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null高分写作高分写作高分句型高分作文高分作文高分句型 高分短语 思维方式高分句型高分句型If I become famous, I needn’t to worry about my life problems. I may have a lot of money, so I can buy a car and give my father and my mother. And I also can do what I like. I may run a little company, and use some money to help the poor children in rural areas. And I can establish some Hope Primary School.nullIf I become famous, I needn’t to worry about my life problems. I may have a lot of money. Then I can buy a car and give my father and my mother. And I also can do what I like. I may run a little company, and use some money to help the poor children in rural areas. And I can establish some Hope Primary School.1.句子开头单调：I 2.短句过多，无长句 3.句型简单：主+谓+宾口语化！高分句型高分句型 基本 要求 对教师党员的评价套管和固井爆破片与爆破装置仓库管理基本要求三甲医院都需要复审吗 ： 开头多样化 写长句 句式复杂化开头多样化开头多样化分词开头 Exhausted, I slumped into a chair. Not knowing what should be done next, I consult many of my friends. Running to raise funds for a charity gives you a sense of unselfishness. To be a better students, I determined to never to underachieve again. 短语开头短语开头Afraid of being cheated, I turned my back on that stranger. Regardless of any kind of difficulties, keeping a good mood helps you keep cool and find solutions in a sensible way. Compared with hanging out with the friends in a real life, meeting net friends could be risk-taking. Apart from the benefits of building up your confidence, you could find other benefits in your volunteering work. Owing to, as a result of, so as to, in spite of, in terms of, in light of , on the contrary; as we all know, so far as I know, short of, at the risk of状语从句开头状语从句开头Much as the internet provide a wealth of information, people cannot trust every piece of it. Assuming everyone associate with friends through the unfeeling screen of computer , how does the world look like? In as much as we are living in the real world, indulging in the virtual world is misleading even dangerous. 使用稀有连接词 ! ! !使用稀有连接词 ! ! !Because In as much as, in that, considering Although Much as, in spite of the fact that, granted/granting, for all (that) If provided that, on condition that, supposing/assuming With / Without开头With / Without开头With the popularity of personal computers and the advancement of internet technology, young generation are eager to embrace every new experience in the virtual world. With the rapid development of economy, … With the remarkable improvement of people’s living standards, … With the steady growth of… Without the teachers’ help, I could not overcome my weakness . Without the press, students cannot have enough impetus to work harder. 主语从句开头主语从句开头Who you meet in the virtual world cannot be totally trusted. What they said may be quite different from the truth. How you get a new friend is not as important as what kind of person he or she is. That I was able to help others gave me senses of self-worth and achievement.There, It 开头There, It 开头There are few things more satisfying than helping people in need. There are potential dangers to making friends online. There has been a good deal of controversy as to whether PC games should be prohibited. It is especially beneficial for people to keep a good mood. It does harm in several ways if we make friends online. It is reported now China has 4.5 million registered volunteers having provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. 数字开头数字开头Several factors should be taken into account when it comes to staying healthy. Few people would feel unhappy when providing timely help to the needy person. The 21 century has witnessed the rapid development in China. 4.5 million registered volunteers are reported to provide more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work in China. 练习（1）练习（1）Some people disagree to make friends on the net. 前加/改： Having been cheated on the net before, Afraid of been cheated, In as much as some people are afraid of being cheated, they What they disagree is to make friends on the net. There are some people against making friends on the net. It is undeniable that there do exist some people against making friends on the net. 2/3 of parents disagree to make friends on the net. 写长句写长句向前、向后 向前：句前加从句、分词、介词短语 从句：状语从句 向后：句后加从句、分词、介词短语、并列句 从句：状语从句、定语从句、同位语从句 and, but, or, so加并列句加并列句使用稀有连接词（2） , and while, whereas , but however, still, nevertheless , or otherwise , so therefore, thus, hence, yet Making friends online is a matter of excitement and curiosity, nevertheless it may involve deceits and traps. Making friends online may involve deceits and traps, hence everyone has to be cautious. Everyone has to be cautious of making friends online, otherwise you may be at risk of being treated.加状语从句加状语从句The world will become cold and dull providing everyone associate with friends through the unfeeling screen of computer. One of my friends was addicted to the net games and failed almost every examination, so that he was kicked out of school. He turned on the computer the moment he arrived back from school. He played truant in as much as he wanted to play internet games with virtual mates.