deserve(值得)。~essenceforthesociety中的essence(精华，本质)。⑩overemphasized表示(过分强调)。以上列举的从名词、动词、形容词、副词到固定短语，都使用了高级词汇和短语。其实本段文章的高级词汇还远非这10个。在写作中，很多学生难以理解什么叫“高级词汇”。有些学生认为“高级词汇”就是“偏”、“生”、“怪”、“难”。其实这里所说的高级词汇或短语应该是比较晚学的、相对复杂的词汇、词组或习语等，但更强调的是运用要当、地道。如：1．ThesnowstormshappenedinmostDartsofChinabeforetheSpringFestiva1．ThesnowstormsblanketedmostDartsofChinabeforetheSpringFestiva1．(第二句使用7blanket，由名词“地毯”转化成动词“席卷”，使此句更加形象)2．Heisveryclever／bright／wise／smart／intelligent／cute．(后三个词汇显得更“洋味”十足)3．Englishisveryimportantinoureverydaylife．Englishplaysanimpo~antpart／roleinoureverydaylife．(playa／an⋯part／role这一习语，此句更地道)4．GIobalwarmingwillsurelyafe~theeach’Sclimate，plantsandanimals．GIobalwarmingwillsurelyhasabadefect／influenceontheearth’Sclimateaswellasplantsandanimals．(用短语动词更加生动)一、能点睛的小词在书面表达中巧用一些小词，常常会起到四两拨千斤的作用。1．EnglishisamustforUS．(高级)ItisimportantforUStomasterEnglish．(一般)二、能亮化句子的动词1．Ontheothersidestandsanother6-storeyedbuilding--ourlibrary．(高级)Ontheothersideliesanother6-storeyedbuilding---ourlibrary．(一般)2．UniversitiesinBeijingwillaltertheirwinterandsummervacationschedulesin2008toNewUniversityEntranceExamination37maketimeforvolunteertraining．(高级)UniversitiesinBeijingwillchangetheirwinterandsummervacationschedulesin2008forvolunteertraining．(一般)三、锦上添花的剐词、形容词和短语巧用形容词能使句子更好地反映作者丰富的感情，从而使句子更具感染力。1．Theyprovidedthebirdwithenoughfoodandwater．Whatpuzzledhimwasthatthebirdwasnothappyatal1．Thenextmorningonhiswayhome，hesawsomebirdsflyinginthesky，whichremindedhimofthelonelybirdinthecage．Hesuddenlyrealizedwhythebirdwasunhappy．上面一段中使用了四个形容词enough，happy，lonely，unhappy，生动地描绘了没有自由的鸟儿的感受，打动了作者，更打动了我们这些读者。2．Becausehehelpedme，ImadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudy．Thankstohishelp，ImadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudy．(介词短语thanksto，高级)3．LiuXiangtriedtoacceptchallenges，prettytired，though．(高级)LiuXiangtriedtoacceptchallengesthoughhewasverytired．(一般)四、其他类为了表达的需要，避免重复使用替代词，或使用同位语及相应的标点符号也会使句型升级。1．Sothemissingmoneymustbeintheotherjacket，theoneyouwerewearingyesterday．2．1wanttohaveapenfriend．hopefullyagirlinherearlytwenties．3．Wearethankfultoourteachersandrespectourteachers．1reallywanttosay，“ItisverykindofyOu—Ourteachers．” 分析 定性数据统计分析pdf销售业绩分析模板建筑结构震害分析销售进度分析表京东商城竞争战略分析 以上三句，1和2句使用了替代和同位语成分，使句子言简意赅，简单明了。而3句使用了破折号，使句子更地道、 规范 编程规范下载gsp规范下载钢格栅规范下载警徽规范下载建设厅规范下载 。1。观察下面每组句子的结构及含义，选出更地道、更高级的表达。1．A．Suddenly,hethoughtofagoodidea．B．Inaflash．afreshideaoccurredtohim．