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2009上海各区高考英语二模写作 题 快递公司问题件快递公司问题件货款处理关于圆的周长面积重点题型关于解方程组的题及答案关于南海问题 一(作文题目 II. Guided Writing (宝山) Directions: Write an English composition in 120,150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 请谈谈高考之后你最想做的事。 文中必须包括以下 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 : 1(简要介绍高考后你最想做的一两件事。 2(提出你的理由或想法。 ?. Guided Writing 25%(奉贤) Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 有一批外国中学生正好在清明节期间到你校参观访问。你被要求去接待这批中学生。你被应邀要向 他们介绍中国的清明节文化。请你现在写好一篇英语讲稿。内容必须包括清明节的传统文化和清明 节的传统美食等。 讲稿的开头和结尾已经为你写好。 Boys and Girls, Today I feel great honor to be invited to introduce a Chinese holiday to you… ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s the general introduction of Qing Ming Festival. If you have any questions, you are free to ask. Thank you very much. (Reference answer) Boys and Girls, Today I feel it great honor to be invited to introduce a Chinese holiday to you. Since you happened to come to China during the Qing Ming festival, I’d like to tell you something about this traditional holiday. th“Qing Ming” which means clear and bright in Chinese, falls on April 5 every year. It is both the fifth term in the traditional lunar calendar and a festival to hold memorial ceremony for the dead. It is a time to express one's grief for his lost relatives. People often go to sweep and weed graves with whole family and take a walk in the countryside as well. In Tang Dynasty, the habit of taking a walk on this day was developed. At this time, spring returns and dominates the earth again. The feel of growing life is in the air. Trees turn green and buds burst, adding vigor and vitality to the surroundings. This custom can be traced back to over one thousand years ago. In that morning people eat “qing tuan” (a kind of rice ball colored green.) which is very delicious. That’s the general introduction of Qing Ming Festival. If you have any questions, you are free to ask.. Thank you very much. II. Guided Writing (黄浦) Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是Mary, 你与几位同窗约定，高考后去外地旅游。但你的父母以“不安全”为由阻止你。写 1 一封信给学校的心理老师Miss Li，告诉她事情的原委，表明你的观点，并向她寻求解决问题的方法 (文中请不要出现真实的校名、人名)。 II. Guided Writing (金山) Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. Who is the hero of 2008? 2008年我们经历了无数的欢乐与忧伤，它又给你留下了哪些回忆,请 评选出你心目中的2008年度人物。 你的文章必须包括以下内容: ? 简要描述你所选人物的事例 ? 阐述你为何选他(他们)的具体理由 II. Guided Writing (卢湾) Directions: Write an English composition in 120,150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你班将组织毕业前的最后一次主题班会，主题为“老师，我想对你说„„”，在此次班会上你想说 些什么，并陈述你的理由。 II. Guided Writing (南汇) Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 奥运会后，一些奥运冠军纷纷进入各大名校学习，有人觉得他们为国家做出了巨大的贡献，理 应被破格录取(admitted to universities as exceptions);而也有人觉得这对于其他高考学子不公平。 你是否支持奥运冠军被大学破格录取,为什么, (Reference answer) With more and more Olympic champions entering universities to study, many people think that it seems unfair that they are admitted to universities as exceptions. But I hold the different opinion. First, Olympic champions are special talents, who contributed so much to our country, so their being admitted exceptionally into universities is reasonable. What’s more, if more champions are admitted to more key universities, it will bring benefits in many aspects for them. They will improve their education levels or expand their choices after retirement. This may also help develop sports and related industries. In addition, considering the positive potential effects of the champions on the campus, the level of a university will by no means decrease. The other students won’t be affected as many people may fear. Instead, others can learn a lot from these champions, such as positive attitudes and devoted spirits. As is mentioned above, I don’t think it may be a problem for Olympic champions to enter key universities as exceptions. ?.Guided writing (25分)(浦东) Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校近期将开设“学生理财入门”(Money Management ABC)选修课，你会参加吗,请作出选择并 陈述理由。 