-ing分词 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 并列Party animals spend many of their nights in different parties. They had a great time both with friends and strangers there. Party animals spend many of their nights in different parties, having great time both with friends and strangers there. Working people normally sleep at night. Party animals sleep during the day. Working people normally sleep at night, party animals sleeping during the day. 同一主语：-ing；不同主语：独立主格结构 -ing分词表并列加定语从句who, whose, which, (that) where, when, why , 非限定性定于从句---最安全 Party animals sleep during the day. Party animals sleep during the day, who spend many of their nights in different parties. Party animals sleep during the day, when others work or study hard. 同一主语，同一宾语；有时间状语，有地点状语 加定语从句加with结构，表havingParty animals spend many of their nights in different parties. They had lots of friends talking and playing there. Party animals spend many of their nights in different parties, with lots of friends talking and playing there. Library is an ideal place for study, without any voices I do not want to hear. 加with结构，表having加with结构，表having（2）He wrote 5 books in his life. One of them were published. He wrote 5 books in his life, with only one published. The teacher has talked with 20 students. She has 5 more students to communicate with. The teacher has talked with 20 students, with 5 more to communicate with. I published 2 articles last week. I am about to publish other 3 this week. I published 2 articles last week, with 3 more to be published this week.加with结构，表having（2）练习（2）练习（2）Children spend much time on the net. 后加： , and they get addicted to it. , hence they spend less time on study. , in as much as they are too young to control themselves. , regardless of parents’ warnings. , chatting with people they do not know. , with abundant energy and time wasted. , which is abundant in unhealthy information and tempting online games. 句式复杂化 特殊句式句式复杂化 特殊句式强调句型（It’s …that…）（so…that…） 伴随句型（the more… the more…; the more… the less…） 倒装句型（Young as he is; Only…; No sooner had I offered…, than…） 比喻句型（都肯定Just as… so…, Just like…；都否定no…more than） 对比句型 not so much…as/ not more than 虚拟语气（if） 插入语 （同位语，定从，连词however/ therefore） 多样否定 nullIt is talking and playing with the friends in the real world that can actually improve your interpersonal skills. The internet is so tempting that the more you are exposed to it, the more you cannot resist it. No sooner had I stepped into the orphanage, than I felt the children's curiosity and excitement. If the net addicts spent more time in the real world, their lives would be more colorful and healthy. Just as motor is to car, so press is to students. （比喻！） nullNobody can totally trust net friends more than the dieters believe advertisements of the diet pill. （都否定，强调前者。比喻！） Net addicts do not really want to make friends more than just evade from the reality. （否定前者，肯定后者。比较！rather than） Net addicts do not so much want to make more friends as just evade from the reality. To Play world, however, can actually improve your with friends in the real interpersonal skills, especially your facial expressions and gestures. A net friend, who you do not know very well, may deceive you without the fear of being discovered. 多样否定多样否定No, not 否定副词 Never, hardly 否定动词 fail, lack, have yet to, 比较级 + than（should know better than）, deprive… of 否定主语 Nobody, none of you; few, little 否定表语 /作状语 Short/ absent / devoid of free from, far from, beyond, ignorant of, reluctant to, but for, without nullWe do not have any evidence. We never have any evidence. We have yet to get any evidence. We fail to get any evidence. We lack enough evidence. None of us have any evidence. Little evidence has been found. We are devoid of evidence. Short of evidence,…nullYou should know better than to play football in the classroom. You are wiser than to do such a thing. His name escaped me. His name is beyond my memory. Your work is far from satisfactory. Students are reluctant to study in this way. But for his help, I could succeed nowadays. Surfing on the net deprives people of much time to communicate with family members. 总结总结写长、写复杂： 主句前加，后加，中间特殊句式 前加（主语多样化）：分词、状语短语、状语从句、主语从句，with，there/it，数字 后加：and/nevertheless连接词、定语从句、-ing、with…done/to do 中间：强调、倒装、虚拟、伴随、对比、比喻、插入、多样否定练习（3）练习（3） Children spend much time playing games on the net. 中间复杂化： Children spend so much time playing games on the net that it greatly affects their eyesight. The more time child spent on the net, the more they are addicted to the net./ …, the less on the study. Most of child do not spend so much time learning as playing on the net. Resourceful as the internet is, it is not wise for children… If every child in China did not spend any time on the net, there would be less short-sighted students in school. None of children should spend much time playing games on the net more than adults spend money gambling in casinos. Children, especially pupils, who do not have a strong ability to control themselves, are not wise to spend …