Misunderstanding范文

如有侵权，请联系网站删除，仅供学习与交流【精品文档】第PAGE8页Misunderstanding范文精修范文1：Assignmentdirections:AnIncidentofMisunderstandingThinkaboutanincidentofmisunderstandingbetweenyouandyourparents.Writeastoryabouttheexperienceandtellwhathappened.Givealogicalorderorsequencetotheevents.Includeinterestingdetailsandconcretewords.Inyourconclusion,writeabouthowyourexperiencehelpedyouunderstandyourparents,yourself,orasituation.AStoryofGenerationGapWiththedevelopmentofthe删除thesociety,generationgapbecomesmuchmoreobviousespeciallybetweenparents and children.Thereisalackofunderstandingbetweenparentsandchildren.While删除parentscannotapproveofwhattheirchildrenwanttosayanddo,Thus,abiggenerationgapisformed.Ieverhavehadanexperienceaboutit.（第一段开门见山，点出了文章的主题“generationgap“，并且指出了原因。最后一句为下文的故事叙述做了铺垫。）Afewyearsago, whenIwas14yearsold,Iwasfondof beautifulclothesatthattime,soIalwayswenttoclothesshoptotryonallkindsofclothes.OnOnedayinsummer,IselectedabeautifulskirtwhichIwasverylikelikedverymuch,butitwasveryexpensive.Onmywayto删去home,Ithoughtwhether加入nomattermymotheragreeornot,Imustbuythatskirt.WhenIgothome,IdirectlywalkedtomymotherandimmediatelytoldherthatIhadastrongdisiredesiretobuyaskirt.Mymotheraskedme:“Askirt?Howmuchisit?"Ianswered:“Itcosts100yuan."Mymotherkeptsilentforawhile,then加入andIbeginedbegantoangrilyaskmymother:“Whyaredonotyouletmebuythatskirt?Ilikeitsomuch!"Atthesametime,Iamcryingloudlyasiflosingmyfavoritetoys.  Irantomyroomandlockedthedoor.Aftherthat,Iamnottalkwithmymotherforalongtime.（第二段故事叙述比较清楚，词汇和句式也较丰富，只是有一些语法错误。）Withgrowingup,IknowthathownaiveamIIamatthatmoment, 应为句号 Ialsofellfeelsorrytomymother.IfIwereatthattimenow,Iwouldbe删除peacefullytellmymotherwhatIwanttodo.Whatismore,IknowthatIneedtocommunicatewithmymotheralwaysandthatweshouldopenourheartsandtrytounderstandeachother.Inaddition,Ioughttochangemymotherandlearntotalkwithotherspeacefullyandgently.IhopethatIwillbe删除haveabetterrelationshipwithmyparentsZhangyingyuan（第三段着重描述自己的感悟和从中吸取的经验，是全文出彩点，也较好的呼应了开头。）评语：本文严格按照写作主题和 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展开，内容充实，叙事清晰，词汇和句型丰富，很好！希望今后尽量避免一些不必要的语法错误，因为这会影响读者对你文章的整体印象。精修范文2：AnIncidentofMisunderstanding(薛媛媛小组)Beingajuniorstudent,Iwasstubbornandrebelliousandfeltthateverythingwasinmyway.Becauseofmybrother'sdroppingoutofschool,myfatherexpectedsomuchofmeandthushealwaystoldmethatIshouldstudyhard,whichmademeangryandaggressive.Icouldnotendureanymoreandthelaststrawwaswhenwewereallattable,fatherrepeatedthesamewordsagain.Then,Icouldnothelpquarrellingwithhimandsayingmanydisrespectfulwords.Finally,Irushedoutoftheroomwithaviolentslamofthedoor.Goingnowhere,Ihadnowheretogo.Thus,bythetimethedarkfell,Iwenthome.MothertoldmethatFatherdidn'teatatallandevencriedlikealittlebabywhenIwasleft.Today,asauniversityfreshman,recallingwhathadhappened,Ifeelsosorry.I精修范文3：(姜文于小组)AftertheCollegeEntranceExamination,IreallyfelttiredandanxiousandworriedwhatgradeIwouldface.Duringthattime,Icouldn'tsleepandeatwelldayandnight.Gradually,Ibecamespeechless.Whenevermyparentsandothersaskedmesomethingaboutmyexamination,Ialwayssaidfewwordsornothing.Asaresult,theyhavetoleave.Oneday,myfatheraskedmewhatgradeIwouldgetpossibly.Istillkeptsilentasusual.Thenhebecameangrywithmyresponseandscoldedmeformyimpoliteness.Suddenly,IburstintotearsandspokeoutwhatIfearedandhowexhaustedIfelt.Aftermyfatherlearntofmyexplanation,heapologizedtomeforwhathehaddone.Eventually,werestoredgoodrelationsagain.Fromthenon,nomatterwhattheyaskedme,IwilltellmyparentswhatIamthinkingaboutandwhatIwanttodo,becauseIknowtheyloveandcareaboutmealltheway.However,nowmoreandmorechildrenareunwillingtocommunicatewiththeirparentsandtheysupposeitisgenerationgapthatpreventsthemtocommunicatewithoneother.Ifwesimplysaynothing,theywillbeanxiousaboutus.参考范文1：AMisunderstandingbetweenmyMotherandMeWecanseethatmanychildrenclaimthattheirparentscan'tunderstandthem.Itisdifficulttocommunicatewiththeirparents.Infact,themisunderstandingexistsineveryfamily.OnetimewhenIwasinjuniorschool,IgavemymothertheexaminationpaperwhichIgotagoodmark,expectingtohearthepraisefromher.However,shesawitcarefullyandthenfixedhereyesonthemistakesImade.Shepointedatthemistakesandsaid,"Lookatthisquestion;itreflectshowcarelessyouare."Youcan'timaginehowdepressedIwas.BecauseIfeltthatIwasn'tbeacknowledgedbymymother.ThisremindedmeofthesameincidentIhavemetinthepast.Tearsfilledmyeyes;Iyelledatmymother,"Shutup,nomatterhowwellIdo,youjustfindtheweakness.Ican'tstandit."Irunoutoftheroom,leavingheralonewithastonished.Afterthatday,mymotherhadalongtalkwithme.Shesaid,"I'mdelightedtoseewhatyouhaveachieved.ButIjusthopethatyoucandobetter."Hearingherwords,Iheldmymothertightly.    Fromthismisunderstanding,Icometorealizemymother'sdeeploveforme.Shechoosestopointoutmyweakness,sometimesevenhurtme.Itisnotbecauseshedoesn'tloveme,butgivemethecouragetodobetter.HuaLijia参考范文1：NeverhurtyourparentsItisnotuncommontohear"generationgap"betweenchildrenandparents.Inmyopinion,lotsofincidentsarisefrommisunderstanding.Ofcourse,Ialsohavesomeincidentswithmyparents.Nowletmetoshareyouoneofthestories.Inthepast,IenjoyedwatchingTVwhiledoingmyhomework.It'sausualday,IwaswritingmyhomeworkwhilewatchingTV.Thistimemymothercamein,shelookedveryangry.SheturnedofftheTVaftershoutingatme.Inmymemory,mymotherwasaveryfriendlywoman.Shebynomeanstalkedtomesoloudly.Icouldnotacceptit.SoIcriedloudlyandlockedmyselfinmyroom.Maybemymotherwasoverangry.Shedidn'tcaremycrying,whichmademecrazy.IrushedoutmyroomandsaidthatIhatedher.Atthesametime,Isawthetearsfallingfrommymother'seyes.Ifeltverysorryformywrongwords.Ihuggedmymotherinmyarmsandsaidsorrytoher.Afterafewminutes,mymothersaidthatmaybesheusedawrongwaybutshereallywantedmetochangemybadhabit.  Icouldalsofeltmymother'ssorrowthoughshetriedtosmiletome.IpromisedthatIdidn'tdothatlater.Mothersaidthatshelovedmeandbelievedme.Withmymother'shelp,Ichangedthisbadhabitfinally.Ireallythanksmymother.  Fromthisexperience,Ilearnthatsomewordscan'tbesaidtoyourparents.Becausetheymustbethepeoplewhowillloveyouwithnoself-heart.Sometimes,yousaysomewordsunconsciouslymayhurtyourparentsdeeply.Youcanneverhurtyourparents.LiangXiaomei