II. Guided Writing (25分)( 普陀) Direction: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 根据提示～写一篇120-150词的英语作文。(不必逐句翻译, 为地球熄灯一小时 提示:世界自然基金会发起的“地球时间”环保活动,29日在全球371座城镇当地时间晚8点熄灯一 小时～以减少能源耗费。引起人们对气候变化的警惕。各地竞相以熄灯一小时的方式来倡导节 2 能环保理念。但也有人说～熄灯一小时之后～人们会不会恢复常态。就此话题发表你的看法。 (Reference answer) Initiated in Australia in 2007, Earth Hour is a time zone-by-time zone plan in which people around the world are encouraged to switch off their lights for 60 minutes on the last Saturday night of March to show their concern about global warming and climate change. The campaign aimed to send out more and clearer messages to world leaders before they meet in Copenhagen in December to have a new global impact on curbing emissions of greenhouse gases. The UN Climate Panel says greenhouse gas emissions are warming the planet and will lead to more floods, droughts, heatwaves, rising sea levels and animal and plant extinctions. World emissions have risen by about 70 percent since the 1970s. In Shanghai, China's financial hub, floodlights to illuminate some 160 buildings , including the world's third tallest TV tower "Oriental Pearl" and the 492-meter-tall World Financial Center, also went down. Skyscrapers with glowing windows dominating the night skyline are usually considered symbols of modernization in China. But Saturday night, going dark became trendy. In many Shanghai outlets of international fast food chain KFC, people enjoyed candle-lit dinners after the restaurants dimmed lights. As everybody can see, this will send an important message to the world that people in China are becoming more aware of climate change issues. It's a very special night because it sends an environmental message to us, too. We hope such an activity will inspire everyone to make energy saving a daily habit. But in spite of this, not everyone is so convinced and agreeable. Some consider it a show for the moment. But I strongly support this kind of activity which may arouse people's concern about the environment by using less power .It is true that Earth Hour is just for one hour each year. One person may be small, but we can make difference if we work collectively to change our own behaviors. Anyway, the action showed millions of people want governments to work out a strong new U.N. deal to fight global warming , even though the global economic crisis has raised worries about the costs. We have been dreaming of a new climate deal for a long time. Now we're no longer so alone with our dream. We're sharing it with all these people switching off their lights. II. Writing (松江) Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. DIY (Do It Yourself) 现在越来越得到青睐。你愿意选择这一方式吗,请说出你的理由。 ?. Guided Writing (徐汇) Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你校的校报将新增一个英语版面(an English section)，主编Terry向全校同学广泛征求意见。 请你以Allen的名义给他写一封邮件，谈谈你希望在该版看到的内容和你的理由。 (注意:短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Guided Writing(25分)(闸北) Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions. (本题做在第二 卷答题纸上) 在人代会上，部分代表提出取消高考英语。谈谈你的看法并陈述理由。 (参考词汇:人代会 NPC 代表 deputy 高考entrance examination ) 3 二(写作评分 标准 excel标准偏差excel标准偏差函数exl标准差函数国标检验抽样标准表免费下载红头文件格式标准下载 : 档次 内容 语言 组织结构 A 9-10 9-10 4-5 B 7-8 7-8 3 C 5-6 5-6 2 D 3-4 3-4 1 E 0-2 0-2 0 1. 本题总分为25分, 其中内容10分, 语言10分, 组织结构5分。 2. 评分时应注意的主要方面: 内容要点, 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 3. 评分时, 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次, 然后对照相应的组织结构档次给予加分。 其中, 内容和语言两部分相加, 得15分或以上者,可考虑加4-5分, 15分以下者只能考虑加0, 1, 2, 3分。 4. 词数少于70, 总分最多不超过10分。 各档次给分要求: 内容部分 A. 内容充实，主题突出，详略得当。 B. 内容较充实，能表达出作文要求。 C. 内容基本充实，尚能表达出作文要求。 D. 漏掉或未能写清楚主要内容，有些内容与主题无关。 E. 明显遗漏主要内容，严重离题。 语言部分 A. 具有很好的语言表达能力, 语法结构正确或有些小错误，主要因为使用了较复杂结构或词汇所 致。 B. 具有较强的语言表达能力，语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确, 错误主要是因为尝试较复杂结构或词汇所致。 C. 有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 D. 语法结构与词汇错误较多，影响了对内容的理解。 E. 语法结构与词汇的错误很多，影响了对内容的理解。 组织结构部分 A. 自然地使用了语句间的连接成分, 全文流畅结构紧凑。句子结构多样，词汇丰富。 B. 能使用语句间连接成分, 全文流畅结构紧凑。句子结构多样，词汇较丰富。 C. 能使用简单的语句间连接成分, 全文内容连贯。句子结构有一定的变化，词汇使用得当。 D. 尚能使用语句间连接成分, 语言连贯性较差。句子结构单调，词汇较贫乏。 E. 缺乏语句间的连接成分, 语言不连贯。词不达意。 三(常用结构和句型 1. My view on … Model A People’s views/ideas/opinions on … vary from person to person. Some people think that …. They hold this opinion because … However, others hold that … 4 As to me, I’m in favor of the first/second idea. The following are the reasons for my choice/personal inclination. First, while it is true that …, it does not mean that … Besides, …. Admittedly, … but this is not to say that … Therefore/In a word/From the foregoing analysis, … Model B Different people have different views on … It is held that … but it is also held that … Those who hold the first opinion … In contrast, those who hold the second view … As to me, I agree with the latter opinion. Admittedly…, but this is not to say that … Model C When asked about a theme, different people will offer different opinions. … is no exception. Some people take it for granted/ say/ think/ believe that … However, others hold that … As for as I am concerned, I am in favor of the second view. The reasons are as follows: First, there is an element of truth that … but it doesn’t follow that … A case in point if that … Therefore, the first view doesn’t hold water/ cannot bear much analysis/ can’t stand up to close examination. In conclusion, … 2. Advantages vs Disadvantages Nowadays … play(s) an important part/role in …., and … is/are popular around us. Like everything else, … has/have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. First, … Besides… Most important of all, … Bust every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, …. To make matters worse/ Worst of all, … Through the above analysis, I believe that the advantages/ positive aspects outweigh the disadvantages/ negative ones. There … 3. How to … Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problems, but the following ones may be most effective. First of all, …. 5 Besides/ Another way to solve the problem of … is … Finally, … These are not the best and the only two/three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take strong actions to … 4. A or B Model A When we/you… we/you will be faced with the choice between A or B. Before making the right choice, we/you had better make a close comparison and contrast of them. First all, A … also B … Secondly, A… Likewise, B… Despite their similarities, A and B are also different in the following aspects. First, A … However, B … Besides, A … on the contrary, B … Therefore, it depends on … what we/you choose. If we/you … we/you should choose A, but if we/you …, we/you should turn to B. Model B When we …, it is inevitable to meet the choice between a and B. We would be regarded as inconsiderate if we rushed our decision without comparing or contrasting them. First/First of all/ To begin with, both A and B … However, B … Besides/Moreover/In addition/What’s more, A … However/In contrast/On the contrary/On the other hand, … Finally, the most striking difference is that A … while B … Therefore, it is not different to make a right choice now. If we …, we will choose A, but if we …, we will turn to B. In a word, the key lies in … 5. Why … Model A Nowadays/ Recently there is an increasing number of …./ Nowadays, … is becoming increasingly popular among …. There can be many reasons/causes for … but in general, they come down to three major ones. For one thing, … For another, … 6 Perhaps the prime reason/cause is that … From the foregoing analysis, we may conclude that … Model B There are many factors that may account for/contribute to/responsible for the reason why …, but the following are the most typical ones. First, … Besides/ Furthermore/Moreover/In addition/What’s more, … Most important of all/ Above all/ Last but not least, … All in all/ In conclusion/ To sum up/ To conclude, … 四(写好高考英语作文之关键: 动笔之前,首先必须针对提示的文字或图片认真审题,然后组织内容,构思提纲,理顺思路,切忌想到哪里就写到哪里,一定要避免累赘繁琐、条理不清、重点不突出的情况发生。 1. 注意语言 规范 编程规范下载gsp规范下载钢格栅规范下载警徽规范下载建设厅规范下载 ,注意正确用词用句,强调使用课本上学到过的单词、词组和佳句,保证文章简洁通顺,切忌使用冷僻的单词,特别是必须避免使用不规范的中文式表达。尽量不要翻来覆去地使用已用过的词汇、句型和句子。 2. 正确判断时态,语态的应用,不能交叉混杂,随意乱用。 3. 注意单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等正确性,避免不必要的失误;注意句子中人称，主谓与时态的一致性 4( 考试时,尽量注意书写端正和卷面整洁。 记叙文的写作要领: 记叙文按内容大致可分为"记实"和"描写"两大类型。前者重在讲清事件本身,只要根据提示叙述清楚即可,无需太多的描写或表达个人的感受。后者则重在描写细节,围绕时间、地点、人物及事件的起因、经过和结果来展开,应该有个人的感受和看法。与汉语的记叙文类似,写英语记叙文时也要注意正确分段(分层次)。开头句(topic sentence)要有新意,否则就变成了翻译句子。结尾句(concluding sentence)要能首尾呼应,并有升华主题之效果。在正确分层次的基础上,紧扣主题展开叙述,详略要得当，千万不能离题 记叙文通常以一般过去时为主,根据上下文用各种时态。在行文时,避免重复 同一动词。在无法避免时,可用该动词的近义词或相应的词组来代替,使文章更生动。使用直接引语也是记叙文的一个特点,但须慎用,不可太多。此外,可选择以第一或第三人称来展开叙述,以达到更好的效果。要注意运用课文所学过的词语或句型,以减少错误。 议论文的写作要领: 议论文是通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张。作者为了使读者同意他的看法,提出若干道 理来说服他人。 议论文的写作方法: 1. 引言,确立一个准确、鲜明的中心论点。 写议论文的目的不是让读者知道或认识某件事物,而是要让读者同情或者接受自己的观点和看法。因此,一个鲜明的论点是全文的主旨、灵魂、统帅。为了达到这一目的,写作者要利用各种可能的手段(或描写,或对比,或分类)将问题说明清楚。 7 2. 主体段,也就是论证的过程。 要写好议论文,就要讲究好的论证方法。欠缺的论证方法,会使论据显得苍白无力,论点站不住脚,因而不能使人同意你的观点。一般说来,有两种方法可以采用,一是逻辑说理,即"晓之以理";一是从感情上打动他人,即"动之以情"。这两种方法并不是孤立地出现,往往是你中有我,我中有你。除此之外,我们还可以运用引证法(即引用一些名人名言、成语、格言、谚语等作为论据)、例证法(即举一些例子来进行论证)、喻证法(用比喻的方法来论证事理,把深奥、抽象的事理表述得浅显易懂,使文章既生动又形象)、对比论证(通过对事物的正反两个方面的对比来 分析 定性数据统计分析pdf销售业绩分析模板建筑结构震害分析销售进度分析表京东商城竞争战略分析 论证,使文章的表达效果更强烈,给人留下深刻的印象)。 3. 结论,用一、二句话来结束文章,尽量能做到首尾呼应。 说明文的写作要领 说明文是以说明为主要表达方式的一种文体,通过对事物的特征、性质、形态、功能、原理、来源、成因、发展的解说,让人们清楚明白那些事理。它不同于记叙文,不要求像记叙文那样详详细细、有头有尾、富有文采地记述一件事和一个人,而只要对人、事及某方面的知识作一些必要的介绍、说明即可。因此,若介绍人物、说明事理、介绍知识,均可以用这种文体。说明文的基本特点是内容的科学性、说明的条理性和语言的准确性。常见的说明文有:知识介绍、商品介绍、解说词、说明书、内容提要等。它们只客观地介绍、解释,使读者获得知识和信息,而并不需要发表主张。常见的说明文写作方法有定义、注释、举例、分类、比较、引用、叙述、数字分析和综合等。说明文大都用一般现在时。在写作时要求充分利用提示,语句简练,选词正确,表达清晰和层次分明。写好说明文应注意以下几个方面: 1. 仔细观察,抓住事物的个性特征。 2. 安排好合理的说明顺序,如空间顺序、时间顺序、逻辑顺序、认识顺序。 3. 选用恰当的说明方法将各要点连接成句子,如定义(by definition)、举例(by example)、比较或对比(by comparison or contrast)、类比〈by classification〉、分析(by analysis)、说明(by illustration)、叙述(by narration)。 4. 运用适当过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来,如: 表示时间顺序的: then, now, soon, afterwards, later等。 表示程序、动作过程的 让first, second, firstly, secondly, first of all, next, at first, at last等。 表示递进的: what's more, once more, what is worse, in addition, besides, even 等。 表示解释和说明的:namely, for example, for instance, actually, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, that is (to say),according to this, for this reason等。 表示比较、对比的:just as, just like, more or less, sooner or later, on the contrary, on the other hand等。 表示总结的: finally, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short, as you know, in the end 在使用过渡词时，须根据上下文需要适当选择，不可牵强附会。 8 9